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Melissa4Bella -> =DF= The 13th 13th War Commentary Thread (9/6/2013 18:39:17)

All comments for the stories, poems, and battle hymns for this war go here. If you would like to make a story of your own, post it in the =DF= The 13th 13th War Thread



UnderSoul -> RE: =DF= The 13th 13th War Commentary Thread (9/6/2013 19:25:54)

I will definitely write a story, but at the moment I simply present the title. Scorpio is my first DF War Story, but I'm no stranger to AE war stories in general, so I hope this turns out okay.

Update: Started a little teaser thing. A little information, some (mostly pointless) dialogue, a bit of insight into just how Scorpio thinks. The rest of the story will make up for the fact that 70-90% of this feels like, and probably is, filler.

Update 2: Added the second part of the story, some more insight and a taste of combat. hardly that even, but I promise that the next part will have more combat, and larger battles.



bokterier -> RE: =DF= The 13th 13th War Commentary Thread (9/7/2013 13:32:27)

First time I've made story... This was kind of fun too! :D



UnderSoul -> RE: =DF= The 13th 13th War Commentary Thread (9/7/2013 15:20:39)

Added another part, simply titled "War". Some epic combat, and you get to see the Dark Guardian defend his honour.



Jaden -> RE: =DF= The 13th 13th War Commentary Thread (9/8/2013 9:22:19)

Well, my story is up. I will certainly try to add another part before the war is done.




Faerdin -> RE: =DF= The 13th 13th War Commentary Thread (9/8/2013 12:58:02)

I would post longer commentary, but I want to be brief and head back to the war. xD

Words cannot quite capture the feeling of knowing I fight beside other experienced warrior-poets and writers.

@bok: Fun is the name of the game! ^_^



UnderSoul -> RE: =DF= The 13th 13th War Commentary Thread (9/8/2013 20:57:18)

@Faerdin I'm glad to know that I'm in that group. Also, your poem is truly a masterpiece of wartime literature. Wonderful work!



flashbang -> RE: =DF= The 13th 13th War Commentary Thread (9/8/2013 22:16:57)

quote:

First time I've made story... This was kind of fun too! :D

Join us!

I might make a war story.



bokterier -> RE: =DF= The 13th 13th War Commentary Thread (9/9/2013 3:35:01)

@Flashbang: Sure, I've always wanted to start making stories in this community. The people here is really nice and supportive! :D

*Looks at the other stories and poems*
...
You are much better than I will ever be!
I mean. Look at it!



Chaosweaver Amon -> RE: =DF= The 13th 13th War Commentary Thread (9/9/2013 14:26:09)

I'm about to start a war short-story guys! I hope you like it [:)]

Finished it! Might extend it if I get an idea. Enjoy!



bokterier -> RE: =DF= The 13th 13th War Commentary Thread (9/10/2013 17:14:19)

Great story, Amon! Is your character an chaosweaver?



UnderSoul -> RE: =DF= The 13th 13th War Commentary Thread (9/10/2013 17:51:04)

Just added a new section. More drama than action, Shocking Revelations is the perfect transition to the later half of the war.



Chaosweaver Amon -> RE: =DF= The 13th 13th War Commentary Thread (9/10/2013 22:34:58)

@Bokterier Amon, the tall silver haired one is. Grimlon is a DragonWarrior. I think I'll add another section to it with a story from Amon's point of view.

I added another section; same beginning chapter, different point of view. I might make this into a decent little story, eh?



UnderSoul -> RE: =DF= The 13th 13th War Commentary Thread (9/11/2013 21:44:07)

Added another chapter, Turmoil. not particularly important, but it serves as more set-up for the eventual climax and the interesting psychological make-up of the Dark Guardian, Scorpio.



Stephen Nix -> RE: =DF= The 13th 13th War Commentary Thread (9/13/2013 15:54:03)

Just finished up my quick story, read up if you like!



UnderSoul -> RE: =DF= The 13th 13th War Commentary Thread (9/14/2013 12:03:50)

I have officially finished my story! I hope you all read it and comment as you see fit.



Chaosweaver Amon -> RE: =DF= The 13th 13th War Commentary Thread (9/14/2013 20:31:13)

Well, I'm going to finish off my war story! I hope you all like it! EDIT: Sorry, was distracted from it. The second to last part is up now, I'm finishing it now!



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