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cerebus141 -> Grandma's Cookies (and other future works) Comments (10/4/2013 3:22:05)

This is the comments thread for my poetry, found here.

Written in slam poetry style, similar to Shane Koyczan, which, if you don't know, please listen to his poems on YouTube, because they're more powerful than mine could ever be.

Please, if you take the time to read the poem and visit this thread, also take the time to leave a comment.

Cheers



Crystal Sunshyne -> RE: Grandma's Cookies (and other future works) Comments (10/9/2013 1:25:42)

You make me smile :) Thank you for your optimism.



cerebus141 -> RE: Grandma's Cookies (and other future works) Comments (10/14/2013 21:04:14)

Thank you for your smile. It's worth more than any poem I could write.

New one is up, called Priorities.



Crystal Sunshyne -> RE: Grandma's Cookies (and other future works) Comments (10/14/2013 23:37:48)

I just read it, and I am afraid that I must disagree because 1. your poetry is awesome and 2. one smile is not worth nearly as much as the poem that might cause an unknown number of other smiles as well. If the worth of a poem were to be defined by the number of smiles it caused (which is about as accurate or inaccurate a description as any when it comes to defining the value of something like poetry) then my smile could only add to, but never exceed, the worth of your poem :)



cerebus141 -> RE: Grandma's Cookies (and other future works) Comments (10/18/2013 4:07:02)

Thanks, for the compliments, honestly. I appreciate that my words are appreciated.

New poem up, called Transatlantic Movements.



cerebus141 -> RE: Grandma's Cookies (and other future works) Comments (10/31/2013 2:25:50)

New one, called Post-Utopian. I might change the title, as it's a bit too obvious. The ending is also weak, so I might do something with that.
If anyone has any advice or suggestions, I welcome them with open arms.



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