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BJEBLE -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/20/2014 22:44:15)

@Warden No just farm with another character.Like Templar or Aqueous, as long as you're accomplishing something then it's better than Refresh farming.




Gorillo Titan -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/20/2014 22:59:04)

spent over 400k on gold just to get an earthquake then after a 30 minute conversation come to the conclusion that Moutain strike is better than earthquake only have 2k left >.> have to farm before CC changes now [:@]




Agaraoth2 -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/20/2014 23:34:02)

Either its me or does love machine run into a lot of female characters




The Jop -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/20/2014 23:41:17)

You probably just notice it more.




megakyle777 -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 0:57:27)

Just in case people missed the several posts made already, the forum entries you have made need to go in the new Oversoul Water Contest entries thread, links to which can be found in the top section along with rules, or in the Official Contesta Forums section rather then the Char Suggestion one.[;)]




Megadragonknight -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 1:06:02)

Guys, please do comment my Hydra Dragon. I make lots of edition to the story thx to Megakyle for the feedback. May my Hydra Dragon be selected by Nulgath and then many players but I don't expect it to win. Here is the link to submit your entry.




DarkLore -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 1:08:26)

Anyone remember operation ninja kitty? MegaKyle knows what I'm talking about. LOL!




DidYouKnowThat -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 1:13:54)

@MDK: Pretty interesting character. . .a Hydra Dragon. . . .

Uhm, to make the backstory better, you could change things such as why the two men kept proceeding even though they heard this weird noise. . . .
And er, describe how it looks . . . .the Hydra Dragon. . .(Your character could be called HD. . .Lol xD)





Megadragonknight -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 1:17:58)

@DYKT
Thx for the feedback. I was so focused on Hydra Dragon that I can forget the two men were the main focus of alerting Hydra Dragon and found its existence.




DidYouKnowThat -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 1:20:19)

Yeah, take into consideration everything, since this is a storyline contest. . . .

And instead of using words like ''cool'' or something. . . .use better words. In my opinion it sounds better when you're trying to give detail about a deadly serpentine creature.





Megadragonknight -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 1:24:39)

There done all the stuff you had commented. I am ready for more comments. Still, I won't expect to win the contest but would still hope for it since we don't have any Hydra-theme character in OS.




DidYouKnowThat -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 1:38:04)

Yep, sounds great! But uhm:
Instead of ''and hope they will experience exciting stuff,'' how about ''and hope they will gain an exciting experience?'' Refrain from general words like 'cool' and 'stuff.'

Another example I got from your post was ->
''The story goes with 2 man went to explore a dark lake quite near to their hometown, Solace, for some exploration.''

Sounds a bit. . .off.

Instead of that, you CAN put ''The legend goes with two men who went exploring a dark lake quite near their hometown Solace, for some ???''

??? Can be -> Discoveries

or Treasure

or. . . .Artifacts?

Anything, but exploring for some exploration sounds a tad bit weird.




Megadragonknight -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 1:42:51)

..... I don't careeeee!! Nah, just joking. Noted that.

Edit: Those 2 men are adventurous, not a treasure hunter. But exploring is part of the adventure so exploring in any area around the world is no problem here. ;)




megakyle777 -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 1:45:17)

Your wording of stuff is a bit odd if that makes sense. For example, different tenses used where one should be the same, words like frighten instead of frightened, some spelling or usage errors, small stuff like that, but the small stuff can get in the way. Look at other entries then your own for a example of what i mean. But like I said, the tale itself is a good one and a char I'd love to see.[;)]




Megadragonknight -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 1:48:07)

Most importantly in a story, it have good tales itself and since its also characters some players like to see. But the content, words are also important and I had been aware of that. Will make some further improvement in my story. Thx for the comment.




Agaraoth2 -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 8:34:44)

Is TC rare now i haven't heard of anyone encountering it for a while




Megadragonknight -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 8:53:43)

@Agaraoth2
Nope, Treasure Chest is just too hard to encounter but not harder than Moose that's for sure. I managed to encounter and beat TC twice in Labyrinth Dungeon Map 2 just now. Surprised TC have new 3 hit combo animation. Well that's probably because I haven't encountered and fought TC for a long time.




Agaraoth2 -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 9:03:24)

i wish we could posses TC and i gives us a perk like double gold




Megadragonknight -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 9:07:05)

Yeah. :( I am so wanting to possess TC and gain its power but I guess there would possibly be another Treasure Chest-like character for us to possess. In OS, anything is possible for us to possess. AE and even OS defies logic but every AE games still follow the law of physics in someway.

Edit: I made an edition of my Hydra Dragon's quote. Plus I post a perfect example picture of how Hydra Dragon's appearance will look in OS. It don't fit with my description of Hydra Dragon's appearance but the picture is already the perfect description for Hydra Dragon's appearance. Of course, the full appearance can't be similar to that picture of Hydra Dragon but its somehow similar to it. Anyway, here is the link for easier path to Water Character Contest Submission Thread.

Edit2: If anyone needs a link for easier way to see other forumites' Water character suggestions, here is the link.




Agaraoth2 -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 12:09:25)

@MDK water needs some power ups but I think its the most balanced element so far.




Trollok!!! -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 14:33:19)

CC changed. Looks like I can get back to actually being able to obtain gold.




the warden -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 16:20:22)

so is there a release or have we heard anything?




Axel459 -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 16:22:09)

Yeah, I don't think there is going to be a release today




the warden -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 16:33:56)

axel459: :(




The Jop -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread 142 - READ THE FIRST POST (2/21/2014 17:45:14)

6 failed captures on Love Slime...I'm feeling pretty unlucky right now.




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