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LordDarkex -> Discussion for The Palace of the Paramount (6/4/2014 17:12:17) The Palace of the Paramount Discuss please Comments are greatly appreciated Inspired heavily by The Monstrumologist

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LordDarkex -> RE: Discussion for The Palace of the Paramount (8/16/2014 6:11:50) Reading this again, I realize that this story makes very little sense -- and yet I love this one the most out of everything I've done Changed "animus and animated" to "animus and re-animated" Changed the first "fourfolded heart" to "fourfolded heart, gently breathing" Changed "merry tune of the magma smoke" to just "tune of the magma smoke"

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