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LordDarkex -> Discussion for The Palace of the Paramount (6/4/2014 17:12:17)

The Palace of the Paramount

Discuss please
Comments are greatly appreciated

Inspired heavily by The Monstrumologist




LordDarkex -> RE: Discussion for The Palace of the Paramount (8/16/2014 6:11:50)

Reading this again, I realize that this story makes very little sense -- and yet I love this one the most out of everything I've done

Changed "animus and animated" to "animus and re-animated"
Changed the first "fourfolded heart" to "fourfolded heart, gently breathing"
Changed "merry tune of the magma smoke" to just "tune of the magma smoke"




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