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Zereldo -> Retreat (The Fall of Swordhaven) Discussion (6/6/2014 4:41:18)

here is the story http://forums2.battleon.com/f/tm.asp?m=21698164&mpage=1&key=� Discuss away :D




Laoch Anam -> RE: Retreat (The Fall of Swordhaven) Discussion (6/6/2014 8:55:42)

An enjoyable read. and could read more of your stuff. Only one thing though, you probably could have given the Chaos Dragon a more dramatic entrance into the piece :)




Kokujoe -> RE: Retreat (The Fall of Swordhaven) Discussion (6/6/2014 20:35:48)

Quite an interesting read, a job well done!
Will definitely try to check out some of your other works.



~Kokujoe ^__^b




Sir Nicholas -> RE: Retreat (The Fall of Swordhaven) Discussion (6/21/2014 18:09:02)

I like it. It's well done, and your grasp of grammar is spot-on. Keep going.




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