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nowras -> 2 New mission chains (7/20/2014 22:44:52)

1st Mission Chain: Don't help the wrong person. Number of missions :3

1st Mission : Venom Overdose.
Npc name : Bio Hazard ''lvl 28''
Text before completing the mission: Rawr!!! give me raawwr!! give a rawr!! give me a Health sludge
Text after completing the mission: Rawr!!! Thanks for the help Rawr!
Text while doing the mission: 1 health sludge
Reward: 800 credits

2nd Mission: Happy birth day.
Npc name: Naomi
Text before completing the mission: Titan's birth day is today. Bring me some cakes to make a surprise for him!
Text after completing the mission: That was a delicious cake, Titan was really happy.
Text while doing the mission: 1 Hank's cake
Reward: 900 credits

3rd Mission: Bring it back
Npc name: George Low
Text before completing the mission: A city guard stole a part of my new battle suit bring it back and ill reward you.
Text after completing the mission: I think you helped the wrong person! I'll destroy you and all the others when I complete my battle suit.
Text while doing the mission: 1 battle suit part (45% drop chance from any city guard)
Reward: 1000 credits

2nd mission chain: Meet the big boss

1st mission: Train up for the big meeting!:
Npc name: Valestra
Text before completing the mission: The big boss told me to bring to him a strong person cause the big boss only accept meeting strong people, so let me see If you're strong or not! So my mission to you is defeating Titan 3 times.
Text after completing the mission: Well I think you're strong enough to meet the big boss but you didn't finish your training yet. Ill send you to Nightwrath to be sure of that.
Text while doing the mission: 3 kills
Reward : 2000 credits

2nd mission: Break the hazard.
Npc name: Nightwrath
Text before completing the mission: The road to meet the big boss is full of blood and monsters. Go kill the Armor hazard If you can, well If you cant kill him , then you're not ready to meet him yet.
Text after completing the mission: So you passed the 2nd test. Now I have one more mission for you then I'll send you to Alydriah.
Text While doing the mission: 1 kill
Reward: 1500 credits

3rd mission: Do you think its easy?
Npc name: Nightwrath
Text before completing the mission: So I heard that George low is making a new battle suit. I think you should stop him before he does because he will be unbeatable If he uses the new battle suit. I want you to remember It's a part of your training ,too.
Text after completing the mission: Ok good job now you should go to Alydriah to train you.
Text while doing the mission: 1 kill
Reward : 1750 credits

4th mission: One more step.
Npc name: Alydriah
Text before completing the mission: Oh so your the person who Nightwrath told me about. If you want to meet the big boss you will need to defeat Administrator 11.
Text after completing the mission: Good job! now It's time for your final mission before meeting the big boss.
Text While doing the mission: 1 kill
Reward: 2000 credits

5th mission: It's time for the big meeting!
Npc name: Alydriah
Text before completing the mission: It's your only chance to meet the big boss so don't miss it. Defeat the Exile Leader.
Text after completing the mission: So you have completed your training! The big boss name is Baelius. Now go to him and he will tell you what to do!
Text while doing the mission: 2 kills
Reward: 2250 credits

6th mission: Can you defeat fear it self?
Npc name: Baelius
Text before completing the mission: So you're the ''strong'' person that Valestra, Nightwrath and Alydriah were talking about. Let's see how strong are you, defeat Armor Hazard without a partner to help you. If you defeat him I'll reward you but i don't think you can cause only a few people can defeat our pet.
Text after completing the mission: Oh well so your not bad. ok now let's see if you can complete the next mission I'll give to you.
Text While doing the mission: 1 kill
Reward: 5000 credits

7th mission: YoU CAnT Do It.
Npc name: Baelius
Text before completing the mission: So It's your last mission If you complete it , I'll give you a big BIG reward. You have to kill Saeva Lionhart till he drops his sword.
Text after completing the mission: You're the real person who I was looking for I was going to punish Alydriah , Nightwrath and valestra if you failed.
Text While doing the mission: 1 Lionhart scepter
Reward: I'm the big boss Achievement (4000 rating)

Armor hazard: armor hazard is not that hard to solo i have solo'd him several times. He must give an achievement when defeating him 3500 rating and there must be a ''Hard Mode'' icon for solo'ing him.

~.Darkness Lord.
Omega record 237 wins 97.7% (4 losses of connection lost)



DeathGuard -> RE: 2 New mission chains (7/20/2014 23:04:41)

I will start with an introduction of how mission chains are done.
Every mission chain has a goal: To entertain the player by reading an introduction text to the mission, giving him an objective to complete and then the player reads the mission end text to know how the mission result was. There is an important element to mission chains: The coherence of the flow of the missions must follow some sort of plot.

quote:

e.g. Mission Chain starts by recollecting sources to build a cannon throughout the whole mission chain and in the end, probably in the last 2 missions, you would have to beat the Final Boss and then in the last mission you would activate the cannon you built to destroy completely the Final Boss that was a danger to Delta V.

This is an example of an idea I wrote for a mission chain so please refrain from copying it but there's nothing wrong to take it as a reference but be sure to give me credits.
Just joking. Try different ideas on the themes on mission chains as it gives variety and uniqueness entertains players.

You could also rework your mission chain layout and make it more organized since I actually felt lazy to read the missions you wrote when I first saw them e.g. tl;dr.

You could use a similar layout:
quote:

Mission Chain Name:

  • Mission Number:
    Mission Name:
    NPC (the one who has the mission):
    Introduction Text:
    Item Required: (This should contain a clear description of what the mission requires to be completed e.g. some sort of lost iron tube, a missile ammo, etc.) Also this could be either PvP Wins as in general, in specific as 1 vs 1 wins, 2 vs 2 wins or challenges.
    Mission End Text:
    Reward: (They could be either Credits, Arcade Tokens, Items, Achievements or Weapons/Armors(Usually given on the conclusion of the mission)


    • One of my advices, try to make mission text longer and try to give the player a nice read so he can follow the flow of the story while doing the missions and don't exaggerate the rewards or the ratings of the achievement being awarded.

    Hopefully my post will help you further to improve.

    P.D: Be careful of your grammar! If you write with the correct grammatical rules, your mission chains will be more pleasant to read so try your best in that aspect.

    ~Hatred Cuirass
    Guest Artist of ED



    nowras -> RE: 2 New mission chains (7/20/2014 23:18:51)

    Well @DeathGuard you are right I'll edit it soon I was writing so fast cause it was Power hour Thanks for your info.



    DeathGuard -> RE: 2 New mission chains (7/20/2014 23:30:49)

    @Nowras: Glad I could be of help and you're welcome.



    nowras -> RE: 2 New mission chains (7/21/2014 0:58:58)

    Ok now i have done editing it. Thanks again for the help



    DeathGuard -> RE: 2 New mission chains (7/21/2014 1:30:21)

    Now I will introduce other fundamental element of mission chains: Lore Friendly
    I will take some example from your mission chain and explain it to you.
    Reading through your missions, I noticed you made Titan give missions to the "Boss" which refers to Baelius itself.

    Here's where the explanation starts:
    Titan is a god and he has immense power and has fought back against the forces(Exile and Legion) that got near his home in Frysteland.
    quote:

    I do not reveal my home without purpose. I had sworn to never interfere with this world, but the injustices here forced my hand. Alydriah tampers with forces she could never understand. Now the last free Krampus are under my protection.

    No one has control over Titan's power so the plot of the mission chain isn't lore friendly due to that detail, because Baelius isn't Titan's boss.

    Other detail I could point out, is that Caden and Titan aren't friends. Titan was Caden's teacher but due to certain issues, Caden left on his own journey. Caden still holds grudge against Titan.
    They wouldn't work together at all.

    Caden would be other detail I would point out since he is clear than he doesn't mixes his acts with "petty humans" and their actions. It is the same as Titan, Caden doesn't works for Baelius.
    quote:

    This is not my battle, Citizen. Your petty human wars are of no concern to me. But if you wish for me to end your life here, I will be more than happy to do so.


  • A story isn't Lore Friendly when it contradicts the source material. You can read the previous mission chains written by Big Tuna and Cinderella and you will notice they are lore friendly because they followed the original source(Big Tuna being the original writer of EpicDuel's storyline.)

    Try to read the Storyline and the NPC descriptions on EpicDuel Wiki to make sure your mission chains are lore friendly.

    Having you told that, you should fix your mission chains with the knowledge you gain from reading the suggestions above to improve the quality of your misssion chain suggestions.

    Also, nice work with the organization of the missions. Looks a lot better now.

    ~Hatred Cuirass
    Guest Artist of ED



    • nowras -> RE: 2 New mission chains (7/21/2014 5:04:31)

    Can you tell me what NPCs to use for this mission chains ur an expert in this help me :p



    One Winged Angel1357 -> RE: 2 New mission chains (7/21/2014 12:19:15)

    I can't tell you exactly what NPC's to use because that defeats the purpose of doing research into them. Part of the job of the guest writer is simply to do research on every single NPC we plan on using so we can use them correctly or in a Lore Friendly context.

    So let's start with your first missions chain.

  • Valestra is not a nice person. She will not go out of her way to help the commonwealth but she will go out of her way to make a profit.

    Personally I would avoid using George Lowe because everything of his is voiced and since we don't have that ability it would weird to have some of his stuff voice acted and others not.

    Now onto your second chain of missions

  • Death hit on the big points here in that Caden is the enemy of both Legion and Exile and Titan is the demigod who controls everything on Delta V. Nightwraith is a Legion hitman. So this team would never exist

  • Also the Armor Hazard is a legion creation and I doubt the Legion would want you to kill their pet.

    Final notes:
  • Your texts are rather simple but that can be fixed with practice.
  • Mission rewards are a bit high for the tasks you are excepted to complete. Personally I just say what currency I want the reward to be in because I don't have a grasp of the games economy



    • The berserker killer -> RE: 2 New mission chains (7/21/2014 12:43:37)

    Hey I am all for new missions being implemented into the game!

    Supported



    nowras -> RE: 2 New mission chains (7/21/2014 15:33:40)

    So i have done some changes btw @Onewingedangel1357 The mission chain name is ''Dont help the wrong person'' so George low is the wrong person so i don't think it needs to be changed



    One Winged Angel1357 -> RE: 2 New mission chains (7/21/2014 22:15:17)

    I'd avoid using the Hazards for missions because they don't speak with humans, they eat them

    Your second chain is now all Legion characters so that is good

    Finally Brachylagus is very similar to George Lowe



    King Bling -> RE: 2 New mission chains (7/22/2014 11:28:27)

    Well not all can beat Armor Hazard Solo, well I did beat him as a tm earlier, but now I am ch and i wont just change class using 100k credits just to complete that mission, and yes im non varium player. Or maybe they should give varium for class change before we start that solo armor hazard mission.



    nowras -> RE: 2 New mission chains (7/22/2014 11:56:33)

    @KingBling Don't worry I have solo'd armor hazard as a CH in omega btw if you have defeated Saeva Lionhart u will defeat armor hazard he is easier



    King Bling -> RE: 2 New mission chains (7/22/2014 12:06:40)

    You defeat saeva using ch? i was tlm when i beat him.



    nowras -> RE: 2 New mission chains (7/22/2014 21:48:25)

    Do you want a build ? Use a str build 50+35 str 72+35 dex 59+14 tech 18 support with max static and u will win ;)



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