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Meloette Wells -> (DF/AQW) Tales of Wells Discussion thread (6/22/2016 14:11:21)

Finally finding that the forums have a fanfiction thread. I decided to move a story I originally posted on the AQW's gallery forum here. Feel free to comment and critique on this story.

List of Preface Information (For future updates where I don't include it in the story unless actually need to be restated.)

  1. The protagonist isn’t meant to be a major player/hero to the events of Lore, as a whole
  2. The Hero of Lore, as a mix of the player’s actions and choices, cannot and will not be represented by one character for EVERY plot line in the game. this meaning:
    • The actual hero will focus purely on fighting against the forces of chaos, the threats that follow it
    • Other heroes, listed or not, will handle individual sagas. (a Legionnaire handling the Foita saga, or a experienced mage handling Xan's saga)



Table of Contents

  1. Preface
  2. Prologue


Change log:
6/27/15- Original post (w/ preface and prologue) was posted
1/18/16- Restructuring backstory.
6/22/16- Moving from AQW's gallery forum to the Fanfiction forum.
- New edition of the prologue finished.
- Discussion thread been made



Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: (DF/AQW) Tales of Wells Discussion thread (7/1/2016 15:39:48)

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The letter told her how he had went missing after engaging against a battalion of undead in doomwood.

had gone

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She wouldn’t believe Joseph to had died so easily.


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She dove to a place many soulweavers wouldn’t dare to venture, as normal elemental spirits was deterred by the darkness she have festered in her soul.

were, which

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Eventually, she found a willing spirit to weave with as the young soulweaver had finally began her descent into one of the darker arts of soulweaving.

finally began/had finally begun

From what I recall in the threads Tomix posted about Soulweavers it was that most of them are not trained for battle and that Tomix (the NPC) was a rare exception to the case and trained the hero of Falconreach to use Soulweaving as an offensive art. Chaosweavers on the other hand seemed to gravitate towards using the techniques in battle. Take that for what you will, it is your story.



Meloette Wells -> RE: (DF/AQW) Tales of Wells Discussion thread (7/2/2016 13:27:05)

Thank you for reading and the grammer corrections. I'll try to go back and fix them when I come back to work on the next chapter. I'll admit the non-combative state of most soulweavers was something, I forgot. Part of me would wish to return to correct this error, but at the same time I suppose I could try to have Mel start off as a rather poor fighter with the spirit ally being a guide to her learning how to use it offensively.

regardless, thank you for your time and the question. It's a rather good one to figure out as I go into writing this further.



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