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6/27/2011 13:25:19   
Drakkoniss
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 IKR? Raeven's actions shall be quite interesting, what with her cracked mind and all...

It will get even worse if I am right... hehe...

I knew it would ba about what happens, and the "recovery" of the city...
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6/27/2011 14:03:55   
Jae10
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 @ DB: Aw, don't worry. Your absence for training was not a waste of time for there will still be much, much trouble even after Clown the Jester. Believe me...

< Super City's recovery eh? The obstacles its remnants are sure to encounter will not be easily overcome. How can I forget Raeven; she's the reason I sleep with both eyes open at night...a real nightmare.

But, speaking strictly as a writer, you are quite welcome Clown! You know what it takes to be a true antagonist, especially the Antagonist, or Archnemsis. And that is what Raeven is. Plus, you're a spectacular writer and I had much confidence in your ability to help Raeven realize that and more... :3

I completely agree on what Jae represents to you. It is definitely a major part of her own mentality, someting she seeks. Although I gave you Raeven's core I neglected to mention the real core of Jae - what she personally means to me and that is also:

Perseverence & Love

It's pretty much the opposite of her sister. And you already mentioned Forgiveness.

Lol, but I honestly don't know what exactly Gray sees in Jae's character. He's reveals much while saying very little and from time to time vice versa.

< Message edited by Jae10 -- 6/27/2011 14:33:04 >
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6/27/2011 17:00:34   
delta blitz
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@all: Oh now I know what I can do,I may not have been able to stop clown(due to the fact that I showed too much mercy and didn't use my full power) but I will help stop Raeven no matter what. A hero must be able to make sacrifices and I can no longer show any mercy as both clown and grey have shown that mercy will only make things worst. This time I'll be sure to fix the problem permenantly. So I say this to you jae,remember that I do this not just for the sake of this city but for the sake of this world. Im sorry but if I find your sister I will be merciless. I know much about psychics due to my princess and I also know that humans have to breathe......nuff said.

< Message edited by delta blitz -- 6/27/2011 17:11:50 >
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6/29/2011 18:44:12   
Jae10
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 < Announcement: This is the last chapter of The Puppet Master.

~Chapter 21~

Well, I still have an Epilogue to conclude, so...don't worry. It's the last Chapter, but it isn't quite the End! I hope you all enjoyed the story. I also learned alot the entire time I was writing this tale...Thanks to EVERYONE!^^

< Message edited by Jae10 -- 6/30/2011 1:40:51 >
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6/29/2011 18:46:18   
delta blitz
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Your story is wonderful jae,I can see why you are having a hard time finding time to read mine. I like the new chapter and hopefully I make a epic come back to help end this chaos once and for all.
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6/30/2011 3:38:54   
megakyle777
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I loved it so far! I wonder where Jae is, and why her powers are draining....

Mind you, I got to wonder: where is The Dealer in a time like this? What with all the chaos and confusion, you would think his items and services would be selling like wildfire, what with people wanting to protect themselves from Super Clown. Eh, maybe he's too busy making the sale or planning a plan or something.
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6/30/2011 9:56:39   
Drakkoniss
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 ... when you've been riding 16 hours, and there's nothin' much to do... and you don't feel like riding, you just wish the trip were throuough... DODODO dodo DOOOO dodo...


...
And now that the mood has been set... onward to the glorious finale of this saga...

Interesting... ionic detonators, you say... there are a few continuuity differences, it seems... interesting... that's a veery nice blade... a very nice scythe... hmm.. that didn't seem like hours... maybe he's overestimating... if it was, then the fight with Clown would already be over (he only had one hour until his powers were gone)... you guys would have noticed the fight, I can tell you that...

I wondered when they'd remember Jae... now to read DB's story... quite a few chapters to catch up on...
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6/30/2011 10:16:00   
Velmur
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/e cries

The last chapter... at least a ducky was in it... hmph... I hope a cow is in the epilogue!


Wonderful story Jae, please write another one D= I'll miss reading it.

And now, I'll go try to find how to defeat a shapeshifter. My sister, who's a shapeshifter, has joined Clown. Gawd, now I gotta defeat her. Drakky will probably help me, though.

< Message edited by Velmur -- 6/30/2011 10:18:06 >

_____________________________

Velmur likes Peace.
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6/30/2011 17:16:05   
Jae10
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 ^
Aw, Ikr! I'm planning on writing a sequel. The title is going to be Legacy (for a few obvious reasons & not so obvious ones^^). I look forward to introducing more Smashers in the next one. Actually Velmur, your sister (Achillea) sounds like a really interesting character to write about. If she is in the Chaos Carnival then she will undoubtedly know Raeven :3

I gotta admit there were so many songs I was listening to when I was doing this entire story. When I review the entire plot, I see a clear shift of mood from beginning to end. It kinda got a bit dark around the last couple of chapters cause I was listening to alot of Evanescence (lol).

Anywho, if I had to choose a song that fits one of my favorite scenes in The Puppet Master (besides what Drakkoniss has already provided) it would be this one (mainly because of the awesomesauce lyrics):

~Clicky!~

@ Drakkoniss: Thanks for the handy feedback. The battle was lengthy due to the fact that Clown had enough time to torture and 'kill' Gray and for you to begin your EPIC fight with him. All that, in my head at least, would take a few hours (but not too many).


< Message edited by Jae10 -- 6/30/2011 19:52:51 >
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7/1/2011 0:05:25   
Clown the Jester
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Get out of TOWN! Jae, Gray and I listened to Sweet Sacrifice from Evanescence! WA HA HA HA HA! Wow...heh heh heh. Anyway...awsome cliff hanger. Really like your story alot Jae. Awsome.


Heres the song that enspired the mood for Comedy and Tragedy. We finished Comedy and Tragedy. Wow...what a rush.


Cicky McClick Click

< Message edited by Clown the Jester -- 7/1/2011 8:16:43 >
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7/1/2011 0:22:18   
Carly9467
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quote:

I'm planning on writing a sequel. The title is going to be Legacy (for a few obvious reasons & not so obvious ones^^). I look forward to introducing more Smashers in the next one. Actually Velmur, your sister (Achillea) sounds like a really interesting character to write about. If she is in the Chaos Carnival then she will undoubtedly know Raeven :3


Yay mee!

And Seriously...WHO THE HECK IS RAEVEN? D:
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7/1/2011 8:16:18   
Clown the Jester
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A very interesting girl who has come the closest to understanding everything that makes me me. A girl I molded like Clay...to form a statue of me.
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7/1/2011 8:29:52   
UnityDestroyer
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@Clown:Wanna make my statue too?
Post #: 88
7/1/2011 8:34:04   
megakyle777
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quote:

Aw, Ikr! I'm planning on writing a sequel. The title is going to be Legacy (for a few obvious reasons & not so obvious ones^^). I look forward to introducing more Smashers in the next one. Actually Velmur, your sister (Achillea) sounds like a really interesting character to write about. If she is in the Chaos Carnival then she will undoubtedly know Raeven :3


Just out of interest, will I be in this one? For some reason, i coluld see The Dealer profiting off of the chaos, whether it be selling wepaons to both saide or to protect, or him going after the big revival contract of reparing Skulldeep in his own unique way after the chaos. perfect time to hire people like Miss Modelle and Vincent Van Hot to redesign Skulldeep into a truly great base of evil and style.

And I wonder if ERaeven and Achillea will get alomg or if they will be rivils...
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7/1/2011 8:41:27   
Velmur
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quote:

Aw, Ikr! I'm planning on writing a sequel. The title is going to be Legacy (for a few obvious reasons & not so obvious ones^^). I look forward to introducing more Smashers in the next one. Actually Velmur, your sister (Achillea) sounds like a really interesting character to write about. If she is in the Chaos Carnival then she will undoubtedly know Raeven :3


Sounds fun!
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7/1/2011 9:58:32   
Drakkoniss
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 Very interesting... So many, many legacies, indeed... so many knowns, and unknowns... so little chance it will involve zombies...

I, however have a song to capture the mood of this saga of various works, which we are working on...

Tres magnifique match IMO: http://www.lyricsfreak.com/d/don+mclean/american+pie_20042099.html <- Click it. YOU HAVE TO!!!!!!!! That song always makes me sad and angry at the same time by the end...
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7/1/2011 10:42:14   
Carly9467
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...i still don't know who Raeven is..

Teehee
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7/1/2011 10:43:25   
UnityDestroyer
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@Carly:Raeven is Jae's sister i only know few details about her
Post #: 93
7/1/2011 10:52:22   
Drakkoniss
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 She's also Clown the Jester's adopted daughter...
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7/1/2011 10:54:30   
UnityDestroyer
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@Drakkoniss:Can i adopt you?
Post #: 95
7/1/2011 11:01:41   
Drakkoniss
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 No, you cannot.

To be more correct, you can, but I will neither let you, nor consent to it. While it is technically possible, it will never happen.

< Message edited by Drakkoniss -- 7/1/2011 11:02:30 >
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7/1/2011 11:08:38   
Carly9467
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Ohh okay

And LOL Unity&Drakky
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7/1/2011 16:08:57   
Velmur
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By the way, if you're going to add Achillea in, if you want to, it'd be a good idea to add me in too... we fight A LOT. ;) Sisters get pretty annoying.
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7/1/2011 16:35:16   
Carly9467
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Don't add him he'll make me seem less obnoxious.

And velmur you should see yourself when you get mad.

Teehee

< Message edited by Carly9467 -- 7/1/2011 18:55:10 >
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7/1/2011 20:09:49   
Velmur
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...Shut up. I make you more obnoxious.
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