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11/16/2011 16:03:49   
Helixi
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As per usual dear, I love the new poem. :D You shall have many huggles on Saturday for it.
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11/16/2011 16:37:32   
Mortarion
Member

I would read them all, but I am not too good for reading poetry, would you like a place to gather inspiration, my good Disicpline?
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 102
11/17/2011 11:21:46   
.Discipline
Member

A place to gather inspiration? Whatever do you mean?

Also, the reason the rhythm may feel forced in places is because I needed to make sure I could tell the story I had in my head properly.
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 103
11/20/2011 14:28:10   
Helixi
Member

.Discipline would like me to inform you all that he only has sporadic access to the internet, so updates may not happen often/at all, in the next few months. Sorry all. :(
AQ DF  Post #: 104
11/20/2011 14:30:09   
Helixi
Member

.Discipline would like me to inform you all that he only has sporadic access to the internet, so updates may not happen often/at all, in the next few months. Sorry all. :(
AQ DF  Post #: 105
11/20/2011 14:37:33   
Mortarion
Member

Okay, tell him to not to stress too much, he better works now and when he comes back that he showers us with great poetry, anyways, good luck Discipline
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 106
11/20/2011 14:39:57   
Mortarion
Member

Tell him to not to stress too much, whe can wait for his return Good luck buddie
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 107
11/23/2011 9:45:15   
Helixi
Member

Okay.... Months may have been a misunderstanding on my part. .D may have a new laptop by this weekend, if not before. Then normal updates will resume. Thanks for being so patient guys! :D
AQ DF  Post #: 108
11/23/2011 9:48:26   
Helixi
Member

Okay.... Months may have been a misunderstanding on my part. .D may have a new laptop by this weekend, if not before. Then normal updates will resume. Thanks for being so patient guys! :D
AQ DF  Post #: 109
11/23/2011 9:52:22   
lordkaho
Creative!


 That's great to hear. A man should never be deprived of his internet, lest he gets bored and all of hell breaks loose.
DF MQ  Post #: 110
11/26/2011 12:06:47   
.Discipline
Member

And I have verily returned with a new laptop. Will get on with writing the next part as soon as possible. :D
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 111
12/4/2011 19:48:38   
Helixi
Member

Your critique is finished. :D
AQ DF  Post #: 112
12/29/2011 8:03:07   
.Discipline
Member

Just started a new abstract prose piece called 5 Nights of Pure Magic

Link is in the first post if anybody wants to read and comment.
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 113
12/29/2011 8:32:16   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L
quote:

where no mortal would ever see.


What do you mean by this? (Slight differences, but differences nonetheless.)

A) "yet no mortal would ever see it."

B) "which no mortal would ever see."

C) "where no mortal could ever venture."

My opinion on the piece limits itself to randomness.
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 114
12/29/2011 8:36:42   
Helixi
Member

Merged as requested.
AQ DF  Post #: 115
12/29/2011 8:42:24   
.Discipline
Member

I probably mean A.

I know it's hard to comment of something random like that, but I'd be glad if you just enjoyed the imagery.

Thanks for the merge, dear. *kisses*
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 116
1/7/2012 15:49:33   
.Discipline
Member

http://forums2.battleon.com/f/tm.asp?m=14108551

An old set of collabs from a while ago, I was asked to put it here so that there was somewhere to comment on it. Enjoy.
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 117
1/18/2012 12:07:37   
.Discipline
Member

Just a quick update for you guys, I'm currently working on the creation of my own universe, the world of Bronzefall. Times and Tales is being postponed for now and is likely to be scrapped altogether. But do not fear, many of the characters of the Times and Tales are going to be taking on new life in this universe, albeit with slightly altered roles. Dalarai lives on and I should be able to provide those interested in the new universe with some information if they PM me.

DON'T TOUCH THAT DIAL. :D
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 118
3/19/2012 19:10:13   
.Discipline
Member

Just wrote a new poem, The Secret Weapon

*blow dust off his poetry thread*
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 119
3/27/2012 9:55:13   
.Discipline
Member

Just posted up a sneaky prologue for the story set in my new universe, The World of Bronzefall.

It can be found here: http://forums2.battleon.com/f/tm.asp?m=20195497

Edited to remove that pesky ? thingy in the link...

< Message edited by Eukara Vox -- 3/27/2012 11:40:04 >
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 120
3/27/2012 15:46:46   
Mortarion
Member

Me likes, me thinks, me would be mostly aligned to Rix. But as a chilean I have a like for Bronze, and I guess that Boreus is the Bronce one, right?
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 121
3/27/2012 16:05:46   
.Discipline
Member

Yes, but Bolerus is currently missing. He was the most powerful god, overshadowing the others by a very large margin, so it is quite the strange mystery as to what actually happened to him. His disappearance took with him everyone's ability to innately use magic, all enchantments failed and the capital city, Pyropus, exploded in a massive mana storm which has left the entire area a magical fallout zone.

So worship to Bolerus is kind of on hold right now. xD
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 122
3/28/2012 5:43:44   
Mortarion
Member

lol, and it's obvious, Bolerus dissapeared because he rusted, and he coudn't bear to have that shame :P

< Message edited by Mortarion -- 3/28/2012 5:44:41 >
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 123
3/28/2012 8:37:47   
.Discipline
Member

The gods do not rust! >_<

Just added another little teaser piece to the prologue. A familiar face returns. :D
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 124
3/28/2012 11:49:20   
Helixi
Member

Bronze doesn't rust. :p
AQ DF  Post #: 125
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