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1/30/2012 1:45:59

Jessa K
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Alright, I'm gonna comment as I read.

Sniper, huh? I wonder what type... Ah, bolt action, but still I wonder about the caliber and such.

3,000 or 300,000 enemies? You say both...

A beautiful white bow? I wouldn't mind one like that; my bow snapped a couple weeks ago. I wonder what type? These days, compounds are by far the best, although not usually what people think of when they think of a bow. Collapsable arrows, cool. Probably not as aerodynamic, though.

Killed somebody close... A tragedy, one my character can relate to.

So the hunter went out hunting and hit killed by the huntresses who were hunting but were not hunting the hunter... Whoa, I just gave myself a headache.

So, overall, I liked it. At times it's hard to tell whether the narrator is male or female, but other than that good.

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1/30/2012 7:10:16

Clown the Jester
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SNAP!

GOT HER BOSTON NECK BREAKING STYLE!

HOO HOO HOO HOO HA HA HA!

All this snapping crackling and popping..heh heh...how delicious. WHERES MY SERIAL KILLER BOWL? OOOH! There it is...so what will it be? Of course Count Chocula!

WA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!

Most intresting read.

AQW

Epic

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1/30/2012 12:49:02

Drakkoniss
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3,000, Jessa. I and a few others asked her ealier, and she said it was a typo. I guess she forgot/neglected to fix it.

I'd guess it was a Mosin-Nagant, or something very similar to it, Jessa, based on the time period. Yes, it would be interesting to know more specifics, but still. Too many details cause some people to dislike that part of the story. I suppose if the name of the gun was stated, it would be good, but then again, it would have to be researched, and that would also indicate which side she was on. That suprise I would like to remain just that. Of course, one would guess she was on the winning side, but who knows? I might be able to discover by rereading it, but it's early in the morning, and I don't feel like it... Well, not early in the morning. It's 11:44. I just haven't had breakfast yet. -.-

We already had the aerodynamics arguement, Jessa. It could very well be as perfectly accurate as a normal arrow, if the people who made it were smart about it.

And yeah, these days a compound bow with fibre-optic crosshairs would be best, but those have not been used in the past.

Ah, but Count Chocula only has one tooth. I find that annoying. :/

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1/30/2012 20:06:04

Jessa K
Member

My bad, I didn't read the comments until after I had posted for fear of spoilers. I don't think they even used compounds then, lol.

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2/5/2012 14:21:03

Arachnid
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quote:

3,000, Jessa. I and a few others asked her ealier, and she said it was a typo. I guess she forgot/neglected to fix it.

Couldn't find it earlier, now it's fixed ^^

quote:

Ah, but Count Chocula only has one tooth. I find that annoying. :/

From all of the sugary cereal he eats.

~Lady Zafara

< Message edited by Arachnid -- 2/11/2012 21:27:19 >

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2/11/2012 21:30:05

Drakkoniss
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Weeeell, I think this's about the right time to start commenting on this, so I shall.

Interesting description, that of lycanthropy's effects on the mind. Makes for very interesting thoughs, to say the least.

I'd guess she intered a labrynth...

You know, considering the fact that they are hunters trained to track their prey, I am not so sure she'd be able to lose them. XP Ah, logic...

*narrows eyes* Hmm...

*sigh* Such things are painful, but I suppose they must sometimes happen, so that things may occur in the way which is required for things to unfold... adequately. I have a feeling of benevolence from the child, though you would think most would not. Either that, or that it occured for a benevolent reason, caused by something other than random chance.

Considering the very fact that there was talk about things in the forest, I would guess that there WAS a way she could have known, and that that wasn't her first transformation. If so, that makes it all the sadder. I shall check about... now.

Ah, memory loss. Such a silly thing. Makes you wonder why Aphrodite in specific was the one who met with her, but meh.

... And now, there is the question of what happened to that armor, and/or if it has fused with her, or the curse was removed at a later time, so she did not need it, anymore, or even if it was destroyed!

Not as much commentary as I'd have thought, but ah well.

On that note, I would like to say that that armor could make for a very powerful tool... very powerful, indeed.

< Message edited by Drakkoniss -- 2/11/2012 21:32:25 >

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2/11/2012 21:34:46

Arachnid
Member

My longest chapter, and Drakky gives me his shortest commentary xD

~Lady Zafara

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2/11/2012 22:08:44

Drakkoniss
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I'm nice, aren't I?

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