RPGLegend
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In the Frostval '09 deleted scenes, the second screen says "the player who plays more csually or is knew to the game" Should be new. Also on this screen, "Some of these cuts were in length to fit.," This could be reworded, and there is also two punctuation marks at the end. The end of this screen stops abruptly. On the next screen, the first line says "Some of you." which should have a comma instead of a period, and near the bottom "thanthe" should be two words. A couple of times while Zorbak and Kabroz are arguing, the word "you're" is replaced with "your", and also when the hero speaks in the "green screen".
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