Windy
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When you train Necromancer class from level 0 to 1, Obsidia says: 1)"I sense the aura of darkness about you. You have true potential to fair well in the Necromancer’s ways. To begin training, you must pass a test… " The bolded word should read fare. The second bolded word should be replaced by Necromancers. 2)"Someone who has sworn to be an enemy of our ways has taken an orb of darkness in Darkovia, and is going to destroy it. Stop him, and I will teach you how to summon an Undead Giant:" That comma does not belong there. Remove the comma or change to: "Someone,who has sworn to be an enemy of our ways, has taken an orb of darkness in Darkovia and is going to destroy it. Stop him, and I will teach you how to summon an Undead Giant:"
< Message edited by Windy -- 6/23/2011 11:35:52 >
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