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6/26/2008 17:52:01

DragonMaster V
Member

Chance 3... *Sigh*
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Artwork

Artwork 1
Artwork 2
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Constructive Criticism

Artwork 1:
This will work awesome as a signature! The shade and blur effects will make it stand out and make it ony look better! There is only one minor problem, the blur at the left side can really mess up the "Mech" part, but you can still see it perfectly. Great Job!

Artwork 2:
This is a very well done avatar, the crop is perfect but it may need some edits other than crop, but it's still great! Maybe a little text, shading effect, blurring or brightness effect would have let these DF Guardians show how special they'll be in 5 years! Keep this up with your gallery!
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"I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves."

I can see that you are trying, so approved. But you need to work on your CC. Try finding at least two thing you like/dislike when giving CC. Posting more then one sentence is a great help when CCing.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 6/28/2008 17:41:40 >

MQ	Post #: 426

6/27/2008 18:12:15

Zidaine
Member

1. Post two forms of art you wish to post in the Gallery (if you are working on a game project, a link to your website will be fine). This can be any form of art that fits the Gallery or any of the sub areas.: I am working on a Machinima game Project The link to my website is http://brawlmania.proboards83.com/index.cgi the website is a work in progress.

2. Give constructive criticism to the following images. [Image 1] [Image 2]

Image 1: Umm every time i look at the image it is different i dont know which one i am supposed to critisize. I guess i will critisize the Pae the Gecko one

It looks very good because the color scheme matched very well and the words outline switched colors depending on what background it was. The only bad thing is that the picture of th Gecko is not at a very good angle and makes it look more like an iguana then a gecko.

Image 2:
The blurrieness of the outline makes it seem like real smoke but the line smke and the smoke cloud do not really match. The blue shirt slightly clashes with the brown smokey background but overall it looks very good.

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved. Keep working on you CC, see above post for more info.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 6/28/2008 17:42:17 >

Post #: 427

6/29/2008 10:44:50

Minar
Member

Art Work:
Necromancer VS. Paladin
Ninja Signiture

CC (Constructive Criticism):
[Image 1]
The background is fantastic since the bright green is very bright and it matches the sprite. The complexity in the background is also good so that it doesn't look too boring. The border is good and it matches but it could stand out more. It might blend in too much. The sprite has a good effect(the shadow) so that it pops out of the sigy. The text is good and matches. BUT, the "The Ravenous Gecko" part could me smaller because the "Pae" part should be the main text that catches your attention.

[Image 2]
All the colors match and blend very well with each other. The background also matches very well since the colors surrounding the sprite match the sprite itself. The farther space of the background is darker and matches the little points in the sprite(hair, sprite, etc.). The brown section on the right could be brought down a bit because it looks uneven compared to the right side. The border is also very clean and simple, but it could be bigger since the sig size is big. The sprite has a great effect so it doesn't look too boring. The text has a good color choice and the placement is also great. The top text could be a bit bigger because the main text should stand out a bit more.

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 6/29/2008 18:25:01 >

AQW

Post #: 428

7/2/2008 1:41:07

icedmetal57
Member

Glass Ball Logo made by myself in Photoshop

Aryentar (Orc/Troll/Human Hybrid race) Hand Drawn by Myself, a few months ago.

Image 1

Looks like it would be good for a little comical signature, with the message of would you rather be here or where you are right now, which makes a good point across saying, "Stop complaining, there are worse situations to be in." As for the artwork itself, the font for the text works well with what the message is saying, as for the lighting it looks great, with the orangeish glow and the sparks going towards the girl's face.

Image 2

Has the whole misty look to it as if it's a picture taken right from the shower, however if it were a girl in a shower I don't understand why she has any garments on, not to be a pervert or anything, I'm just pointing that out, other than that it looks great, especially how the girl has that messy kind of hair which works perfect for this situation.

"I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves."

Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/3/2008 20:31:59 >

Post #: 429

7/2/2008 11:35:08

Dracelix
Member

school logo i made for an anual: stag
logo made for myself: mike-nitro

image 1: http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/Kyoko.png
i like how the yellow flows into grey as it moves left, also the positioning of the body seems as a good fit for the layout whilst the title nicely fills out the blank and how the yellor effects highlight the body from blending into the background, however the grey in the gackground seems hardly noticable enough as i has to look closer to the screen to see it, all in all it seems a great fit, but could have a better color scheme

image 2: http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/Breath.png
this work seems good, i like how the purple background complemets the yellor in the streams and the yellowish look in the skin, although the skin could be better by either makin the whole skin like the plastic effect at the bottom or the normal skin at the top
the red seems to have a perfect glow and how it effects the girld chin to glow aswell, this work has a good look and and is very appealing to my eyes

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/3/2008 20:32:40 >

AQW

Post #: 430

7/2/2008 17:53:36

Corrupted Paladin
Member

Artworks:

Artwork 1

Artwork 2

CC1: Impressive. It is 500x100 so it's right on rules. It also repersents Cysero very well, because it shows that he's a weapon smith. Maybe you can add some of his weapons that he sells in his shops, maybe his bleach themed weapons, or if you were to make a Cysero Defenders signature you can put his Defenders weapons! You can also add a little more details, like more colors. Overall this is a very good signature!

CC2: This will work very good for any wars that involve light and dark, and also for vs. signatures. You know, like those that fight for light AND darkness. *Chuckles* You made a typo, Paaldin and also maybe have Sepulchure beside the Necro and Artix beside the Paladin. It would be better to make it darker on the deathknight and necromancer side, and more bright in the Paladins spot. It is also 500x100 so no rule-breaking!

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I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/3/2008 20:33:37 >

Post #: 431

7/2/2008 20:23:53

Vahn_Kaichi
Member

1) Art Examples
Game Card (Test)
Edited NPC

2) Criticism
2.1) Image 1
Haha, I find this sign very... Grafh. Beautiful model has been chosen. And the look in her eyes combined with her pose really matches the "Sweet Misery" tag given. The effects chosen are just enough not to destroy the calm atmosphere around the whole thing, and purple is a good color for the light-like effects. Simple, yet very good.
Only thing I would change would be less effects around her legs (wich I believe to be brushes), they don not match the simplicity of the picture.

2.2) Image 2
I've been around iChar&Grafh's gallery when this one was "released", so I find it nice to judge this one.
The smoke effect working with the background is amazing. Again, Grafh's simplicity amazes me. The text is good and simple enough not to steal the atention of the whole signature. Something that bothers me is her smile. There's something about it that could have been worked with just a few touches of the Smudge Tool. Still, a good piece of work.

Post #: 432

7/3/2008 8:00:19

Blazinilix
Member

Art examples:

CnC:

Tag:

The tag's use of C4Ds impress me, they add flow to the tag and abit of depth. The effects going off from the guitar also add to the overall flow. But the tag could use a better color scheme and a more visible light source. The chinese text at the bottom fits greatly.

Tag 2:

I really like this one. The text somewhat matches the theme of the tag and the flow is very good. The BG of the tag gives it a type of fog like texture which also in turn matches the focal jacket the flaw of the tag is that theres seems to be no telling where the light source is coming from. Overall it's a great tag and with just a few minor editing it'll look great.

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help. *Hint* Try adding a bit more CC.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/3/2008 20:35:08 >

DF	Post #: 433

7/3/2008 15:27:02

Shattered Oblivion
Member

Art Examples

Artwork One

Artwork Two

Constructive criticism for image one:

The mix in colors is qualified, at best. The render is rather out of place in the tag given the choice in background colors. Nevertheless, overall, the tag is aesthetically pleasing. I would suggest using colors that would blend the foreground and background better. The lighting is decent, but needs to include the foreground/render. However, once again, t is an aesthetically pleasing picture in terms of the layout and construction.

Constructive criticism for image two:

Overall, this image works. Though the rendering may be too blatant and distracting, there is a grace in the flow, which I believe is this tag's high point. However, I am less in approval of the choice in colors. Again, the contrast itself is non-smooth, This image is beautiful. It is very smooth and the colors in it are nothing less than fantastic. The contrast, however, I seem to disagree with, as it is a bit too apparent. However, the lighting is top-notch, as it weaves the tag together. I give an overall bravo.

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I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/3/2008 20:34:27 >

DF	Post #: 434

7/3/2008 21:43:50

Corrupted Paladin
Member

Artworks:

Artwork 1

Artwork 2

CC1: Great color choice! This really fits in with Cysero's outfit and it's probably his favorite color, so I bet if he sees it he'll love it :D. The only problem is the outline of Cysero. It makes it a little too little WOW in it. Try using the Color Picker to copy the parts and then fill it in and then the WOW arrives. Also try filling in the open spaces. Maybe with text, maybe with pictures. As long as it's not too crammed. The text is great. Although, you can change "LeftSocks" to the same font as "Cysero". It will make it look a little more... better. You pulled the picture of Cysero right out of his avatar. Maybe you could have changed a little bit of it, maybe add some colors to it. Overall this is in my Top-5 signature list!

CC2: These colors match perfectly! The Paladin goes with morning, DK with dawn. Maybe you can make a night sky for the Necromancer, just to fit in. These are great choices. The pictures go right with the text. DeathKnight in the DK section, Paladin with the Pali, Necromancer with the Necro. Though you made a little mistake with Paladin. You spelled it "Paaldin". This really made a good WOW inside me. Maybe you can rotate the Paladin to face forward, that would look awesome :)! Overall, this isn't in the Top-5 but is still great! Good job!

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I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Not approved. Reread the rules.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/5/2008 0:18:03 >

Post #: 435

7/4/2008 6:53:48

Blazinilix
Member

Back for a retest.

Art examples:

CnC:

Tag 1:

+ The C4Ds showed the flow in the sigg and added depth.
+ The effects going off from the guitar also add to the flow of the tag.
+ The Chinese text at the bottom right corner is blended in great as it does not drive attention away from the focal.
- It's abit chaotic on the left of the focal.
- There is no appearent color scheme in the tag.
- The effect going off the guitar messes up the light source.
- No visible light source

Overall: The tag is a great tag. Just remove the flaws listed and it'll look perfect.

Tag 2:

+ The text blends well and does not takes attention away from the focal.
+ The BG fits the theme of the sigg and it's colors are same with the focal.
+ The effects adds a fog like texture to the BG which fits very well.
- The focal seems to be devoid of everything around her.
- There is no appearent color scheme in the tag.
- No visible light source
- Lack of effects in the foreground.

Overall: It's a great tag with a distinct sense of depth. Just edit the few flaws and it'll be perfect.

DF	Post #: 436

7/4/2008 11:28:44

PoeticSpanner
Member

1) one && two

2) a) http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/SweetMisery2.jpg
pros: very little negative space. the main subject is scaled to good size for the tag and looks realistic. overall color scheme seems to work.
cons: hard to tell which is her hair and which is shadow. Word "sweet" is a tad hard to read. perhaps if used a slightly larger font size? Her heels are also a little hard to see.

b) http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/2qc1kj7.jpg
pros: again, main focal point makes use of space, leaving little negative space. focal point is good size and detailed enough the viewer can tell what its supposed to be.
cons: Im not sure I like the overall color scheme. seems to work in most places, but seems plain or bland in others. perhaps could be centered a little better? left "hand" seems easy to overlook as seems to blend into the rest of the image....

3) I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved. Keep working on your CC through.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/5/2008 0:20:11 >

Post #: 437

7/5/2008 2:02:18

DoodMan
Member

Well, despite the fact that I know my way around Photoshop, C4D, Bryce, Terragen, 3DS Max and more... I'm not here for the Digital Art this time.

Nope... Music is my trade now, Dr. G.
Here's a link to My MySpace music page.

I mean if it's totally necessary, I could post some old tags.
Old Tag
Really Old Tag

Criticism: Awww... I'm going to be in music... Do I have to worry about tags???
Oh well, just to avoid having to repost...

There are a number of things wrong with this tag.
The background doesn't seem to fit the focal point. The pink just doesn't bring it together. The purple hair would go better with a darker color scheme.
The whole white noise is unpleasant to the eye. There's too much of it. I think the white should be toned down a few notches and more darkness should be used to add depth, as noted before with the hair. The type is alright, but I would like the rose to have been red, simply because the rose in her hair is red. Would have been a nice touch in my opinion.
There's no evidence of an attempt at blending. The render doesn't appear to be part of the scene. It's kind of like a woman who is about to be attacked by a blob of really shiny cotton candy. The border is decent, it doesn't really detract from the image.

I hope you don't mind me taking the liberty of choosing a different tag than the given options, but Brady's Petrucci tag is pure eyecandy.
There's great depth and flow and the monochromatic color scheme goes really well with the feel of this tag. Look at that text, it's creative and it's so pro. I like the idea of having the cutout of his picking hand, especially since Petrucci is renowned for his amazing picking skills. It adds an original flair to what might have been a boring cookie cutter style.
All-around, this tag is an eyegasm.

I will hereby follow the rules set by the administrators and moderators of the forums; as well as the ones set by the grammatical rules of the English language. I understand that if I fail to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.
(I had to reword it a bit as per the second clause of the first sentence.)

Thanks, Dr. G.

Approved. You're going to need a new music site though, AE has that site blocked.

Yeah, I loathe MySpace. I set up a Last.FM site for the specific purpose of the gallery. Thanks, mate.

< Message edited by DoodMan -- 7/6/2008 15:29:18 >

Post #: 438

7/5/2008 16:29:16

alexanderis2
Member

1.
Image 1 - http://img224.imageshack.us/my.php?image=twinbladesofdestinyqr5.png
Image 2 - http://img55.imageshack.us/my.php?image=xansrevengeav0.png

2.
Image 1 - Twin Blades of Destiny, I like DragonFable so i painted them. Many people know about Twin Blades of destiny - it is a Purified Twin Blades of Doom. And it's Totally light!

Image 2 - Xan's Revenge is a Level 33 or 32 fire weapon causing great Fire Damage. (From dragonfable, same i like dragonfable)

3.
I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Not apporved. You need to work on your CC.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/5/2008 18:39:32 >

Post #: 439

7/5/2008 23:41:11

tombstone
Member

1.
Image 1- http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc144/tombstone8/avvys/Scarydollavvy3.png
Image 2- http://i214.photobucket.com/albums/cc144/tombstone8/sigs/tombknightsigsymbols.png

2.
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/e5gpjp.jpg?0.30170900%201215313004
The lines of the first drawing structure should be erased. They are most distracting in the shoulders and arms. Also, some shading should be added to it, mainly under the neck and on the back of the legs. The texture of the back is good, but the spikes on the tail seem too flat. However, I like how the head tail and wing lead so that there is a circle formed. I think that if the drawing had more depth to it, it would be pretty good.

http://forums2.battleon.com/f/interceptor.asp?dest=http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/ragnasqj4.png?0.21487400%201215314878
Parts of the body seem to be oddly twisted. The left arm looks like its going outwards right below the elbow, but starts to turn inwards at the hand after the glove. Also, the upper body seems to turn to the left of the pic, but then at the waist the legs start to face forwards. What I did like was how the weave on the chest makes the body look more 3D. I overall thought that it was ok.

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/6/2008 2:23:39 >

Post #: 440

7/6/2008 1:56:55

Dragoncat
Member

Water Dragon

Zorbak Controls the Shadowsythe

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/mystery.jpg?0.58272800%201215321226

I like the Anime Style Characteristics and how it shows nothing about the woman so she is a mystery. The pink kinda throws it off because it doesn't work up nicely, Purple could of made it better because it would blend in like with her hair. Its Overall nicely done.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/Breath.png?0.66134400%201215321236

Its a good picture a nice pose to show breathing. When people say breath they mean clam down. Calming down you think of cool colors like blue or purple. In this picture it shows colors red and orange. Red and orange go as hot colors. and Hot colors don't go as clam it goes as pressure. So I think a darker color would be better like maybe more purple and some blue. You are showing that you should breath, calm down less stressful. Well the colors can tell a lot of things and the colors are showing hot colors red and orange maybe some yellow. So I say you should switch the colors with more relaxing ones to show people just to breath. Overall I nice picture a good model of showing people to breath.

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quote:

hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved.

< Message edited by Dragoncat -- 7/6/2008 3:12:58 >

AQW

Epic

Post #: 441

7/6/2008 10:56:16

alexanderis2
Member

1.
Image 1 - http://img224.imageshack.us/my.php?image=twinbladesofdestinyqr5.png
Image 2 - http://img55.imageshack.us/my.php?image=xansrevengeav0.png

2.
Image 1 - I like this, and i'm proud if this, Everything is alright for me on this.

Image 2 - I like this too, i'm proud that i made the Fire alright.

3.
I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

This is my 2nd try, I worked on CC

Not approved. Reread the rules.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/6/2008 12:09:49 >

Post #: 442

7/6/2008 11:03:15

krezi_kid
Member

Art 1
Art 2

CC:
Image 1
This one is really great. The background is awesome especially the choice of green which matches with everything. The shadow effect also adds an amazing detail to the images. The text is all right, although it could be better. You could make "The Ravenous Gecko" a bit bigger to match "Pae" or "Pae" smaller, but that's just my opinion.

Image 2
This one is great too. I don't really see anything wrong with it. The background is amazing, great choice of color and shadow. the one thing that caught my eye though is the left side of the person where the colors blend. That is the only thing in my opinion that needs improving.

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help. *Hint* Try adding a bit more CC.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/6/2008 12:12:57 >

DF	Post #: 443

7/6/2008 12:25:54

alexanderis2
Member

1.
Image 1 - http://img224.imageshack.us/my.php?image=twinbladesofdestinyqr5.png
Image 2 - http://img55.imageshack.us/my.php?image=xansrevengeav0.png

2.
Image 1 - I like this, and i'm proud if this, Everything is alright for me on this. There is nothing i dislike. I like also the Colours i made.

Image 2 - I like this too, i'm proud that i made the Fire alright. Same everything is alright for me on this. There is nothing i dislike.

3.
I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Not approved. Reread the rules.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/7/2008 8:02:51 >

Post #: 444

7/6/2008 22:50:15

Corrupted Paladin
Member

Artworks:

Artwork 1

Artwork 2

Constructive Critisism:

Very well chosen! The color difference in the backround and the render make the render stand out more. Maybe be you can darken the face and lighten the backround, I think it would make the render stand out more. I think you should make the text a little more big or bold, I can barely see it. I really like the sparks. It really makes it look cool. Overall this really stands out and is awesomely well done!

I like the fire type color on the guitar. The problem about that is it sort of makes it look like a chainsaw to me. I think that the render color is a bit too dull, unlike branch. The sparks/fire on the guitar makes it a bit too bright, so darkening will really help. As I said before, you should make the text in the bottom-right corner VERY more bold and/or big. I really like how put sparks. That really attracts people. Overall nice job! Very attractive!

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I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/7/2008 7:57:57 >

Post #: 445

7/7/2008 6:37:59

iEnd
Member

Example1
Example2

Constructive Criticism:
[image]http://forums2.battleon.com/f/interceptor.asp?dest=http://www.azupload.com/displayImage.php/setid11272.png[/image]
The Background was the first thing that caught my attention. It was very well-worked. The colors of the render fit with the background colors perfectly. But the render is a bit blured though.
As for the general appareance this sig is very beautiful and the effects are amaizing.
I Like the border but the text seems too simple, but the font matches the sig perfectly.
To finish this I would say that this sig was very good but it could be better with some small fixes.

[image]http://forums2.battleon.com/f/interceptor.asp?dest=http://www.azupload.com/displayImage.php/setid11273.png[/image]
The first thing that caught my attention on this sig is the render. The colors of the render are in an amaizing harmony with each other. The background on itself is amaizing and it combines perfectly with the colours of the render.
The effects of this sig are simply stunning.
The border is too small and difficuilt to notice but maybe without it the sig would be just too plain and simple. The text is very well done and fits the sig
This sig is perfect and couldn't be done better
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I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/7/2008 7:58:12 >

Post #: 446

7/7/2008 14:43:26

alexanderis2
Member

1.
Images:
Image 1 - http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/e5gpjp.jpg
Image 2 - http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/bigship3jx9.png

2.
Constructive Criticism:
Image 1 - I like this, The Paint with Dragon, it is great. Wings are cool too. but, it requires some colour, and another wing with more scape would be great.
Image 2 - Not bad, Nice Job with characters and Ship Stuff. The Flag is great too. But the only thing would require is an Bright Blue or any Blue backround so it would be water.

3.
I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/8/2008 22:13:12 >

Post #: 447

7/8/2008 13:57:07

lioner
Banned

what do u think bout this and this
now for my constructive crtism (spelling mistake)
it's using alot of gray and you can't see all of the character's facesone i would have made a different setting and used colours that stick outnow for number 2
i woul have put in a setting an would have rounded the edges
I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.
new picture check this out

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/8/2008 22:13:27 >

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7/8/2008 21:47:00

sty2k5
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my Game site: http://www.freewebs.com/brinkofevil/

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I love the way the guitarist seems to be surrounded by smoke, looks like she has something on her mind ... Great work with the realism; it would look better if some of the shirt colour showed through the jacket; or the jacket had a bit more texture though.

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the image appears to be too generic for my tastes, however it has many strong points it has a good colour scheme, with strong warm tones, and it definately gets the point across! good job!
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hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help. As we discussed via PMs, your site is fine for your art example.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/9/2008 21:25:21 >

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7/10/2008 11:41:23

Matozan
Member

Hand drawn art
example 1
example 2

c&c

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/fy2x4h.jpg
kay lets start with the dragon,well the first thing I noticed is well... the head yes, its been well drawn and shading is incredible O.O I suggest that you fix the horns, the double horn on the dragon is a bit distracting or maybe you can just make both horns 1 nice big horn. the eyes could have used more detailed it looks to plain, remember adding a light source to the eyes can make a big difrence for the outcome.now I will talk about that teeth, ugh some of the teeth are on the lips and some are smallers then others. teeth are relatively easy to draw, remember that with reptiles usualy have those pointy diamond shaped teeth and the front part is bigger then the back part so and so...
AND also that poorly drawn doctor thing ruins the concept of the drawing I mean seriously -_-"

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/bigship3jx9.png
well the first thing I noticed is the "squareness" of the boat I mean cmon boats arent square. and if you asked me the whole thing looks like its made from paper no kidding, this can be fixed by giving it like a "boxy effect" you know cubes not squares stuff like that..aslo shading helps alot. I noticed some parts of the ship is shadded and some parts are not. lol if your gonna shade I guess it would be best if you shaded everything. now the color its...kinda plain O.O brown lol the people on the boat have more detail then this (nice sprites btw) maybe if you made it have 2 prime colors ex: white and brown, then the minor color black then yea it could have given the boat more life.
Keep working on the boat maybe add a backround and some more sprites then bam!

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< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/10/2008 19:01:57 >

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