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7/11/2008 18:58:45   
Azuchi
Member

I mainly do Hand-Drawn art, so here.
Art 1
Art 2

Constructive Criticism

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/2qc1kj7.jpg?0.95022600%201215816338
Looks like it was done in paint, definitely not hand-drawn. Although I can't tell which way is the dragon facing, looking at, or which way it's body is facing. It's left arm seems to be offset to me. The mix of green and gold make for good colors for a dragon. It's eyes remind me of an anime stlye sort of thing. The way the horns are shaded though, looks a little shady itself. Meaning the way the light would be coming from doesn't seem right for every part of it's body. Overall, a good piece for what I think it seems to be aiming at.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/lethecl4.png?0.79370800%201215816755
An avatar? I can see it's only a head and it looks way too small to be anything else. From the expression on her face, me thinks she is sad. And for a cat lady, she should be happy . I was never keen on drawing cat people, but the ears look like they were copy/pasted. The shading, however, is good, the colors used as the shadows complement the skin color. The hair is also done well, the shading matches where it should be. Overall a good avatar, if I was into cats, I would definitely use it.

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I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.




Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/11/2008 21:03:42 >
AQ  Post #: 451
7/12/2008 2:30:37   
The Chaos Slayer
Member

My art:
Example 1 <The quality is very poor for some reason
Example 2

Constructive Criticism:

Piece 1
The size is a good thing here. It's not to big and it's not to small. All the part look like they line up accordingly. It's slightly messy but it also looks like an unfinished product so with some touch ups, it will probably clear up those. It's easy to see a lot of deatail went into this. Looking at the left arm, it looks like it was down over multiple times to look good, and it looks wonderful. It really makes me appreciate the time that went into this. The chest is another example of this. As I said earlier, it looks unfinished from the cockpit, up. It looks like it could use a touch-up in that area. Overall, it looks like a fine piece of work that a lot of time and effort went into.

Piece 2
The ship is very brown, almost a little too much. It makes the characters stick out too much, especially the two in the middle with bright colors. Try throwing a little color on the sail to draw the attention away from the boat a little. For me at least, my eyes are drawn to the boat, even when I'm focusing on the people. The amount of people is perfect. There is not too many, so the boat isn't cluttered. There isn't to few eaither, so the boat isn't empty. The people in the middles clothing is a little too bright. It took some time, but when I noticed the shadows, I thought, Wow, that's some dedication to your art. The shadows were a nice touch, if the slightest. For me, the made the picture seem that much more alive. The people look like the don't belong on the boat. It's not that they aren't pirates, it's that the look like different art then the boat. The boat and the people are nice, but they clash a bit. The boats a little bland. A little more art on the boatm like a decorated flag, or a statue hanging of the frint of the boat will spice it up a little. Also, everything on the boat seems to be facing one way except for the sail. The sail looks like it is turned around. Overall, it is a nice piece of art that brings different elements to the table, even if they do clash a bit.

quote:

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/12/2008 14:45:29 >
AQ  Post #: 452
7/12/2008 16:48:58   
OmegaBreak
Member

Image 1: Scribble

Image 2 : Rainbow

Image 1: This image is good, it shows the fierceness of the artist as well as individuality, one of the most calling features is the head, it looks unique it's the persons otherness per say but the whole piece is beautiful

Image 2: This piece is outstanding, the sense of reality is immense, the use of colors is amazing , it says more than what the title says; I would say the the quote that describes this image the most is " an image is worth more than one thousand words"

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/13/2008 17:24:52 >
Post #: 453
7/12/2008 17:19:14   
raventribble
Member

Signiture One and big art

Critque One-
The Colour is amazing. It was the first thing I noticed out of it. It's very creative, I'm guessing, how they split up the colour between the render. Even though the text is the same colour as the picture, it stands out very well. The lighting and bluring around the edges of the render really helps put an effect that'll make somebody like it even more. Myself, I'm not a big fan on the render, but with the effects done to it, it makes it look good.

Critque Two- I believe the background could of been better. I think it's blurred to much, and not enough light. I understand it's suppose to be hazy, but I think he, or she, went over the line. Other then that, I like the liting on the edges of the render, that adds a good effect and makes you want to look at it more and take your eyes off the background.

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.



Wait, the image I gave critisim to changed while I was writing this? Is that bad? The first one was the purple and yellow background.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/sentimento.png?0.56044800%201215897642 second critique can't find first yet.

found it! First critque http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/desire.jpg?0.58306700%201215897848

Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/13/2008 17:25:19 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 454
7/13/2008 17:16:24   
Poetic
Member

Decent Clown Pic
Cute Lil Dude

Critique One - Pretty good. Well done on the creative side, but needs some serious touch ups. All of it is symmetrical except the center, which kind of throws the entire thing off. This may be a design preference on your part, but at least take it into consideration. The foot on the left (the robot's right) looks flat. It should be rounded out more. The circles on the top lack depth. Everything else looks good save for the laser beam. It curves. Even though Wanted says that bullets don't fly straight, lasers do. Overall a rather cool pic.

Critique Two - Extremely well done. I can't find a thing wrong with it. It looks like it was done pixel by pixel in Paint, and that requires major amounts of patience. I'd encourage you to work larger, but whatever floats your boat.

quote:

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Approved. Keep working on your CC.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/13/2008 17:25:45 >
AQ  Post #: 455
7/13/2008 17:53:29   
AppelX
Member

1st Sig

2nd Sig

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1st Constructive Criticism
Picture 1

Nice colors, they express a warm feeling. also nice "neon" on the background, maybe you could add some depth.
The txt is rather small, perhaps it would be wise to enlarge the font a bit?
Overal good sig.

2nd Constructive Criticism
Picture 2

I love how you did the light, the composition is great!
Also i like the the name, it fits in with the sig. The txt blends with the background very well.
You could have made the hair a bit more shiny though. same on the top part of the guitar.
Overal great sig, it's expression is very relaxing.

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quote:

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/13/2008 18:16:40 >
AQ  Post #: 456
7/14/2008 9:29:15   
fygi
Member

Greetings and Salutations;

Image 1

This image looks like a work in progress to me. The basic idea is there; the dragon is in an interesting position. His body is facing away from the viewer but he is looking over his shoulder. This is an interesting position because its not the generic body stance of dragons as seen in the AE games. The originality of the design is also appealing, Its head is slightly equin. The addition of hand-type-things to the end of his wings and manga eyes s make it seem more human like and less dangerous. The only bad thing about the picture is that the coloring is a little ' rough'. The colors are picked nicely but they are applied without any detail especially the beigh/off-white stripes look sloppy. If i'd have to give a final sentence to supply my feelings towards this picture it would be: An original and harmless cute dragon but the coloring needs work.


Image 2

this image immeditaly caught my attention. The use of a female-main-character is not seen alot and this image makes me wonder ' why not' . What i like the most is that the whole image is edited. Even the names of the attacks and the enemy is original. I think the armors are drawn from scrap because they dont look like any other DF armor. The ammount of detail is amazing. The only things that dissapoint me is that the faces of the ' Escorts' seem a bit unfinished. The Priest looks too dull and needs the same ammount of detail as the other characters. The use of detail on this picture truly shows potential but the lack of detail on some parts brings down the quality.

My art/projects:

I enjoy working with Adobe Photoshop and these are my two latest pieces:
http://i35.tinypic.com/71600n.jpg - a view of the Sandsea made in the collage style of the famous artist: David Hockney
http://i33.tinypic.com/21tt6r.jpg an Elf Lord i drew using my graphics tablet, in AQW style.

Im also working on an AQW fanSite: http://www.aqw-thefansite.tk/ . The Artwork is mostly done by Tomix but all the coding is mine. i used Adobe DreamWeaver for this.

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


-Fygi

Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/14/2008 19:18:40 >
AQ DF MQ AQW  Post #: 457
7/14/2008 13:21:46   
MonsterEnergy
Member

Example 1 (sig)

Example 2 (banner)

CC
Image 1 The render looks great,the background has good texture but needs some more darkness,lighting is ok needs some improvement,font is to small kinda hard to read.Over all it looks great just needs a little improvement.

Image 2 The renders good,its to dark needs better lighting, i like the background but it is to sharp needs some blur and more swirls, needs some color. it definitely stands out but like i said before to sharp needs some more improvement.everything else looks great.

quote:

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/14/2008 19:19:10 >
DF  Post #: 458
7/14/2008 20:13:26   
Solin
Member

Alt. Image 1

The dragon was drawn very well. The details and shading are done nicely, yet near the bottom of the page, the dragon is unfinished. This should be finished for it to look better. Also, the constrast between the dragon and the dentist is stark. The dragon is well drawn and detailed, while the dentist looks like he was drawn very quickly with little or no thought of the quality. There are hardly any details, and no shading. Also, the speech bubble and the ladder are unfinished. Overall, though, it is a good picture.

Alt. Image 2

It is very small, so it is hard for me to see. From what I can see, though, the armor is fairly bland, and there aren't many details to the whole thing. The color scheme is good, and, though that is fairly bland too, it makes it look like the canine it was supposed to be. Try putting some symbols or graphics on the armor, and maybe a some more colors that pop out at you on the armor, gold is nice for that, red too.

My Work:

Link 1

Link 2

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I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

~Solin

Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/15/2008 19:46:38 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 459
7/15/2008 19:29:16   
fish4me
Member

my work.... http://i312.photobucket.com/albums/ll342/fish4me_2008/Picture82.png
and http://i312.photobucket.com/albums/ll342/fish4me_2008/Picture67.png

image one: nice but a little blurry, increaseing or decreaceing the size a bit, other than that its perfect

image two: that is a very nice sig, other than me not being into that kind of stuff it is perfect

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, i can be removed from the gallery and the forums themeselves.

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/15/2008 19:46:53 >
MQ  Post #: 460
7/16/2008 9:04:51   
margus20000
Member

1. Chrismas card...
This will happened when you are bad boy before Chrismas HOU HOU HOU...
This is only black version :D:D:D
2. Valencia spirit...
Valencia spirit and hes moves...

I will be happy when I may get my first gallery, secondly I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, i can be removed from the gallery and the forums themeselves...
I am estonian, my excuses, when I have any thing wrong...
I know, that I aren't very talky...

Not approved. Reread the rules.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/16/2008 19:29:56 >
DF  Post #: 461
7/16/2008 10:35:50   
fish4me
Member

my work.... http://i312.photobucket.com/albums/ll342/fish4me_2008/Picture82.png
and http://i312.photobucket.com/albums/ll342/fish4me_2008/Picture67.png

alt image one: the dragon is amazing, but the dentist makes it look like a child decided to doodle on it, the words are hard to read and the speech bubble is incomplete

alt image two: good but the boat looks too castle like, and the front needs to curve inward. the prow should be thicker and oars should be parshaly visible on the right hand side.

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, i can be removed from the gallery and the forums themeselves.

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/16/2008 19:30:09 >
MQ  Post #: 462
7/16/2008 22:53:33   
Vixolus
Member

My work Image 1]
My other work Image 2]

Image 1: The shading is nice but I think the lighter green colors on the wings should blend in more with the darker green of the wing, to make it less chunky. The yellow-green stripes should also be more shaded in with the body.
Everything really should be shaded more, except for the body colors, those are nicely shaded and blends with the image.

Image 2: A nice pirate ship of sprites.. nicely done with the different colors. The only 3 things I see wrong would be, that the arrow isn't matched with the bulls-eye, the target it slanted, so the arrow should be slanted. The oars coming out of the boat shouldn't be chopped off by the black opening, i think it should be flowing into it, so it is actually assembled onto the ship. And that the sail could use more color.


"I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves."


Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/18/2008 22:35:01 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 463
7/19/2008 11:49:29   
Lintire
Member

My work 1:
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t240/Nitecreeper/Mech_Sig.png

My work 2:
http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t240/Nitecreeper/Dante_sig.png

Image 1: "Are you happy now?"
The use of c4ds in this image is very obvious, sticking out like a sore thumb - and they clutter the image. The flow is nice, and the background images have certainly lent it depth. Just you might want to work blending in everything more - especially the c4ds. It gives the impression that you gave all other areas a lot of thought - but you chucked a coupled of c4ds on a whim, just to bustle things up. You may also want to draw more attention to your focal point - my eyes are stuck on the plain white little c4ds... Overall, good job - but you might want to improve just that little bit...

Image 2: "Pae, the ravenous gecko"
This tag is unique, I can say that. You've kept with the theme, green, and tried to outline the text and render as much as possible - a decision I can respect. My pointers are that it looks pretty dull. The stock of a leaf texture that you've used is good, but perhaps not good enough when it comes to drawing attention to the focal. The liquefy and glow effects are good too, but then again not really good enough. You might want to consider using the same effects, except on a c4d or fractul. But overall, nice job.

"I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves." I mean it.

Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/20/2008 15:27:14 >
AQ MQ  Post #: 464
7/20/2008 12:21:17   
MonsterEnergy
Member

Art 1

Art 2

CC
Image 1
The Render is sort of confusing it doesn't match the colors,on side is light and one is dark if the colors were a little lighter it might match the render more you should some more brown and black and grey instead of a purplish tone, i think the tag is to cluttered render needs to be smaller,it doesn't flow together the render and the background are in the opposite directions,the text should be tad larger and the font doesn't flow with tag,some parts of this tag kind of confuse me some i understand but very little.Overall this tag is confusing it is ok not the greatest you could make and i know you can make better.

Image 2
The Colors and the render go together perfectly! Great Job! it would help a lot if the colors on the right side were a little lighter and on the left side it would have helped to be a little darker,the text really dont go with the tag good color pick though,unlike the tag before this one is a little empty maybe adding a C4D might have helped that,i think the tag flows well together,the render was very well made good font,text wasn't very good,the lighting could have been better. Overall this tag was good but not great,it was like before an ok tag,you could have improved on it lot more.
quote:

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.



Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/20/2008 15:27:26 >
DF  Post #: 465
7/21/2008 6:23:17   
Bradakhan
Member

Pic 1 = Edited Characters
Pic 2 = Comic

Alt Image 1
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/24gkqvr.jpg
Pros
I like the amount of detail put into this robot so that it is not blank and boring. I also like that the 3-Dness of the robot gives it a more realistic look and shows more detail from an angle.
Cons
There is not much I dislike on the picture except the fact that the face is just scribbled and barely drawn so it looks out of place compared to the rest of the robot.

Alt Image 2
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/ragnasqj4.png
Pros
I like that there is shading on the face and clothing which makes it more 3-D and that the eyes look very realistic and life like. I also like that the hair style and body shape are realistic an what normal people look like
Cons
I dislike that the boots hae very litte shading and that the right leg (our left) looks very square and robotic. I also dislike that the chain mail has no shading and tht near the center it is just scribbled and un-neat compared to the top of the chain mail.

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.


< Message edited by Bradakhan -- 7/24/2008 5:33:07 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 466
7/21/2008 19:31:44   
Captain Graarg
Member

Pic#1 = Aqworlds avvy.
Pic#2 = Shop Sig.

Alt Image 1
I really like the dragon, i like the way that the textures were used with a pencil to make it look real, the way the lighting is shown also adds to this aspect. . i also like the humor of the dentist giving the dragon a dental check-up. However, i do not like the way that so much time was spent on the dragon and the dentist is a mere box-figure. i think that a little color would make the dragon more fierce looking. i also didn't understand why that the pencil marks went beyond the picture in a way that didn't make it look very professional. i think that if you were to keep the dentist as is, at least to finish the text bubble. 6.5/10

Alt Image 2
I love this picture! i like the ears on the person in a way that makes it look so much like a cartoon, the slight shadow in it making it a very bright picture. i also like the way again, that the shadowing make the picture as 3d as could be. i like the soft touch in the eyes, i felt mesmerized and believed that she was real (disregaurding the rest of it). i like the simple outline in black just to draw the viewer to the image. There was not much t dislike other than there was no border and that i felt like a a simple bluish background would top it off and make it a perfect 10! 9/10.

quote:

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/21/2008 20:34:35 >
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 467
7/22/2008 12:05:22   
TopTop18
Member

I want to post int he multimedia section to get help and improve my coding.
Current project - Character selector for an upcoming RPG - not done yet


[alt image 1]

A very nice dragon! It has good shading and is good colored. The red accents make a very nice contrast. Although there are a few things that can be better, such as it overall looks a bit to dark to me, his body seems to heavy for it's legs and his head seems to big, it's almost as big as his body!
Overall i think it's a very good drawing, but there are some things that can be improved.

[alt image 2]

When i first looked at this picture i was like WOW! it has very nice textures and it is beautifull colored. There are only two things that could be a little better. The first one is the elbows. They seem impossible according to the hands. The second thing is the shading. This could've been done better. You don't see the shadow of it's head at hsi shoulders and his skirt doesn't even have shadows. I can't really see where the light is coming from. But in some other places shadow is good, like his nose and his shoes.
Overall i think it's a beautifull picture. There are only a few small things that can be improved.


quote:

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Approved

Thanks Grafh!

< Message edited by toptop18 -- 7/27/2008 16:57:05 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 468
7/23/2008 8:10:01   
alexanderis2
Member

1.
Image 1

Image 2

2.
Image 1 - I like the Wings, Tail, Horns, Legs, Arms and the whole Dragon. The Wings Tail Horns Legs Arms and the whole armour is painted nice. The Mouth is excellent, and the colours are nice too. It is coloured good and theres no White Places and other Mistakes. The Right wing would require a little paint like the left one.

Image 2 - I like that some ship parts are Bright Brown and some Dark Brown. The Flag is painted nice too. I like the whole ship. The people are painted nice too. but it would require a Blue Backround so it would be water.

3.
I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/23/2008 21:13:00 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 469
7/24/2008 6:33:52   
Bradakhan
Member

Pic 1 = Edited Characters
Pic 2 = Comic

Image 1
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/mystery.jpg
I thought that it was a pretty good, coordinated picture with not a lot wrong in it.
I think the colours are right for most of the picture except the black hair clashes with the light purple and makes around the girl look like you didn't take as much time there.
Everything is placed out uncluttered and everything is going the same way very smoothly.
The text is easy to read and is a nice colour which is similar to the background colour. The border is small and it takes a while to notice it's actually there.
I like that the background is misty and that the whole picture is very mysterious. I don't like that there is a purple flower in the middle of the picture because it looks out of place

Image 2
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/sentimento.png
I thought this was a brilliant picture with almost nothing wrong.
The background colour is perfect for this picture! the colours match the person (don't know if it's a he/she0 and there guitar and it couldn't be better.
Everything is spaced out neatly and no part of it is cluttered.
The text is coloured so it is easy to see but it's font is very boring and basic compared to the rest of the picture.
What I thought was really good was that it looked that it was out in space because of the bckground and what looks like a planet behind them.

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/24/2008 20:11:36 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 470
7/24/2008 7:15:37   
Carrotcat
Member
 

 I do mainly Digital art with a tablet.(not all of it will be as boring as the images I supply below; I do several kinds of digital art)
http://panda-explosion.deviantart.com/art/Turtle-91746100
http://panda-explosion.deviantart.com/art/Grizzly-Bear-92000563
click the pictures to enlarge them


Image one
http://forums2.battleon.com/f/interceptor.asp?dest=http://www.azupload.com/displayImage.php/setid11272.png

As soon as you look at it, it makes you think 'oh wow'. I like how the colours fit in with the girl, implying she is in some sort of metalwork factory and the colours are very warm, looking at the background and sparks. A few things wrong with this picture, you cannot tell her shoe from the actual foot, and this is not helped by seemingly random music notes coming off the 'sweet misery'. Also, if the theme is meant to be in a metalwork factory or something like that, the font of 'Sweet misery' does not really fit in with the theme, one more thing, im not a huge fan of the blue blur at the top of the sig, It just doesn't work in my opinion. Saying this, in general the picture is quite good.

Image 2
http://forums2.battleon.com/f/interceptor.asp?dest=http://www.azupload.com/displayImage.php/setid11273.png

I like this one very much the lighting combined with the background looks to me like some sort of dream or a personal heaven. I also like how the light plays off the folds of the girls' top, reminds me slightly of Desmond, the protagonist of Assassins Creed, the light plays off him just like that. To be quite honest I cannot see anything particularly wrong with it (other than little things like how the girls' middle and third finger of her right had look as though they are molded together - but this isn't reallly a flaw, easily percepted as a trick of the light.)

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/24/2008 20:11:53 >
Post #: 471
7/25/2008 16:43:25   
//.Shadow.\\
Member

I Was Finally Approved! Post Changed!

< Message edited by joshua2125 -- 8/9/2008 10:07:00 >

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AQ DF MQ  Post #: 472
7/26/2008 2:43:45   
MrGarageman
Member

Example 1

Example 2
(sorry for the poor quality, I just got my life back so I will be drawing more and a lot better)

Critique 1: First of all, I want to say that the dragon is quite impressive, although it could use more detail, especially since it's a dragon, it lacks scale-detail, the thick linework kills the attempt at realism, It could use thinner lines for the outer line, and the eyes could use a bit of glare, they look dead and soul-less. That should be change, unless it's more of a comedic doodle. And the man-doodle I found it to be unnecessary. Shading is weak(although I understand, it's extremely hard to shade properly, especialy for lizards and bird-types)
http://forums2.battleon.com/f/interceptor.asp?dest=http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/fy2x4h.jpg

Critique 2: I guess this is an edited screenshot?, I like the good guy's sprite works, although I'm not too fond with the enemy. It's not as detailed as the other three, unfortunately. And instead of just slapping them on the screen, you could easily whipped out a good background that goes with the sprites(the sprite-ey type). It just doesn't match.
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/scene2wj4.png?0.43247000%201217054923

quote:

"I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves."


Approved

Omg. Oh yeah. :D

< Message edited by MrGarageman -- 7/26/2008 18:10:44 >
Post #: 473
7/26/2008 4:11:35   
Rynkar
Member

sigs

and comics

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/bigship3jx9.png
the pixels are to visible and a bunch of random things are happening and I'm wondering how that thing got into the lookout nest theirs target practice witch doesn't seem right on a ship but the ship looks like its ready for a round the world adventure witch i love.


http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/zsvo6c.png

its head looks a little bulky for the body and the right wing seems a little bent up and the chest are different sizes witch makes it look like its muscles are oddly out of place but other than that the dragon looks very well done especially with the coloring and the horn shapes.




I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/26/2008 15:05:48 >
AQ DF  Post #: 474
7/26/2008 5:44:11   
//.Shadow.\\
Member

Approval Request for the Gallery and sub areas



Try 3 of 2

Image one CC Improved ~ Requested By Graph (Image Changed While Writing.
http://forums2.battleon.com/f/interceptor.asp?dest=http://www.azupload.com/displayImage.php/setid11272.png
Picture Was Geeko

As soon as you look at it, it makes you think 'cool' it is hard to belive that anyone could draw like this and edit a picture like this. I like how the colours fit in with the geekco, its like its all one picture (As it should look) as some sort of look look i placed to pictures together. The Colours are very calm, and relaxing, as when looking at the background the green textures make it look almost real. A few things could be improved like a little lighter color on the text so it stands out more. Also, if the theme is meant to be in a tree you have made it very well as most coulors match the tree coulors. But the general picture is Exelllent.

Image 2
http://forums2.battleon.com/f/interceptor.asp?dest=http://www.azupload.com/displayImage.php/setid11273.png
Morning Dance

I like this one very much as there is like a watery affect in the bottom cournor which almost looks like she is in the shower. You have used a good ammount of space and spread evreything out nicly. I like where you have placed the text as it is not hiding none of the picture. The lighting combined with the background looks like a dream to me. I also like the colors i think they were a good choice. The light plays off this picture rather well and i bet it took a while to create. To honest there is nothing particulary wrong just again the font and the font color are hard to see. But other than that nice art.

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Also images on next page.
Please approve me as i have worked really hard to improve my CC

Better, approved. Place yourself on Pending again.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 7/26/2008 15:06:29 >
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