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6/29/2008 0:14:16   
Baker
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Chapter One

A slight breeze whistled through the peaceful garden, blowing cool air on its inhabitants. Regal and proud, a slight man with a thin gold hoop resting on the crown of his head overlooked this beautiful haven. Luscious greens and exotic flowers had been nursed here in the kings’ personal garden for centuries, making the small plot of land far more important to the royal family than the duchies and counties that had also grown alongside their ancestors. Situated within the modest walls of Arundel Castle, the garden commonly attracted many of the royal family members and honored guests, and tonight was no exception.

The servants had scattered tables among the carefully-tended flora, and the flickering glow of the candles merrily lit the enclosure: a wonderful retreat indeed from the bustling marketplace that even at this hour flowed outside the castle and into the darkened streets of the town of Arundel.

Turning back to his family and dinner mates, the king wondered if the gods could possibly bless him more than they had…


The man known only as Baker strode into the tavern, tossing his dusty and worn leather coat over the chair nearest to the bar. The grizzled bartender and owner of the dive, recognizing his striking features and impressive, broad-shouldered stature, slid over his largest tankard of ale. Taking the vessel in his scarred and calloused hand, the newcomer took a swig and gave the barkeep an approving nod before settling into his drink. Nursing his cool beverage, he sat and rested his leaden arms and legs after another grueling day at work, carrying out light conversations with the many townspeople who came and went.

As the light of the afternoon faded to dusk, all but a few of the most avid bar goers left the tavern. The cleaning maid found a pair of men seated at a table, gulping down the dregs of their drinks. Suspiciously, they were hunched low over the solitary low burning candle that occupied the center of their table and muttered back-and-forth; they had acted this way for quite some time now, and the woman was by now itching to be rid of them. As soon as the maid came within earshot of the pair, the larger, burlier man jerked his head toward her, cutting off the speech of his hooded companion.

All this Baker warily watched: every moment, every movement, every sound. He continued to feign sips of the drink and converse with the bartender as he quietly and cautiously observed the happenings on the other side of the cozy room.

The two men at the table turned toward the serving maid and, as the hooded man swiveled his head, a slight glint could be seen from under his cloak as the soft illumination of the candle caught something on his head. She had hardly begun to consider what could be the cause of this before he snatched the rough material with supernatural speed; he drew it closer around his scalp and looked blankly at the woman as if nothing had occurred. The nature of the look caused her to sweep the incident from her mind, and she continued about her duties as usual.

This detail was not so easily forgotten by the observer at the bar, however, and he made a mental note of the curiosity.

After refusing the offer of refills and food from the maid, the shady pair turned back to their conversation. They continued to glance over every so often at the bar and its only remaining occupant: the very man who was carefully keeping track of their movements. The bartender – to whom confrontations were no mystery – saw through the strangers’ façade of two casual businessmen and also Baker’s distracted small talk. Instead, he recognized opponents dancing around and feeling each other out. To the bartender, they seemed to be making sure that Baker had not left his seat without their noticing: something he found suspicious but attributed to his imaginative mind and brushed off. He was used to odd behavior as the proprietor of a somewhat shady establishment, and nothing significant had ever happened in the past.

Meanwhile, Baker prepared for the worst. He swigged the remainder of his drink, casually tossing down several copper coins to cover the bill and a modest tip. Afterwards, he clumsily slung his jacket over his shoulders and headed out the door. Into the pitch-black streets of the town he went, staggering and swaying to exaggerate his intoxication.

Once outside and into the cold, dark town there and out of sight of the tavern’s final few occupants, he dropped his act and waited just outside the only exit of the tavern. Baker peered through the frosted windows of the building, tensing as the pair of strangers seated at the table drew short, curved daggers from their cloaks. Bowling over tables, chairs, and the employees of the bar with much commotion, they sprinted to the door.

The newly armed companions emerged through the thick wooden doorway and were immediately leapt upon and assailed by heavy blows. After a hard kick was landed directly on his wrist, the larger man allowed his blade to drop, and it clattered on the cobblestones until it came to a rest at the pointed tips of Baker’s hardy leather boots. A further swift kick felled the man; he fell to his knees, clutching his wrist that now hung at an unnatural angle.

Baker quickly snatched up the fallen dagger, wheeling to face his remaining opponent. He speedily struck forward and made a sloppy slash at the hooded man. The stranger easily parried and refrained from attacking himself. He instead settled back into a mobile, defensive stance and waited for Baker to strike again.

Untrained in formal combat, Baker attempted all of the few strikes he knew of, but to no avail. The hooded man easily blocked everything and smugly sneered at Baker. Desperate and exhausted by the constant motion, Baker made a wild, desperate charge forward, in an effort to cut downward onto his foe’s head or neck. This tactic rather backfired, however: the hooded man simply stepped aside lightly, giving Baker a slight nudge past him. He shifted his weapon so he was holding the wicked blade in his opposite hand with the handle presented as a club and shortly ended the fight by giving Baker several sharp raps to the back of the head with the pommel of the dagger. Lights flashed in front of Baker’s eyes, and he sank to the ground.

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7/7/2008 22:16:42   
Baker
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Chapter Two

A young boy gazed into the familiar face, puzzling over just what foolery his uncle was up to now. His arm drew back and the boy saw the glint of the blazing sun flashing off the long, shining object held in his hand. Mesmerized by the object swinging down at him, the young one simply sat where he was in the long grass. Suddenly, he was thrown about, flung to the ground and covered by a large hulk of a man. The sword, which the young boy now recognized as that of his father, finished its downward stroke and thudded into the ground. At this moment he was violently seized again, this time lifted off his feet and handed up to a soldier on a horse amidst a woman’s screams, men hollering, and the clash of metal on metal.

Frightened and dazed, the boy did not resist as this strange, armored man seated him tight against the horse. The soldier hurriedly insured that the boy was well protected by his armor and set the horse in motion. The two galloped away from the scene of the “game” with all haste, the continued commotion diminishing by the second. The armor-clad guardian slowed the breakneck pace of the horse after a quarter of an hour, and the group settled into a more comfortable, but still hurried, pace.

The constant motion soothed the effete child, who fell into a fitful slumber, waking at random intervals with a start as the horse jostled over rocks and other obstacles on the road…


Baker sat straight up, and instantly regretted it. The blood rushed to the injury in his head, causing sharp pain. He fell back onto the coarse hay atop the hard wooden base of the cart that he was sitting in or, perhaps, in which he was confined, and lay prone as the throbbing ebbed. Through the cloud of agony, Baker gazed at the strikingly blue and cloudless sky stretching above him. Once the sensation subsided and Baker regained his senses, he took stock of his surroundings.

The thick, rough rope that bound his hands tightly together scraped his skin raw and itched fiercely with his every movement; his feet were similarly bound, although his tough pants and boots protected his skin from the majority of the irritation. All around him in the bed of the cart was hay: his uncomfortable bedding for the past several hours since his assault and capture. A stocky man clad in typical farming clothes that Baker did not recognize from the town or as one of the men who had attacked him stoically drove the cart.

This man paid no attention to Baker's stirring and remained firmly seated on the wooden bench. His only movements were slight swivels of the head to keep his eyes on the worn dirt road ahead and the sturdy mule that slowly and laboriously hauled the cart. His pointed indifference in regards to his prisoner gave Baker a good chance to observe this stranger in closer detail.

Thin, straw-colored hair protruded from the cracked leather hat jammed atop his head and, following the muscled neck down, Baker noticed the small black and red falcon tattoo that was imprinted on the tanned, rough skin just above the collar of his unadorned frayed shirt. Filing this curiosity away for later use, Baker turned his mind to escaping whatever fate his captors had planned for him at the end of this journey.

He began by testing the tightness of the ropes, attempting to slip his hands out of the ones that bound them. Frustratingly, however, all he succeeded in was further irritation of his chafed skin. Next, he rubbed the restraints against the scuffed and distressed wood of the side of the cart, attempting to fray it so he could either slip his hands out or work it apart; again, nothing. Climbing out of the cart was out of the question with his hands and legs tied up, and the constant jostling of the cart quickly robbed Baker of any balance he was able to gain. Baker also decided that even if he should somehow manage to heave himself over the side of the cart, tumbling off the road and into the sewage ditch on its side – all the while being tied up – was an experience he would rather not put himself through. This did not stop him from attempting to free himself, but no matter the method of escape, freedom continued to elude him. He eventually settled after what he estimated to be an hour from the movement of the sun in the sky, wrists raw and numb from his bindings. Baker shut his eyes tight to fight off his returning headache and conserve his energy and as he rested, began to prepare himself for his future in captivity.

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9/3/2008 1:18:05   
Baker
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Chapter Three

A large tear crept down the chubby cheeks of the boy as he watched the muddied horse galloping away, a rider bent low over its back. The dust kicked up by the rapidly vanishing rider settled as the adolescent remained on his knees, staring after the man he had come to know so well in their journey. For two months, the boy and the soldier had traveled. Although the boy did not know the purpose of the trip, the constant dodging of patrols and sneaking about towns delighted him, as did meeting various people who gave the pair food, directions, and fresh horses as needed. Then the two had arrived at this place, a small, unimportant village tucked away in the hilly southern province claimed by Arundel. The kingdom, however, had no presence in the province and the villagers lived outside the reach of the king. The fleeing child was brought to the dwelling place of a humble farmer and his wife. He was told that these people were his cousins – they were in fact relatives of the soldier – and that he was to stay with them until an agent of the king came for him. With any luck, the boy would blend in with the farmers' many children, and he would soon forget about Arundel, his parents, and his royal blood.

After a time, the tears dried and, with swollen and reddened eyes, the boy stood and turned to look at the kind smiles of his new parents as they stood on the porch of the small wooden cottage that was to be his new home.


The uneven road smoothed out as the cart ground to a halt. Baker, prone in the bottom of the cart, heard the driver disembark and found himself confronted by yet another unfamiliar face. Resplendent in heavy armor and an ornate gold and blue military uniform that contrasted sharply with his rough demeanor, the soldier bore a curved knife with which he slashed through Baker’s bonds. Immediately thereafter, the arms of several additional soldiers roughly clutched the prisoner’s arms and legs and hauled him out of the cart. Baker was then set on the smooth stones of the road, whereupon he marveled at his surroundings.

The road he stood upon ended at the magnificent stone castle that loomed over him, the towers reaching to the heavens. Beautiful banners that matched the garbs of the soldiers surrounding Baker fluttered from the ramparts and towers, proudly displaying the striking image of a sparrow. A tremendous turreted keep flying the same impressive symbol dominated the center of the castle, clearly much more than just the residency of the ruling lord. Soldiers gravely patrolled the ramparts and stood beside the gatehouse, closely scrutinizing all who bustled into the castle from the town that stood in the shadows of the defensive structure. A ditch scattered with sharp wooden stakes surrounded the towering walls of the castle, further emphasizing the feeling of the place; despite the busy townspeople going about their business, this place was a place of strength and defense, the seat of power.

The massive stone structure stretched far into the sky, its imposing stone face broken only by the dozens of arrow slits strategically placed to allow defenders to rain death upon besiegers while remaining protected themselves. An iron portcullis held the only entrance to the building firmly shut. Beyond this barrier stood thick wooden doors bearing no sign of a lock of other device that could be used to open them.

Suddenly, a hail rang out from above the gate. Startled, Baker darted his eyes upwards and found himself looking into the harsh eyes of yet another soldier. Instead of the purples and gold worn by Baker’s bodyguard, however, this guard’s uniform bore corssing patterns of black and red. As he conversed with the leader of the earthbound troop, his deep voice radiated confidence and authority. He questioned the purpose of the group’s approach, and dismissed the guards once he appeared satisfied. The soldiers stood at attention and saluted as one before turning on their heel and hurrying back from whence they came. A grinding began, and the portcullis began to rise up from the ground.

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