It was mainly in the last poem. Might've happened in the others, but I can't remember too well. For example:
A trance that is like a train.
How on earth is a trance like a train? Sounds like you're using that word only to rhyme.
You make my heart soar to a greater extent.
This wasn't quite as severe as the above line, but it still reads weirdly. Perhaps: "You make my heart soar without end." or something.
Now this, in all honesty, may sound like a load of bull.
A rather different problem, but using a semi-swear word did kind ruin the grace of the poem. Might be better to find something that rhymes better and sounds more elegant.
I will always love you, even if everything seems tart.
Eh, this is rather forced rhyming again. Not the best ending. Perhaps: "I will always love you, 'til death do us apart." or "I will always love you, in death do we part. " A bit cliche, esp. the first suggestion, but better than something about tarts anyways... =P
Yeah, so that's what I meant.
My Word is kinda weird. On this computer, it does nothing. On my other computer, it forces me to capitalize every line of poetry regardless of whether I want to. I usually do, but sometimes I don't while doing freeverse.