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11/6/2008 7:06:37

Mittoo
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Brothers In Blood

Perhaps not the longest of prologues, but it sums up Plaeto fairly well.

Well, hai. This'll be the first of hopefully many long, interesting and sxc posts, in which I show how awesome I am at prose (no, really), or perhaps just where I look for ways to deflate my over-sized ego and get a brilliant story at the same time. I'm all about the double rewards here.

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11/8/2008 21:23:03

r0de0b0y
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K'ay...I was expecting a shorter prologue. SHAME ON YOU! Although I have to admit, I enjoyed your style and rather pessimistic description. Sight, taste, smell...it's all here, so if this was your first try than you deserve like...a medal. I do hope you'll o on. No ego deflating until you meet the big boys and girls.

No spellcheck for you. However, the grammar seemed...kinda funky. Sometimes, it's better to say "fire" than "a fire".

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