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11/29/2008 21:10:02   
Khelios
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^Link to Poetry Thread^


Why Purple People Eater? I edit in purple, and jokingly am called PersonEater and Humanchewer on mIRC >.> There's your explanation.

I will try to keep all poetry I compose here. I might forget to announce new poems I added, so if you like them, keep checking and you might see something new.

I hope you like my poetry - feel free to comment!

< Message edited by Personater -- 11/30/2008 0:24:15 >
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11/30/2008 19:14:38   
.Discipline
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You seem to be starting off in poetry the same way I did. Picking a word out and giving it a long and deep definition through verse. I like it.
Your flow is off in several places, you need to set line/syllable limits or codes and adhere to them to help you maintain perfect flow, so the reader doesn't become distracted.
What I would like to see from you next is some abstract poetry. Instead of picking a subject, try letting two or three themes flow into each other with elegance, if you do that, I can almost guarantee you will create inhuman beauty. You have the power! Now go forth and use it, young Personater!
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