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3/28/2009 21:55:24   
UrufuHiken
Creative!


 *shrugs*
Post #: 51
3/29/2009 16:42:39   
bobby1013852
Member

xkiller killer-x bloodhunter ak-21 the dark warrior
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 52
3/29/2009 23:53:24   
Crimzon5
Member

*thinks* Your character will have to use an alias then.

Teaser Pic for Act 3 Part2



ANd no... that is not Rebecca's Fiance... he's just coincidentially blond as well

spoiler:

Her fiance dies


< Message edited by Crimzon5 -- 3/29/2009 23:55:36 >
AQ DF  Post #: 53
3/30/2009 0:18:09   
marvin_the_robot
Member

Oooh, flames. And swords for hands.

*thinks about Edward Scissorhands on fire*

Hurr hurr...

*cough* Anyway >_>

I can now say that I've read through everything now.

As such, now I can actually start looking for mistakes ^_^;
DF  Post #: 54
3/30/2009 0:27:35   
Crimzon5
Member

Thanks my robotic friend ^_^

And c'mon... the swords are just covering his hands
AQ DF  Post #: 55
3/31/2009 6:50:24   
Crimzon5
Member

Uhh... Act 3 part 2 up. Unfortunately... her part is... too long... so I had to split it up to 3 parts. Krey (the pyromantic knight in the teaser pic) will appear on the next update :D
AQ DF  Post #: 56
4/2/2009 0:51:59   
Crimzon5
Member

Okay... Acts 1-3 finished

Main story begins
AQ DF  Post #: 57
4/2/2009 0:56:50   
marvin_the_robot
Member

What.

Main story? ;_;

*headsbangs from stress*
DF  Post #: 58
4/2/2009 1:00:24   
Crimzon5
Member

Acts 1-3 were each divided into 2 parts:
1) a first-person narrative (not necessarily the/a main character though)
2) then a 3rd person narrative

Also, the acts were... focused on 3 seperate stories... which were somehow connected to one place: the Eastern Caverns

Now all those characters have gathered in one place. Fun begins
AQ DF  Post #: 59
4/5/2009 1:20:34   
Crimzon5
Member

Act 4, if lucky, will be posted later today. :D
AQ DF  Post #: 60
4/5/2009 8:27:32   
Crimzon5
Member

^And yeah... I'm lucky
AQ DF  Post #: 61
4/6/2009 9:54:17   
Elosix the Grimjaw
Member

quote:

# Race: Demigod (3/4)
# Alignment: The Kingdom

So his Granpa, Granma, 'dad/ma?' are gods(/demi gods?) and his 'dad/ma?' is humee? right?

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AQ  Post #: 62
4/6/2009 10:28:51   
Crimzon5
Member

His father is a/the god
his mother was a demigod (yeah... he married his own daughter)
his foster father is unmentioned... but let's say that he's half as well?

< Message edited by Crimzon5 -- 4/6/2009 10:29:09 >
AQ DF  Post #: 63
4/6/2009 22:55:57   
MeMoglin
Member

This story possesses a type of writing that I have never seen before. It is quite the story, hopefully it will be published and become a world famous book. I am quite amazed by your switches between emotions and physicals. I thought it would be quite hard ,but you accomplished it. Battle sequences were very descriptive. Way more descriptive than I have ever read. So all I can say is, write on! Congratulations! (Good job really, decided to use an even more compliment word to boost your confidence so you can keep on writing these amazing stories) Am I giving too much flattery? If I am, I'm sorry.
EDIT: I also found no errors. Good job! Keep it up and I also hope that your story that you created would be in-game. It would be an awesome saga for everyone. With all of the acts and things. I am sure (and hope) that the reward would be witnessing your creativity.

< Message edited by MeMoglin -- 4/7/2009 18:18:31 >

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Post #: 64
4/6/2009 23:15:51   
Crimzon5
Member

Wow! Gee, thanks. Flattery is okay... as long as it has evidence to back it up :D

< Message edited by Crimzon5 -- 4/6/2009 23:18:22 >
AQ DF  Post #: 65
4/9/2009 22:56:34   
bobby1013852
Member

cant wait man for the first chapter
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 66
4/11/2009 11:25:08   
Crimzon5
Member

^Already up! ^_^
AQ DF  Post #: 67
4/12/2009 9:47:58   
Crimzon5
Member

What makes a memory - chapter 2 - added. Heh, you might not like what you read about Alexander.

Expect... a lot of dialogues.

< Message edited by Crimzon5 -- 4/12/2009 9:49:24 >
AQ DF  Post #: 68
4/19/2009 4:42:55   
Crimzon5
Member

Chapter 3 up!

err... spoiler(?):




xD
AQ DF  Post #: 69
4/20/2009 18:03:54   
UrufuHiken
Creative!


 Doing good so far man, keep it up! I like where the story is going! (I think) And I am starting to really understand the characters. (I am?) Okay, the point being, your doing good, and I can't wait for more of the story, (and character background revelation.)

If I were to suggest one thing, it would be a slight modification in your character's descriptions; that you use hair-color as a repetitive description too often, and I would suggest trying other things. Other then that, I can't find many qualms with it.
Post #: 70
4/20/2009 19:33:20   
bobby1013852
Member

great work so far man
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 71
4/21/2009 7:42:52   
Crimzon5
Member

Yeah... hair has been used often. I'll think of something.
AQ DF  Post #: 72
5/8/2009 23:31:57   
Crimzon5
Member

I'm under a minor editting process. But as for chapter 4... I gotta find a "technique" to make multiple scenes.

In the mean time, enjoy Rebecca's new look (click):

Pic

< Message edited by Crimzon5 -- 5/12/2009 0:37:30 >
AQ DF  Post #: 73
5/11/2009 4:35:58   
Crimzon5
Member

Okay, chapter 4 is up

The title is a gag... you'll see why near the ending.
AQ DF  Post #: 74
5/12/2009 17:14:06   
UrufuHiken
Creative!


 Hey, Crimz!

Hehe, its like a pit... but wooden!

PS. Add more detail on the "wooden pit," I must know more!

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