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3/1/2009 16:08:44   
Omega1000
Member

1. Examples:
Good {AQW}
Evil {AQW}

2. CC:
1.

Very nice, the background is amazing, very detailed in lightning and clouds, but also featureless in landmarks, or even a sun, moon, stars, or building.. The intensity of the lightning is mirrored in the Costumed hero's body image, the way he reacts is as one who is in suffering, his hands spread wide in shock and pain. His body is very featured an pronounced, you can see his arms thrown back behind his back, leaving him in a exsposed position. You can see the water, electrified by the lightning, on his body, water in the air thrown by his cringing surounding him. All in all, a great pice of work.

9.5/10

2.

Nice. Very abstract and sureal, odd objects in the background and light coming from the figure's left give the impression of space. The figure itself is impressive, the hair thrown about the eyes uncarring, its face gives the impression of proudness and not being afraid. It is easy to imagin the figure taunting an opponent, or saying "Bring it on" due to it's proudness. It is a rather good piece of Artwork.

7/10

"I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves."

Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/4/2009 18:46:29 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 26
3/2/2009 18:55:44   
blzrkpr5
Member

Image 1
Image 2

Constructive Criticism:
Image 1
This image is very creative and attracts the eye very quickly. The firing weapon on the right side creates a feeling that this could be turned into something that can be used in an actual story or game. Everything in the picture looks proportional and each part of the machine contributes a positive aspect to the overall final design. Certain parts do however seemed like they were rushed, for instance, the gun barrels on the machines back do not have a sculpted top like you would expect from looking at the rest of the drawing. Also, the chest area of the machine is a little crowded with lines and curls, but that could be cleaned up very easily. With minor adjustments, this could be a very clean and neat project.
Image 2
This image is a very good start to what could be a masterful person. The cat-like details on the girls face really bring a new quality to the overall image. These details catch the eyes quickly. The color combinations between the tiger-orange and the green work really well together and are not a sore for the eye. The ears of the girl could be blended in slightly better to give the feel they are coming through her hair. I would like to see more of a finished body so that the viewer can really get a feel for what this person was made for. The shapes and lines that have been made so far flow well and look realistic.

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/4/2009 18:46:58 >
DF  Post #: 27
3/6/2009 11:58:11   
Mc Raza
Banned


 My work made for a friend.

Example 1

Example 2


Constructive Criticism For image 1

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/desire.jpg?0.37349900%201236357491
I really like this work it has really great colours and they all blend in and mix very well, I like how you have made the characters face look so-real it looks very good and the pixels are in good shape. I like the pink you have done it looks like the character is entering a whirlpool and the name at the bottom that says "Desire" looks very affective the font of the text is very good and matches the whole picture and the background of it.

Constructive Criticism Image 2:
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/Breath.png?0.82478300%201236357779
I like this signature it has good tone and the pixels are amazing it looks very real and it looks like a real person (i dont know if it is)
but it looks very cool. I like how you have put her in a posing position it looks very effective. Also the font of writing for the word breath looks very good. Last of all i like how in the bottom left corner you have put little star sort of things they look awesome with the picture. I really like this one good job :).

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


< Message edited by Mc Raza -- 3/8/2009 4:12:02 >
Post #: 28
3/6/2009 13:29:08   
Arctic Paladin
Member

Something isn't working... i got approved but i can't join approved artists so mabye i should post again(delete this if i'm not allowed)

Example 1
Example 2



I like how the woman is staring through you, as if you aren't there. I feel that the background goes well with it overall but the C4D on our left doesn't match well with the rest of the sig. But, having said that, i like how on our right there is a more warm feeling simplicity that isn't too cluttered. I feel that you used just the right amount of light to highlight the woman. I can't see a definite light source as the amount of light confuses this. The text i think is beautifully suited to the sig because it isn't too striking, so you can take in the whole image before seeing the text so you can understand it. The font is perfect and the hearts on the A of 'Are' are a nice touch. Overall though this is a great sig.


When i look at this sig i first see the render in the centre, and then my eyes are directed to the writing that matches allot of the image in color. I think that the font and underlining are appropriate. I know the background is quite dark to emphasize the render, but i think it should be lighter as it shows a person concentrating on their guitar all the time and a dark background doesn't copy that mood. The pattern on the chair she is sitting on is a nice touch. The lighting really made me go "WOW" because i can see where the light is coming from and it colors the image in a dreamy light. I really love the simplicity and effect of the image, so overall I feel this is your best sig. It really is amazing.

quote:

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


You forgot to add yourself the the pending list before. You're ok now.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/9/2009 20:55:16 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 29
3/6/2009 17:16:14   
blaneblaneman
Member

[Example 1] -- Random DragonFable Edit
[Example 2] -- Sig I made for a Mod in another forums.



CnC:


The Spider-Man in this picture is very detailed, and matches perfectly with the electric-looking background. The render is very clean, not choppy/pixely at all. Although the image itself is very mono-toned -- only different shades/tones of red and white being used. Blue and other colors should be added to add balance to the image. Also, the background blends in too well with Spidey. The background should be more contrasting to make Spider-Man look more in-focus. The border between Spider-Man and the background should also be more defined. It's too hard to see where Spider-man stops and where the background begins.




This image is very well done. It's contrasting, with the bright explosion and the dark shadows in Iron Man. The background is very detailed, as Iron Man "pops out". However, the details on Iron Man is too much. It's possible to see even the small dents in his armor (on his face), and that draws away the attention to the face itself. Other than that, this is an AMAZING image. The artist's uses perfect amounts of color, contrast and detail. It's wonderful how it almost looks like Iron Man would actually pop right out of the picture.


quote:

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/9/2009 20:58:12 >
DF  Post #: 30
3/7/2009 4:55:26   
Epi
Member

example1:fusion: http://img15.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fusion1.tif
example2:comic: http://img6.imageshack.us/my.php?image=epiadventure.jpg(this is only the part1)

critism: http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/24gkqvr.jpg
nice robot with excellent details. The design is amazing and you can see that this was made with care. only bad things to say are that the shape of the whole robot is a bit cliché and the side shoulder weapons are a bit too simple.
still, this is one of the finest robots i've seen.

critism2: http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/zsvo6c.png
the dragon has excellent colors and it has a nice pose. dragon eye is hard, but you managed to do it quite well. although it could have been more scarier.I like how the wings do a little curve. bad things are the big size of its head and neck.also the chest is a bit too large. the yellow background puts a nice contrast to the deep blue dragon.



"I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves."

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/9/2009 20:58:29 >
DF MQ  Post #: 31
3/7/2009 11:55:55   
prey
Member
 

 so far i only i have one sample but it took me a really long time to make it, it was orginally for a project but it could be used for this i guess i cut it really fast

alt image 1
constructive critiscm:
aweosme picture it is very detailed but instead of one tooth you should be able to see a bit more teeth and it looks very real the cutting oculd be a bit better and the colours kinda blend in together so try to make them look a bit different but overall it looks real (the eys shinning helped make it look real). anyways it looks like alot of work (effort) was put into it
p.s try working on its head it seems to merge with the neck i mean like the chin of the dragon looks as if it is part of the dragons neck so that is something else to maybe work on.(awesome pic)

alt image 2
constructive critiscm:
it is good just you can't really see the details so try zooming in on that and there should be a bit more people the picture kind of looks empty so work on that, try adding more people to make it look less empty or make a background of the sea to make it look as if they are sailing because it looks kinda weird taht the sail is up but there is no water, other than that it is really good.

ps: Maybe by tommorow i will have a new sample done. And can i use my sample art as my signature.


"I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves."

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/9/2009 20:59:00 >
Post #: 32
3/8/2009 8:15:41   
Ramen Crazed Ninja
Member

Picture 1
Picture 2


The red background blends well with Spiderman's color. The color red can also symbolize anger, as if Spiderman vows to exact his revenge with an evil character. His posture makes him looks as if he is in pain, which could be the reason for this revenge. The lightning symbolizes that pain, as if it is motivating him to bring down the villain who caused him this pain. The lines are very clean and the effects are almost real. Whoever made this obviously has talent.


This picture really brings out the "invincible" factor of Ironman. The explosion represents the forces attempting to bring him down so they may have free, unhindered reign. The fact that Ironman remains standing seems to make him say: "Hey, I'm here to stay, so get used to it." Ironman's pose shows the viewer that he is ready to fight, no matter the cost, as long as his actions protect what he cares about most. The shading and coloring used makes it seem as if the picture was taken straight out of an Ironman comic book, albeit with cleaner lines.

"I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves."

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help. Try CC on the art, not on the comics.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/9/2009 21:00:25 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 33
3/8/2009 19:30:37   
Nartborrocks
Banned


 1. My website (sorry not much stuff just i dont have much staff yet)
2. img1
I found this picture enjoyable, because of the blending of red and black of the signature it makes the illusion he is emerging from a storm of red and lightning. The lightning shows that he is angry at someone or something and wants revenge. This has good smooth lines and it looks like someone who has extreme capibility of art.

img2
I like this one because it reminds me of my dad and his guitar. This shows either a good renderer or a skill background artist. The textures in the background make this guitarist... Flash towards the viewer of this picture. I would think this would be a good picture for a Music lover as it shows their hobby and not in a crappy form. I think this picture is a nice way to show your feeling to music.




"I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves."

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/9/2009 21:00:41 >
AQ DF  Post #: 34
3/10/2009 10:28:26   
Dooooooooom
Member

Img 1
Img 2










The picture really shows excellent shading but the dentist doesn't fit into the picture. It seems He was drawn onto the side for no reason. The detail of the dragon is terrific! And the dragons design should make anyone feel like: "I wish I drew that." Overall a good picture but the dentist brings the picture down a tiny bit.

8.8/10




The picture is fairly good but it is quite pixely . The red-pink on the thighs doesn't go with the armour maybe a turquoise or dark blue would go better? The skin has an almost orange tinge to it and is quite strange. You can see a lot of detail on hs chest piece. Otherwise a good pic. Could use alot of revising!

7.6/10

quote:

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/10/2009 18:56:23 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 35
3/10/2009 12:29:00   
Ramen Crazed Ninja
Member

Here's another shot with mine, and hopefully I did better with the constructive criticism.
Picture 1
Picture 2


Dragons are my favorite creature of legend, and I believe that they should either be drawn right or not drawn at all. This piece is one of the best that I've seen, and I've seen a lot of dragons. The shading on it is very carefully drawn, and it looks like it may have taken a rather long time to finish. The horns are very unique, with one coming out below the other. The neck is also very detailed, and the shape of the underside of the neck goes well with the overall "shape" of the dragon. The mouth is probably my favorite part, as it is incredibly detailed. The teeth look like they were drawn with care, almost like they might break if drawn too quickly. Unfortunately, there is a flaw. The dentist on the side contrasts with the rest of the picture, making it seem comical. The comical aspect really clashes with the realistic aspect of the drawing. One other thing is that horn that is sticking out above the rounded ram-like horns. It does not seem as if it is from the same dragon, as it does not match the other horns. Overall, a very nice and extravagant drawing.


At first glance, this dragon looks extremely well-drawn, and it is for the most part. The shading on the upper body and wings suggests that it is in a fairly sunny place, maybe on a mountain or hillside. The horns are of unique design and contribute to the fierceness of the entire picture. My favorite part is the head and facial features, because they bring out something in the dragon that makes you want to approach it, but not too close. The mouth is nice; the lines are where they should be. The design of the tail is common amongst dragons, but it looks better on this particular one. Also, the wings are nicely done, especially how they come down to a little ways past the dragon's tail. The only thing that disappoints me about this drawing is the shading on the tail. There is virtually none at all except a tiny smidgen on the very tip. If the tail was shaded a bit more, this picture would look so real that it would make me want to fly away on it. The shading as a whole could may be a bit better so to make the drawing more realistic. With the amount of shading on it now, it looks more like a drawing than a real dragon. This is by far one of the best dragon pictures I've encountered.

"I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves."

Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/10/2009 18:57:02 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 36
3/10/2009 16:57:21   
Walt
Member

EDIT:

IMAGE 1
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z164/waltp321/spurs.jpg

IMAGE2
http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z164/waltp321/recolor.jpg


Constructive crit on this
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/zsvo6c.png

I love the colors you chose and they positively affect the overall image. You did a phenominal job shading. The dragons posture is real natural and is not too stiff or robotic which makes it look more realistic. The head is a little to big and long. If you change the neck so it does nto make such a drastic change it would be alot better. You might also need to deepen the details like the scales. If you cut off the head it would look like a perfect body but the head is way too long. Im sure you are aiming for the aspect of distance since closer objects appear bigger, but you have to remember the head, even though its closer to you, still is only a foot or two away from the body when the proportions would make it look like the body was 5 yards away. If you were planning on adding a more cmplex backround try to make sure its not too detailed so the dragon stands out as the primary object.

Constructive crit on this
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/bigship3jx9.png

I love the 3D aspect of this work of art. It is perfectly formed so that it does not look lobsided or awkward in any way. Your job of shading with the colors looks great. You did an amazing job with spriting and the nice neat design bordering the rail. I beleive you should add some more details to the ship making it look just flat out nicer. The sail looks like it is not being supported by any strings and is just superglued to the mast. It also looks to stiff considering there are no ropes. This is really small and unimportant but you could extend the part of the oars visible into the black part a little bit more so it looks more like they came out of the holes. The sprites could also be more detailed but that is not the most important issue. :)

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/19/2009 19:17:02 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 37
3/13/2009 9:19:12   
Narishma
Member

1.i made this too a friend this is my 3rd sig iv ever made
http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo183/jahar_narishma/peanut3.png

this is a pic i made of my favourit manga character salamander natsu
http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo183/jahar_narishma/Natsu.png

onto the thing im mostly gonna fail CC
2.i like this picture he blends in soo good into the background that it looks like he comes out from the background and becomes alive
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/HeathLedger.png?0.12543300%201236948193

i think this ones quiet beutiful the titel totaly fit the picture it really looks like she gazes at something and the light and the shade just add too the effect that she gaze at something it makes u wanna know what shes gazing at but there are something i would change and that would be the left edge it doesnt fit the picture
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/gaze.png?0.04873400%201236949083

quote:

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/19/2009 19:17:18 >

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Max sig size is 500 length, 100 height.
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 38
3/13/2009 15:55:27   
Blue Jay
Member

My Stuff:
Example 1

Example 2


1) This picture is good, no out of place items. It's a bit dull but that doesn't matter much. It lacks a background but backgrounds aren't that important. My biggest notice was the cannons on the back that point straight up. Those cannons do not match and seem almost 2D when the rest is 3D. The picture could probably have used some color like red, grey, black, and brown perhaps even camo. The shoulder cannons do look like waffles i must admit and on closer inspection the chest area is really just some random design, that could have been done better too. All in all it's a great first time sketch, a good sketch for an average person, but for an artist... well... and artist could and would have poured more time into this picture. It's good, but it's not Amazing.


2) This is an awesome sprite, my biggest concern here is its size. The sprite could be a lot bigger and would also be more useful if it was enlarged in my opinion. I do like the looks of the sprite but I think it would have been better if it had been put on a sprite sheet with different poses. I would have loved to see this sprite in action such as in a comic. The sprite seems like an anti-hero kind of person and thats okay. One thing I noticed is the thing in his hair. I couldn't tell if that was a flower or a shell. Either way it seems to be for looks and it isn't really needed. as far as anti-heros go this guy looks like the kind of guy who's on a redemption quest not just a hatred quest. Oops I'm getting off topic, sorry, all in all it's a good sprite. The colors are sort of bland, maybe a black or red cape instead next time, eh? This is a sprite to be proud of though that's for sure

quote:

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/19/2009 19:17:41 >
Post #: 39
3/14/2009 18:19:30   
Fyns
Member

Some of My work

Example 1
Example 2

Constructive Criticism:
I copied this from above, your links don't seem to be working any more D:

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/24gkqvr.jpg
The sketch is well structured, and most of the machine is well posed, the gun firing on its' left hand seems to be firing at the ground however. The fire could be drawn better, and almost looks like the blade of a sword. The big missiles on the shoulders that have nine slots, aren't pointing the same direction as the rest of the picture. The legs and how they are posed are well done, making the machine/mecha look more alive. If this was just a sketch to get ideas in order, I would consider this very good. If it was a real picture however, it could do with a lot more work. It looks like it has a bookshelf under its' head, and the eyes are poorly drawn in comparison with the rest of the body. All in all, i like the sketch, and if the drawer focused a bit more, the sketch would look awesome.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/e5gpjp.jpg
The baby dragon in this picture is very precisely drawn. I like how the dragon is standing, looks very alive, but the body seems out of proportion to me, the wings reach over the tail, which is almost at the front , but since dragons are mythical, it's up to the creator to decide whether it's proportioned or not. I love the horns, and how they bend back over the dragon's head. The tip of the left hand wing is to 2D, the wing seems to be brushing up against the tail, but the spikes should be piercing it that close. The back of the dragon is great, all the muscle movements can be seen, and the large scales are well drawn. As the wings break off from the body there is a ripple, and a sort of dent, this doesn't look real to me, it should be more flat, with a ridge along the edge, but that's also up to the drawer. Finally the fore legs of the baby dragon are in the middle of the air, I don't see a problem with balance, but they seem like their on top of something, if there is something there it should be drawn, otherwise the should hang more. This sketch is great, and the detail put into the small stuff is clear, the dimensions could be improved, but its al ot better than i could draw.
quote:

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/19/2009 19:18:04 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 40
3/14/2009 18:58:08   
BloodStaind
Member
 

 I work with mostly vector and animation.
Example 1 (Has a small animation)
Example 2

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/fy2x4h.jpg
I love some of the detail and the teeth. But there are a few things throwing me off. The eye has VERY little detail along with most of the upper part of the head, it looks like it's mainly just an outline. The eye of any piece of art based on a living creature is almost always supposed to be one of the main focuses and it is usually the first thing a third-party will look at, so it's always best to add as much detail to the eye as possible. Another thing is that the light source seems to be coming from different angles. It's best to choose one light source and stick to it. If you meant for the light to come from different angles then usually the light is still brightest from a certain angle while the others are merely reflections from other surfaces and are not as bright as the main light source. The last thing is the doctor/dentist. He has no focus or shading and is pretty much useless to the picture. An improvement on the doctor/dentist would be to completely redo him and his ladder with the proper body shape such as having a neck and the elbows going down to the hips. And add shading to him and his ladder.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/ragnasqj4.png
The face was well done but the rest has very dull shading. Expanding the shaded area with multiple shades of the same color would create a smoother look. The light source seems to be a problem as well. On the arms the light looks like it's coming from the left but on the face it's coming from the right, while the rest of it seems to nave no light source at all. Also the outline is very jagged. An easy way to fix jagged lines is by making sure only the opposite corners of the pixels (on the outline) are touching or the opposite sides of the pixels are touching.

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/19/2009 19:18:34 >
DF  Post #: 41
3/15/2009 10:15:45   
penguin moglin
Member

retrying
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/gaze.png
the render is very good it looks from the lighting that the left side is good and pure and the right is a little more to the not so good
side with the shadowy portal behind her. The text is very illuminating which matches the brightness of the background also the text underneath
is a little small maybe you can enlarge it also use a blur tool on the text to make it look like it is fading into the light.My last point is the yellow
block on the far left side i dont really understand why it is there but hey everything has a reason and that probably has to.
overall rating 9/10

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/IronManTagV1.png
wow this signature is very eye-catching, the fire flares out in your face and and has a 3-d effect.
very good contrast of colours, even the very small details on the flames stand out and make the
explosive effect the best it can be. The render completely matches the background but the black border
round the piece doest really match with the rest of the piece maybe try a different border or simply
change the colour to a more fiery colour, just to make the pic a little bit better; but this piece is outstanding!
10/10

my work:
http://i42.tinypic.com/2rcqzyq.jpg

http://i44.tinypic.com/4one1.jpg

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/19/2009 19:18:47 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 42
3/16/2009 16:23:20   
Oddmanthefirst
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 http://forums2.battleon.com/f/interceptor.asp?dest=http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/fy2x4h.jpg
I think that this dragon was drawn with the most care and the effects are dazzling. The Horns and the gnawing teeth could make you think that you were actually there and it could be seen that this dragon is just a true monster of might. Also the dentist provides humor for the raging beast. Yet without the shading, this beast would not be such a "bad guy" if it werent the shadows that layed with in his scales and into his mouth. The artist shaded a lot and for that, the drawing came out beaughtiful. But if this drawing were to be done again. I would put a little more time into the dentist and maybe put a little scenary of a dentist office in the back. 9/10
http://forums2.battleon.com/f/interceptor.asp?dest=http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/ragnasqj4.png
I like it, but the drawing could of had so much more potential. Granted that the wings and head were done fantastically, some more shading could have been done for the better. Also a little scenary could not have hurt. Some mountains in the back could have truly shown that this dragon is the predator of the sky. But because the animal has no background, it is hard to tell if the animal is on the ground or in the sky. 8/10

my drawings
image 1
image 2


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Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/19/2009 19:19:23 >
AQ DF  Post #: 43
3/17/2009 16:55:51   
bduff245
Member

My Artwork
My original artwork made on GIMP
My other GIMP artwork


My CC
First CC Pic
The render in this picture is done very well, it's hard to find any black or white lines on the edges. The CD4 also blends in well with the picture. It creates a background that stays fluid with the color pattern of the sprite. There should be more contrast though. For instance, the text is hard to read since it is dark on dark.
Second CC Pic
The CD4 in done well. It goes with the rest of the photo, except for the text. The text is in a hard to read font, and is too dark to read. This render in this picture wasn't done perfectly. The lines feel jagged and unnatural at places. The lady had a chunk of her forehead cut off at the top of the photo. To fix that, you should resize the image or move it down a bit.

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.

< Message edited by bduff245 -- 3/23/2009 16:25:53 >
AQ  Post #: 44
3/19/2009 1:38:42   
Thrash fan
Member

Example I

Example II



I love the kool aid like color and the watery-like lightning bolts, and the background really matches spider man's outfit. I also love what you did with the glassey effects. On the down side though I think it whould look better without the shadow behind spidey, and I see a bit of blue around the render, but you have to look very close in order to see it. And to the left of the render I see something like a coffee smudge. Overall it's an awesome sig. 10/10



The special effects look pretty realistic with the lighting, and I love how you used the smudge effects on the sword, it adds a nice, metal touch. Speaking of smudging I like what you did with her hair. The lighting effects really adds to the drama. On the down side though I dont know what's with the pure cream color to the left of the sig. But other than that really beautiful. I could tell you put a lot of effort into this sig 9.8/10.

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I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/19/2009 19:21:35 >
AQ  Post #: 45
3/20/2009 7:29:53   
Narishma
Member

aight hopefully ill get the CC this time and i decided too post some of my new art since its way better
1.
this first one i just finnished and is the first time i made the render myself
http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo183/jahar_narishma/1241414-2.gif

and the next pic is my banner on my gallery in my clan
http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo183/jahar_narishma/Zacksgallery1-1.png
2.
i think the colors really work with the render and adds a peacful natural flow in the pic and the light really only adds too that effect it might be alitle bright at some areas but thats only if ur really picky and the flow of the colors and brightness makes it look like shes in a cave playing her guitar im not sure what too think of the text it could fit but then it dont really feal right i think she look more peacful then sentimental otherwize theres nothing wrong with the text i think the color and light were really good in this pic made more then half the pic for me i think this was a really good pic 9/10
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/sentimento.png

the color in this one was way too dark its hard too see anything other then the girl and the man i think the color is right for the pic but it needs too be grighter since u cant see any of the contures other then the girl and the man the bright light though is very good it adds a special fealing too the pic its almost as if she lights up the pic with her pressens it does make up for almost all the darkness but it doesnt change the fackt that its too dark making it kinda empty if u look at it for awhile since the first thing that catches my eye is how she shines up the picture not noticing the color at first sight and well theres no text and im not sure what the border is(ive been doing this for about a week but im luving it)i think this pic is a uncut gem if u take alitle brighter color and its a diamond and the light was really good i give this a 8.5/10 if u change the color alitle brighter i would give it a 10/10
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/AA%20Images/PaintingGirl.png

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I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/26/2009 21:15:47 >
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 46
3/20/2009 16:47:04   
FireSpark
Member

Art I
Art II

1st: This is a Signature what I made when I started my career. Text on Render...Nothing Special

2nd: I made this Signatue when I was crazy of making signatures. My main render was Fiery Electricity, so I thought that I should make Blue Enegy too. So I putted Firey Energy to he right and Blue-ish Energy to Left. Golden border was my sister's idea.


Nice work on changing King's outfit. I think this is better than original.8/10

If this is handmade, IT'S AWSOME!!!!!It will go like "IronFire" or "FireIron" (usernames) and so on...Though, face of Iron Man is like changeable, unlike in the movie or cartoon.10/10

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

~FireSpark

Not approved. You need to work on your CC. Check out the link to Dep's thread on the first page if you need help.

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/26/2009 21:16:05 >
Post #: 47
3/21/2009 7:16:37   
Crazy Gamer 007
Member

Note1:I work mostly with AQW pics, but il try to get some AQ, DF and MQ in too.
Note2: There are other pics i made on my Tinypic site, if this isnt ok.

My art
My art 1
My art 2

(I dunno how to set these pics DIRECTLY in my post so il just use links...)

Pic 1

This picture is pretty good with the effects around the boy. He is high detailed too, and he is suited green which makes him fit better with the rest of the picture. There are things about the quality...he hasnt the same kind of quality like the rest of the picture, that could be improved, if you made the background more visible with effects like the rest of the pic, it would look better. Then you can see the background better. The colors are pretty nice made but the black and green doesnt really fit togheter in my eyes. They could have used more dark white (close to grey, but still white) in the pic, instead of the black.
I give it a 7/10


Pic 2

This picture is good, but its pretty blury, and the colors are sad. I like the soldier in the middle. The quality isnt bad, its pretty actually pretty good! The soldier can easily be seen, and the background has many details. When you think that the background dont got so much stuff you can see it really got details! The colors as said are sad but they look good. Beacuse soldiers are seen in war. Which is a dark time for the countries fighting. Thats my guess on why the colors are sad. The contrast between the blury background and the sharpness of the figure really makes the figure stand out, drawing your eyes to it. I give it a 5/10

Why i want to join the AA club: Beacuse i want to make my own gallery, and tell other people how great work they do! Ive been looking in different peoples gallery but sadly i couldnt post and tell them about it...Thats why i want to join.

And now the last thing:

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


P.S
My sig is the newest of part of my art! Check it out!

Approved.

Thank you so much grafh im a happy AA now!

< Message edited by Crazy Gamer 007 -- 3/27/2009 8:04:39 >
Post #: 48
3/21/2009 16:07:44   
MetalMewtwo
Member

Im a game developer =)
I'm more of a coder than an artist...

My First example: Pikachu May Cry (arrowkeys to move, press up to go inside buildings, this game is unfinished but playable...)
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/210309/56308_pikachu_may_cry_20_for_flash_6.swf

My Second example: A fake website i made for a school assignment
http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/210309/56622_volumizer_green_flash_site_24.php





This picture appears to be trying to evoke a dark mysterious feeling. When I first saw this picture, I immediately felt a sort of mystery, but not of a horrific one (due to the lack of blood). However, the details are enough give the audience a hint of the man’s life. The first detail is the background. It seems to be composed of rough splashes of paint. But this background combined with the dark fading edges makes the paint less visible, which gives it the illusion of looking like a rusty wall of a dark alley. The second detail is the positioning of the light blue glow with the man. They’re right in the middle and right at the center of attention. So the man looking downwards into the blue glow attracts the audience with curiosity, while the darkness which surrounds in the rustic background mystifies it into a modern day-like mystery.




This picture is wonderfully breathtaking in my eyes, like a dreamlike heavenly divine feeling. I find this divine feeling to be created through the effective bit of blur and the bright radiating slashes of light. First of all, I find the small amounts of blur to be what gives this an almost dreamlike feeling. With the background, I’m understood that the setting is in a city, therefore the top must be the sky and the bottom must be ground. So from the sky, I can imagine those bright flares as fireworks. This whole picture appears to coloured in only shades of orange, monochromatic I believe. In order to maintain this balance, I suggest fixing the left side of the picture, where there are rainbow triangles. The faint bits of blur on the girl, and the size of the girl compared to the distorted city background make’s her like some sort of divine angelic being. And the streak of flare from her guitar just makes the girl more stunning to the eye.


I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/26/2009 21:17:11 >
AQ  Post #: 49
3/21/2009 22:49:04   
AdolfoSosa
Member

1.-
IceScythe
Phoenix'sPride

2.-

Its actually a really good but I have noticed a fault,there is no source for the light. I may see the lightnings(Which are very well done) combined with the blurred background but if you try to fin the light source it isnt defined at all.Also what I see that went very good was how the distortion was used behind the character to make it look like if he is suffering from something.The bright red went really good w ith the character but a little bit darker wouldnt be bad.
9.3/10


This one isnt great.At all. The C4Ds are very misplaced, you can even see how it got copy-pasted and moved wrongly. Also there isnt anything that modified the render or the C4Ds which make it poorly done and without anything special.Only good thing I could find is the font which was placed correctly and with the correct sizes.
6/10

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I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Approved

< Message edited by Grafh -- 3/26/2009 21:18:07 >
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