Pyronix15
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Image example one Image example 2 Anyways, first up Sentimento This ones interesting, It shows how the woman looses herself in her own little world when she plays the guitar. The texture also looks very dream like, and some of the light hits perfectly so it doesn't hinder the words. One thing that doesn't really fit is the reflection off the couch, or whatever it is she is siting on. The reflection makes it look less natural, even though it takes more work. I would have just left the light section so it just looks almost like a sunset. Other than that, it looks really natural, and the direction of light matches the the point of origin perfectly. Im very glad you didn't mix in a whole bunch of rainbow colors just because it was a light mood. The color scheme is excellent, just the right amount of lights to dark's. It looks like the dawn, it really does. All in all, I really feel like guitar is the thing that saves this woman in a world of uncertainty, at least that's the vibe I get from the dark's contrasting against the lights. Pianted girl This one is quite nice in that dark sense, and the artistic parts match up pretty well. I guess the lady is supposed to be crying on the inside, that's pretty cool. The lighting is a little overused in some places, as there doesn't seem to be a point of origin, and it seems to mostly shine on the already light parts of the pic, which kinda wastes it and makes the face look to shiny. I also think that empty section of tan on the empty side of the girl looks kinda out of place. It looks like it was another face, I think it should either be another face, or preferably erased, or you could add other blotches of that pattern for better effect. Other than those, I think the texture is awesome, especially the sad face, it almost looks like a painting. And the mist like theme of the background is sweet, I'll have to borrow it when im doing mystraven sigs . It really conveys a sense of being lost in a place of darkness in a subtle way. As for the human face, I would add a few filters to make it look more like painting to match the sad face, but that's just my personal style. Its just as well the way it is. NOTE- Im sorry if i seem harsh, I would consider someone who said these things extremely nitpicky. Its juts that from the post, It sounds like we are supposed to be finding flaws in the art so............Anyways, I find these sigs beautiful, and can currently never do anything close to these in terms of quality . Im mostly going to make a gallery, and the occasional sig. quote:
I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves. If its not to much trouble, I don't suppose you could leave a few words of CC on my work, and let me know how professional my CC sounds, can you? Im mostly doing this gallery to get tips on my work, as i want to do graphic design some day, and just started. Approved. If I get some free time, I pm you with cc.
< Message edited by Grafh -- 4/7/2009 19:50:22 >
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