LordDarkex 
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		  Some of the best poetry I've found on this forum thus far.      I love Fade; even without trying to read into and interpret it, the wording is beautiful. Just listening to the imagery gives off such a melancholy, mysterious atmosphere.   "Flicker. The moon washes over a shadowed sea"   I don't know what it is about this that gives me chills..      The raccoon series is great too LOOL it's just so funny   Reading the line "He's the only raccoon in a hat" kind of bothers me a little bit cause it seems so out of place with the surrounding meter/rhythm.   But it's still charming and everything ;D      And your Dark Angel poem   Oh my lordy lord so good   To have your first 4 stanzas (stanzas? verses? I don't know) be so serious, so solemn, and   then suddenly turn it around with "Coffee," which to be honest, I was not expecting at all, was   complete hilarious...too genius.   Or maybe it wasn't supposed to be hilarious idk coffee is some pretty serious bizniz  
			
			
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