True enough. I was just curious (DF bandits are green, I got mixed up. Sorry)
And you know I cannot simply throw it out, last time that happened a giant ice elemental formed and the dragonlord that came to deal with it nearly saw through the illusive wards I put around my dwelling
Either a coincidence, or you put that in your story for this reason (What were the chances of you putting both Dwelling, and Dragonlord in a single sentence?). Either way, it is irrelevant.
I have now fully read the story, and have been very entertained by it. The mentioning of both Gorgok and sneevils reminded me that this isn't all AQ, and the overall story is absolutely fine. The lich who can throw his knuckles is a nice character to add (I like undead in stories), and the characteristics of each individual character are nice.
The only thing I could say is that you need...well actually I can't say much. The story is not incorrect grammatically or spelling-wise and the way you tell the story seems fine. It is great! Keep up the good work!
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