"Well cow, at least us green folk stick together."
Anyhow, those were very good chapters indeed. Funny how you said you jumped to a boring part as I actually found chapter 5 very interesting and story-building. Funny how they haven't noticed how long Azer's been gone though.
And for some reason, I imagine Volu looking like one of Miltonius' ArchFiends. I suppose looks could theoretically differ anyhow.
I like "the team" you have going now though, Azer, Doc Weyrd, and Volu. Teams are fun, so many stories have such solitary characters.
EDIT:2 chapters until I'm caught up. Funny, I've been commenting the entire time, even though only now am I entitled to xD
Anyhow, too bad the team was split up so fast, but Azer had to go home sometime. Volu and Doc seem to to dislike each other quite a bit...
I also wonder why his parents or guardians and such were killed at the beginning, odd...
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