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3/25/2011 16:33:34   
Recar Dragonlance
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Gaiael


"Good Evening, Mr White."

Three souls. Always three: that number holds strange power.

Demons walking among humans: in charity shops, teachers, animal sanctuaries. An innocent boy is given an offer he can easily refuse: he doesn't. A girl is given a choice between her soul or her family.

Everything changes as they hunt for one person.

Charlie White; Alicia Goldheart.



Warning: Contains themes of homophobia (only a bit...) and some violence.


Prologue: Wolves

Some awkward speech is probably from my censoring. Any comments on the storyline or characters? No need for grammar as I will probably pick it up myself. Enjoy! Constructive Criticism is appreciated greatly.

< Message edited by Recar Dragonlance -- 3/26/2011 8:03:31 >
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4/4/2011 6:06:28   
demolitiondragon
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 Some interesting description, and you're not giving too much away, either.

Nice to see you back, Recar. ^^
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