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4/6/2011 12:45:50   
Eukara Vox
Legendary AdventureGuide!


 =AQ= Bizarre Flecks 2011 Mega War Story

Here is where you can discuss each other's war stories.
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 1
4/9/2011 17:44:21   
Elryn

Custodian (DF)


 So far I find the stories quite entertaining. It also a pleasure to read in the midst of battle.
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4/9/2011 18:00:02   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L


 @elryn: When will we see your story?
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 3
4/10/2011 11:13:52   
Elryn

Custodian (DF)


 I have some story in mind, however it will take some time before I may write it (in between revisions and the war).

< Message edited by Elryn -- 2/23/2012 21:45:51 >
AQ  Post #: 4
4/10/2011 11:15:20   
blazeheart97
Member

@Elryn: I like your story in particular. It kinda reminded me of accounts of the Trojan War I've read.
@Falerin: An Impecable job as always. In particular it reminded me of The Hitchhickers guide to the Galaxy. I especially like Chapter two.
AQ  Post #: 5
4/10/2011 11:36:52   
Elryn

Custodian (DF)


 Are you certain you speak of my story? So far, only the introduction has been made.
AQ  Post #: 6
4/10/2011 14:27:41   
damien_black13
Member

That reminds me, I forgot to put in the rest of day one and start with day two of mine
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4/12/2011 13:31:48   
Falerin
Legendary Loremaster


 I have finished my brief entry such as it is. It is quite in keeping with the events unfolding.
Post #: 8
4/12/2011 14:57:42   
Mordred
Member

@Falerin: Finished reading it. A few typos and grammatical errors, but it does show how you can be reformed. However, it seems like Dhows wants Ardendor to be in control of your full self, rather than the Falerin we all know.
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 9
4/12/2011 15:25:26   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L


 @Mordred: I thought that was clear from the moment we overheard the Stranger talking to Ardendor.

@Falerin: While I think it's a good story, I keep wondering. Is Ardendor really THAT gullible?
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 10
4/12/2011 17:15:33   
Mordred
Member

@DD: Yes, although how the absorption works was kinda fuzzy for me. Looks like that it activates on touch, and the "dominant" consciousness is the one that engages the absorption. Also, perhaps Ardendor is the consciousness lacking in skepticism or full of gullibility. Falerin was broken up, after all.
AQ DF MQ  Post #: 11
4/12/2011 21:20:49   
ArchMagus Orodalf
Member

Short, but sweet. I like it.
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 12
4/13/2011 1:21:52   
Mystical Warrior
Helpful!


 The stories sure are great to read when doing the war...its like a break from the repetitiveness of the war...oh if someone here can't write a long story for their character and wants their character to be known a little you can PM me for a collaboration of ideas
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 13
4/13/2011 6:44:22   
Elryn

Custodian (DF)


 I concur.
AQ  Post #: 14
4/13/2011 7:54:04   
BlackAces
Member

So do I this is a great idea during wars writing war stories.

I'd like to thank Euky for coming up with this idea, I'm assuming she did xD, it is a wonderful idea it makes wars more enjoyable reading everyone's stories.
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 15
4/13/2011 15:09:19   
Mortarion
Member

Faleryn nice history, so that's what Ardendor is doing, abbsorving all of the other pieces of falerin to regai nall his powers but with the mind of ardendo, btw will you continue your history, I'll perphas make one soon it's up now, hope you like it

< Message edited by Delex -- 4/13/2011 16:26:49 >
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4/17/2011 14:02:06   
necrolich66
Member

http://forums2.battleon.com/f/tm.asp?m=18838458
i entered too
i tried to make it so it goes well with some stories like elryn that asked for some help on my charracter and so i wanted to maje the story so it goes with the others

< Message edited by Eukara Vox -- 4/26/2011 10:47:30 >
AQ DF MQ AQW  Post #: 17
4/17/2011 23:28:07   
Clown the Jester
Member

I decided to focus my story a little more on the mental struggle our character is having with the events in Lore. I also am trying to bring more out of Seth Cay Dhow I dont want to change his character...but I want him to be more.

Tell me what ya all think of it so far and please be honest...

< Message edited by Clown the Jester -- 4/18/2011 11:19:31 >
AQW Epic  Post #: 18
4/18/2011 21:36:07   
majesticstar3800
Member

I like the sotry, necro, but include dialog please? it makes things interesting.
Also, I find the grammatical errors and spelling mistakes might bring down tis performance.
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 19
4/18/2011 21:39:40   
necrolich66
Member

hmmm dialog huh?
i made the whole story non dialog but i did make some phrases and i may add more but not a real dialog
and you are the second one to tell me that and i try to make my best to do it mistakeless
but i am already proud of my english tough i live in a land where only a few speak it well -_- (nearly all my friends speaks/writes it wrong)
AQ DF MQ AQW  Post #: 20
4/21/2011 12:53:34   
Travis Touchdown
Reality Touchdown!


 Alright, I've wrapped mine up. Gotta say, there's some interesting tales in there. It'll be interesting to look back months from now, perhaps later in the saga, and see our chronicles here.
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 21
4/21/2011 23:39:50   
Clown the Jester
Member

Welp I'm down to the last 4 or so chapters of my story. Hope you guys like it so far.



I have already made 11 out of the 14 chapters. I'm all excited.


Wait now Im at the last chapter. 13 out of 14 complete...one more. One chapter for every day the war took place.

< Message edited by Clown the Jester -- 4/23/2011 17:02:45 >
AQW Epic  Post #: 22
4/26/2011 7:35:04   
Elryn

Custodian (DF)


 That was fast.
AQ  Post #: 23
4/26/2011 10:14:11   
Clown the Jester
Member

[Ah! My computer keeps dieing every time I write the final chapter...but fear not! I will write this! While listening to Broadway musical songs!
AQW Epic  Post #: 24
4/26/2011 10:53:53   
Eukara Vox
Legendary AdventureGuide!
quote:

I'd like to thank Euky for coming up with this idea, I'm assuming she did xD, it is a wonderful idea it makes wars more enjoyable reading everyone's stories.


This idea was born out of necessity in the DF forum. I was approached by SCAKK to see if this kind of thing could be done for the AQ guys and gals. I had no problem with it. We tried it a couple of events ago, but it didn't take, but between SCAKK, Lord Barrius and I, we decided to give it another go.

Needless to say, I am very happy you all took the time to record these stories. I love this kind of stuff, so I was so pleased with the turn out. This will not be the last time this is done. Elryn is my official "MAKE A THREAD FOR THIS EVENT" person.


Oh, and just a note. I saw that some people commented on things like grammar, spelling, details, etc. If you want to give someone a full critique, pointing out errors or places where detail is more appreciated, feel free to post such a thing. Part of writing is getting better. Providing this kind of feedback will most certainly help others with their creativity. Check out some of the other comment threads to get a feel for how to do this if you are unsure.

Criticism, when done gently, professionally and with the desire to help others improve is very appreciated, no matter what level a writer someone is.


Anyway, I can't wait until the next event that we get this kind of participation.
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