Drakkoniss
Creative!
Constructive!
|
Well, I think I might read this little whatchamacallit this morning. Might serve for some interesting entertainment, my friend.
Firstly, I would like to note that I both liked and found funny the fact that DaVinci's tank was destroyed so easily. I did find it a bit odd, because I thought it would've been a bit longer of a fight, but meh.
I wondered when Herakaris would show up... Singing powers are rare. I like the creativity of it. I actually have sound manipulation myself, which helps for disguises and other stealthy efforts, and stems from my ability to control radiation. XP
O.o Staff... wonder how well she knows how to actually weild one, though. *raises eyebrow*
Dog, he says? Makes me wonder what he is referencing, and how he knows of it. Also makes me wonder why he doesn't reference me, Antares, and another hero (I am pretty sure the people in the sky are villains, or at least that's what I believe atm), fighting off another horde of Killbots away from Demo at the other end of the park...
LATIN, I SAY!!! Cans't thou sayest, "Oof, how'd we all get hit at once...?"
*ponders about DaVinci believing that wars are won by intentions alone, or saying as much* Hmm... I don't think so.
Why not the birds as well, while you're at it, hmm? O.e
Bright green? But regardless of that, as it is understandable, I personally doubt he was doing anything other than attempting to appear charismatic while... teasing her at the same time, and actually has no interest in her. Attempting to make the victory all the more rubbed in her face, by speaking of her as if she were his, implying that she was less than him in power, and referencing his age... but gah, I'm describing that horribly. Anyway, I doubt it was anything more than a taunt to make him seem in control, and it seem as if she were some insignificant trifle.
Teal? Also, you know what I find weird in-game? In different screens, they make the statue of Pandora seem to be different sizes. The one where DaVinci is firing his energy weapon at the statue makes it seem quite a bit smaller than it seems when you are actually in one of the screens in the park itself, for example.
Aye, DaVinci has quite the golden tounge. Reminds me of myself and the Dealer. I can be quite good at convincing people of things when I want to be. Doesn't work all the time, because some people are stubborn fools, but regardless.
You know what I find interesting? You two still interact with us in our timeline, even though DaVinci actually didn't get the Heart/Malachite in ours. Experimental does the same with the fact that he has met Demolicious, and if I am not mistaken, she was shown to be dead in someone's fanfic to the side of C&T... I mean, we could discount that, and I don't remember whose it was, but DaVinci actually getting the Malachite is a big leap from the storyline... and according to what I've seen from Experimental, he seems to have writen it as if DaVinci did, too, in the Death Games, if I remember correctly. This makes me think that DaVinci may have aquired either a fake Malachite, or that it was actually stolen afterwords, which I doubt, because the park war would have been over at the time that it seemed to be still going on in C&T. Because of this, I think DaVinci may have aquired a shard of the Malachite during the chaos, meaning that only a portion of it was stolen and given to Clown the Jester, which would be quite interesting, indeed... He'd have had to have done it just before the Chaos Riots reached the Park, so that the fighting of the Killbots and things still would have been going on, leaving the heroes and villains that were there to still be there to get drawn into it. That being said, it would've had to have been quite precise timing, and there must have been an incintive to split the Malachite, but still...
I am going to guess that would be Demolicious that was leaving the trail of blood, no?
I get a bad impression from their mother. I can understand her being overprotective, but it annoys me, the way her personality is. It's a deep emotion, hard to pinpoint precisely, but still, you get my point. I don't need to go into detail.
I fooled around too much in that war. :/ Yes, I destroyed thousands, but I could've done more, and by the end of it, my activity was slowing.... *sigh* I hate that war. Talked too much. Forgot to turn in the war waves too often... I know there might have been a million or more of them fielded, and I played a large part in stopping it from going too badly, but I am ashamed I didn't do more, and disappointed that I wasn't able to do as much as Antares, who seems to have been the most active in the war efforts. :(
That line about war in the end was not entirely true... but meh. I won't get into details about war not always having a clear winner.
I agree there should probably be or have been an effort to invade Skull Deep and steal it back. It wouldn't have been that difficult. All that would need to be done is to get advanced information concerning where it is, and then have most of the heroes distract the villains while a select group of the greatest fighters breaks through to the location and swiftly escapes, but there would be too heavy of casualties... Honestly, it would be best if a single person goes in there and steals it in a covert opperation. Someone who can go invisible or teleport... or both.
Hmm... I am starting to get confused at the Artisa/Isabella bit... If Antares knows it is Artisa, and the public almost certainly knows who the Lions are, why call her Isabella at all, ever? I was assuming that was supposed to be a super hero name/disguise bid, but considering, I find it odd in general.
... You'd think Antares would know some smasher who specialized in healing... Blackshock would've been a good choice, at the time. Others would've sufficed, though. For example, the nurse/medic person at the power academy is supposed to be an expert on such things. Other than her, there are plenty of Smashers who have healing powers, at least to some extent. *shrugs* Meh.
O.o Teleportation...
That was 10 minute? o_o
Wheeee.... flashy lighty thing.
Talk of the devil, eh? Usually "speak of the devil", but ah well.
Hehe... badly wrapped leg. Oh, the incompetance implied...
Not even a single medic left at the home base in case of emergencies? I blame management. Wish I had more strategic control of the heroes. :/
They didn't even keep it clean? O_e Oh, the horror...
Oath of silence and blindness? That's... odd.
... Interesting customs and ideals, you depict Demo as having. Going to have to stop commenting, shortly.
Indeed, that DOES sound like chemo... And yes, she did hit her head, but regardless of that, you implemented that chapter pretty well... gotta stop commenting now; School, and all, but nice reading again.
|
Printable Version
Icon Legend
New Messages
No New Messages
Hot Topic w/ New Messages
Hot Topic w/o New Messages
Locked w/ New Messages
Locked w/o New Messages
Post New Thread
