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11/22/2011 1:21:12   
Kinzdor
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The story can be found here

Let me know what you think. Be honest!
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11/22/2011 1:43:43   
Sir Night
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Well you have a cool character here, that's for sure. My only complaint about this would be that right now it's really more of a character description than an actual story. But it's definitely a good premise for a story so keep it up.

< Message edited by Sir Night -- 11/22/2011 1:44:02 >
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11/22/2011 17:04:27   
Goldstein
Member

This would make for a great voice-over for a Saturday morning cartoon.
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11/23/2011 18:42:06   
Kinzdor
Member

Added chapter 1!
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11/24/2011 18:18:21   
Drakkoniss
Creative!
Constructive!


 A strange, yet intriguing story you have there; Also, I agree with Strebor, it WOULD make an interesting Saturday morning cartoon!
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11/27/2011 12:27:12   
Kinzdor
Member

Ya I have fond that I have a pretty unique write`ing style! aslo chapter 2
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11/27/2011 22:27:01   
Goldstein
Member

You really, really like exclamation points, don't you?
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11/28/2011 0:40:10   
Kinzdor
Member

New chapter!
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12/2/2011 0:25:17   
Goldstein
Member

OmniCorp eh? Only Bugs Bunny can express my feelings.
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12/4/2011 18:06:50   
Kinzdor
Member

Remember these 2 Omnicorps in mine and your story are alike in ways but not the same! Also chapter 5 is out! It is a bit short!
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12/16/2011 18:51:11   
Jae10
Creative!
Constructive!


 Fantastic job developing your own story Kinz!

I always wondered how you ended up on The Dealer's leas- uh, side. XD Very nice origin too. I wonder if you were also somehow exposed to any of Pandora's malachite during your earthly exploits?



quote:

He then handed Darkness a Hal Droid,a cell phone with the Onmicorp logo on it,and a book about Earth.


*blinks twice*

He just handed those over? For $FREE.99?!?!? Oh, maybe it was included in the contract you signed, lol.

Keep it up! I'm sure Mr. Dealer has plenty of evil work for you to do.^^
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12/16/2011 19:56:21   
Kinzdor
Member

NEW CHAPTER UP. The chapter was so big I had to split it into 2 different chapters.

< Message edited by kinzvlle -- 12/17/2011 22:24:50 >
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12/17/2011 22:43:25   
Goldstein
Member

I thought I was going to be the doctor, not Blackshock...
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12/17/2011 22:55:00   
Kinzdor
Member

You healed on the side walk. Also I wan`t sure if you treated villeins. I know for a fact Blackschock does.
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12/17/2011 23:49:34   
Sir Night
Member

quote:

"You idiot you aren`t supposed to attack those alined with chaos!"


That's what they all say. I'm not sure why. Chaos people taste good too...

Anyway, enjoying the story. I laughed when you got hit by the truck. And I wonder who that shape shifter was?
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12/17/2011 23:56:25   
Kinzdor
Member

The one that transformed into a baseball bat? That was Stephen Fear. As for the one that changed forms that was PrimalVodo. It is more along the lines of multiple personality's then it is shape shifting.
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12/18/2011 1:17:10   
primalvoldo
Member

Nice introduction for my character kinzvlle, you got his personality very well done. Just remember the few spelling errors like "tellaport=teleport" and "Allie=Ally" but don't worry too mutch about it. While the HeroSpire war is going on I'm still able to contact you and control the BioHazards. The next chapter you should figure out his name. They call him Voldo.

Only you and I know what will happen to Herospire in the next few chapters, it will be a laugh....

< Message edited by primalvoldo -- 12/18/2011 1:33:04 >
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12/18/2011 23:57:28   
star screamer
Member

Why would Stephan do such a thing! He is good!
And ouch don't bite my arm Crocy.
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12/19/2011 17:13:39   
Kinzdor
Member

The bio you sent me said he was chaos and killed the living!
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12/19/2011 18:21:18   
star screamer
Member

Star Screamer is. Not me.
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12/19/2011 20:30:42   
Kinzdor
Member

Well the name on the bio said Stephen Fear!
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12/19/2011 20:36:49   
Sir Night
Member

If it's a big deal you could just change the name in the story to Star Screamer.
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12/19/2011 20:55:08   
Kinzdor
Member

There I have changed the name!
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12/21/2011 2:36:08   
Goldstein
Member

Doctor Goldenstein does not discriminate! If you're hurt, you're hurt. I'll help.

(And my bed-side manner is a lot better than Doc Blackshock's, but don't tell him I said that.)
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12/26/2011 19:19:14   
Kinzdor
Member

Goldstein I see you more of a battle medic. Ready to rush into combat, and heal those on the front lines. I can see you in a military hospital but not some city hospital.
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