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3/9/2012 23:31:08   
Glais
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And so the plot continues, at last!
Man, this Nightsoul woman seems to be the source of everyone's problems. Even funnier since Raynar and Reki hardly know each other, but they both know her.

Found it sort of corny at the "my nightmare" line, but whatever.

Also, what exactly is a boater?
DF MQ  Post #: 26
3/10/2012 0:06:52   
Bustichia
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 The nightmare line was corny, but I love corn :D

And Nightsoul has a reason for being related to these people, yet them not knowing her.

Also, a boater is a round hat with a flat brim all around. Very stylish actually. It's actually the real Raynar's favorite hat, so I incorporated it into his character.
DF MQ  Post #: 27
3/10/2012 0:11:51   
Glais
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I see, would not have pictured Raynar that way initially. So it's like a Bowler Hat kinda?

And well, I didn't mean them not knowing her, since it seems quite the opposite, but rather all these strangers having ties to her.
DF MQ  Post #: 28
3/10/2012 0:15:56   
Bustichia
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 o.O I worded it wrong. It's "not knowing each other".

And it'll become apparent as the story drags on.
DF MQ  Post #: 29
3/10/2012 0:20:50   
Glais
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Ah gotcha. Well then I can't wait to see how it turns out, this has me interested...
DF MQ  Post #: 30
3/12/2012 5:12:36   
Bustichia
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 Chapter 9 is up! And how intriguing!
DF MQ  Post #: 31
3/12/2012 6:01:28   
Glais
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Hm, so now we have yet another figure yet still no leads on the mysterious Nightsoul. She's growing to be the Dio brando of this...

I can't help but feel Lord Paper Clip is so out of place, but then at the same time he's pretty much supposed to be.
DF MQ  Post #: 32
3/12/2012 6:05:14   
Bustichia
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 I MEANT to build on Nightsoul more, but my chapter got too big, so I ended up putting it off.

And I think LPC is a fun character :D

Edit: I'm also a huge fan of the Loads and Loads of Characters trope, and I generally implement it into things I write.

EDIT2: Which is why I'm adding characters every chapter or so.

< Message edited by BustichiaReki -- 3/12/2012 6:24:42 >
DF MQ  Post #: 33
3/12/2012 6:58:21   
Paperclipkiller
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You somehow portrayed me perfectly in a way I wouldn't of thought of myself. I love it. The line "Such baseless confidence..." is what really rang out to me, because I thought of that before I even read the line. Yea I am a bit biased with it all since I like reading how others portray me and I tend to focus on when I am in the spotlight of the story. I get curious how my character will be.

Keep it up! You are doing an awesome job, keeping the story going and not falling flat. Be careful not to add to many characters though, you don't want character overload.
DF MQ  Post #: 34
3/12/2012 7:01:25   
Bustichia
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 Well, as long as I develop all my characters, keep them in the story, and never forget about them, I should be fine. And I have a good memory.

And I'll try to get my other characters to that level of similarity, as well.
DF MQ  Post #: 35
3/12/2012 18:08:15   
Glais
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While I like an expansive universe, I kinda liked the three core characters, or who I figured they were, Reki, Raven, and Komoto.
DF MQ  Post #: 36
3/13/2012 0:58:34   
Bustichia
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 Four* core characters: Reki, Raven, Raynar, and Nightsoul.
DF MQ  Post #: 37
3/13/2012 1:00:40   
Glais
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I meant as as a team, should have stated that <_> Nightsoul seems to be more of an antagonist...plus we haven't even met her. though antagonists are key characters...
DF MQ  Post #: 38
3/13/2012 1:08:29   
Bustichia
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 Ah, I see... I don't have plans to make them a trio *in the near future*. Right now, the only trio I have is Reki, Raven, and Draketh.
DF MQ  Post #: 39
3/13/2012 2:03:23   
Glais
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Oh I see. I had no idea Draketh would end up being so important, hmm.
DF MQ  Post #: 40
3/13/2012 2:08:58   
Bustichia
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 Well, that's just for now. Who knows what I might do later on? Maybe I'll kill him off, or have him shackled in a dungeon, or something like that.
DF MQ  Post #: 41
3/13/2012 2:41:43   
Glais
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True, I mean the plot is really only just beginning. And even then we still don't know a whole lot.
DF MQ  Post #: 42
3/13/2012 2:48:04   
Bustichia
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 Even I don't know a whole lot. This fanfic is basically 30 minutes of improv per chapter.
DF MQ  Post #: 43
3/13/2012 2:50:30   
Glais
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xD That is something our stories have in common. I have a....very vague idea of where I wish to go, but for the most part, as you said, improv.

At that, there is really no way to predict anything then, as it is all off the top of your head.

Come to think of it, I really haven't been able to guess anything that's happened so far.
DF MQ  Post #: 44
3/13/2012 2:54:29   
Bustichia
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 I have an... interesting mind. I float ideas along my mind and pick and choose ones at random. Whether it works or not, well, that's up to you.
DF MQ  Post #: 45
3/13/2012 3:03:21   
Glais
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Well, it looks to be working so far. I'm enjoying the story anyways.
DF MQ  Post #: 46
3/14/2012 17:15:37   
Bustichia
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 Chapter 10 is up!
DF MQ  Post #: 47
3/14/2012 18:01:24   
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ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L


 That was a quick chapter.

I don't really understand Draketh, what isn't a mercenary job? An adventurer for instance is a mercenary to me.
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 48
3/14/2012 18:13:56   
Bustichia
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 A mercenary works a job for someone, to be paid by that someone. Adventurer's are generally self-employed.
DF MQ  Post #: 49
3/14/2012 20:28:14   
Glais
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quote:

"Do what you will. Get in my way, however, and I shall toss you on the wayside."

Drat, he was getting away from the typical "I'm hard" character I expected.

Also, just a note, instead of hitting Enter twice, you could use 
[hr]
so as to give this result.

Thus separating those parts of the story.

Hm, drat. Was hoping for Paper Clip not to die. Unless divine intervention.
DF MQ  Post #: 50
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