Master Kage
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Okay, guys. I just made up a HS character, and I did put it in the Bio Help & Advice Section, but I won't some more thoughts and opinions on how it can be improved.
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Name: Taraslor.
Gender: Male.
Age Range: Unknown, but suspected to be 17-19 based on height and weight.
Race (Pure or halfbreed only): Human.
Appearance (Build, hair, skin, clothes...): Has a rather skinny build, and is around 5'4. However, despite his rather small build, he can easily hold his own in combat. His hair is generally neat, despite his lack of care for it, because he sees know reason for grooming his hair, considering all of his travels, and the dangers that he frequently faces. He is most commonly seen in burnt white tunic in the majority of his travels. However, he occasionally changes attire to adapt to a situation, or because he is forced to.
Belongings: He contains few belongings, as to prevent becoming encumbered. Though, what he does own is a tattered journal, of how he got this is unknown. A short sword, and a small knife, both of which are used for combat and other various situations, acquiring both from a local huntsman as a favor after rescuing him from a rogue bear, which nearly caused both of them to be killed. A clear white cloak, which is nearly indestructible if hit by semi-piercing weapons. It can prevent the average bullet, but the more sophisticated weapons penetrate the cloak. He acquired this from being passed down to him by his father's will, after his death. Lastly, he has a ring that causes his strength and intelligence to be increased greatly. However, after doing this, the rings power causes him to be severely weakened by it, nearly to the point of death. He acquired this by his most faithful friend, Fayne, after she was nearly killed by a pack of mongrels.
Personality: He has an aggressive personality, and attempts to lock up his emotions, not wanting to be emotionally hurt again.
However, he gets extremely excited when he encounters a great fight, and loves a good challenge, and becomes extremely disappointed when an enemy or foe isn't as much as they boasted about beforehand.
In a few rare cases, he can be seen to have an incredibly warped sense of humor, thinking things that are incredibly dark and disturbing are hilarious.
However, he quickly becomes serious when he needs to be.
History: He had a fairly average childhood. He was introduced to combat and battle strategy early in his life, though. He has become extremely distanced with the people that he loves, after losing one of his oldest friends, which he continually blames himself over her death.
He lost his mother and father on the day he had reached twelve, and has lost many great friends on his travels, both from death and traveling away, or from him leaving.
After the deaths of his parents, he quickly set out in the world on his own. Quickly finding a retired swordsman, whom helped train Taraslor in his melee skills. And after, suggested that he set out to find the swordsman's oldest friend who taught young protegees the art of the bow, long range combat.
After a month of traveling on foot, he discovered that the instructor's hut was near a large body water. Taraslor quickly convinced the instructor to teach him long range combat with a bow, and hesitantly he agreed.
Ever since then, he has become a wandering nomad, traveling the land.
Personal: He feels that the deaths of the people he loved was his fault, and blames himself for not preventing them, and he is extremely distant of people whom he has a relationship with because of this. He is normally calm, but can become aggressive when it is needed.
Racial traits: Has slightly more strength than the average human. Has a far greater intelligence than most humans.
Skills, spells and abilities: Has a ring that enables him to enhances his abilities immensely. However, after doing this will put him in a near death state.
Has an amazing agility, and uses that to his advantage in fights.
Has a genius level intelligence.
< Message edited by Master Kage -- 2/19/2012 12:24:49 >
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