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8/19/2012 10:42:46   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Part II of an epic Saga

Well, you guys are experienced enough what to do here:

Read, comment and critique if you feel like it.

AQ DF AQW  Post #: 1
8/19/2012 11:07:18   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L
quote:

lefendary set of their lost forefathers.

legendary


Interesting name.
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 2
8/19/2012 11:14:31   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Thanks about the name. This is Part II to the Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft. It would've went on longer but this war ties in at a certain point* so I decided to create this new saga. It will focus on Alaric and his cousin of greater power Azrael and everything the intro post mentioned
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 3
8/19/2012 11:32:04   
Arthur
How We Roll Winner
Dec14


 @Van, I don't think you got what Dwelling said about the name.

Anyways, you my friend, are obsessed with Crusniks. Been having an overdose of Trinity Blood of late? :-/

Interesting start to be sure.



And again, Interesting name...
DF MQ AQW  Post #: 4
8/19/2012 11:33:38   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 What name is interesting?

Finished Trinity Blood thrice last week :3
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 5
8/19/2012 11:36:11   
Arthur
How We Roll Winner
Dec14


 Lol. Definitely an overdose.

Anyways, scroll down to the bottom of the AE Fanfiction Discussion list and check out the title of Dwelling Dragonlord's epic, and its premise.
DF MQ AQW  Post #: 6
8/19/2012 11:37:24   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 OMG LOL

Coincidence bro, sorry. If you want me to change it I can
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 7
8/19/2012 13:24:17   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Oh look, is that a new chapter up?
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 8
8/21/2012 1:03:53   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 If no one got the joke it means Chapter One is up.

And now, Chapter Two. This one's gonna be legit.
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 9
8/21/2012 5:58:56   
Glais
Member

Apologies for not getting to this sooner, hadn't been in much of a reading mood.

Anyhow, your writing's vastly improved. My only real complaint is those names.

This Aura power could be quite fun, looking forward to how you develop and use it.
DF MQ  Post #: 10
8/21/2012 13:09:44   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 What's wrong with the names?
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 11
8/21/2012 15:39:57   
Glais
Member

You seem to be following the X-Color+Y Object scheme of clan names. But that's not bad, actually the only one that seemed too beyond belief was Goddenomega...it's...God...and Omega. And yet it's a name...
DF MQ  Post #: 12
8/21/2012 19:12:46   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Not quite comprehending but whatever. The Goddenomega live up to their name. Trust me on that.

< Message edited by VanHellsin24 -- 8/21/2012 19:13:05 >
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 13
8/21/2012 21:46:57   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Chapter Three is up.

Before I'm hounded

spoiler:

Safiria and Azrael have NOT started an intimate relationship. Azrael is just very friendly
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 14
8/22/2012 2:10:55   
Glais
Member

Aaaand caught up. Thise Wraiths or Crusniks seem like they'll be pretty OP, wonder how the cast will deal with them.
DF MQ  Post #: 15
8/22/2012 21:33:59   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 The cast can't really do much but let these two ( and a few more ) OP subraces do what they want to do.
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 16
8/23/2012 1:42:16   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Chapter Four is up.

spoiler:

Ok they're kinda in love.
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 17
8/23/2012 18:26:21   
Glais
Member

That was odd. Was gonna complain about little plot advancement, but the last line hints something big is going down next chapter.
DF MQ  Post #: 18
8/23/2012 20:04:49   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Not next chapter. The following chapter after this next one will. This new chapter upcoming will delve into the strongest non-evil clan.
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 19
8/30/2012 12:22:44   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Chapters Five and Six are live.

spoiler:

The slaughter of entire Inquisition fortresses, family feuds and tribulations altogeter. Oh my.


< Message edited by VanHellsin24 -- 8/30/2012 16:52:28 >
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 20
8/30/2012 16:53:02   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Chapter Seven is live!

I'm on a creative role!
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 21
8/30/2012 20:18:43   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 I believe...I can...put out at least three more...by tomorrow
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 22
8/30/2012 20:21:07   
Glais
Member

That's a...lot of productivity. Only read Chapter 5 at the moment (last night) and you wrote so much since then...

Was gonna comment on how impossible it seemed for one guy>10,000 but then I remembered that's pretty much every mission in Fall of Cybertron :P
DF MQ  Post #: 23
8/30/2012 20:25:06   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Meh, I only did PvP in Fall of Cybertron. Story mode...meh


EDIT: What do you mean by "1 man >10,000"?
AQ DF AQW  Post #: 24
8/30/2012 20:34:11   
Glais
Member

The last line in Chapter 5.

DF MQ  Post #: 25
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