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2/7/2014 1:51:57   
Glais
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vintage
i almost dont want to look at my chapter now because im sure ill hate it
anyways
quote:

“The most dangerous game of all. MAN.”

since i didnt get the reference at all, i found this hilarious because it reminded me of an episode of TransFormers
quote:

From a small box labeled “Dante, the Baron” the Dread withdrew a golden four-legged mechanical spider with lightning flashing in its multi-faceted eyes.

this was just beautiful

good chapter overall, especially enjoyed the bit with the new costume

second to last line should say Batoro instead of Bator though
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2/7/2014 2:01:23   
Mordred
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The Atealan Gamestalker is an expy of the second greatest superhero of all time, the Martian Manhunter.

I hope someone tells him. }-]

Yeah. I personally think that Batoro's costume is really lame(especially that head fin!), but also recognize that I can't really justify changing his outfit. Plus all the actual reasons Batoro provides.

;>.> <.<; You saw nothing!
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