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10/4/2012 18:26:01   
VanHellsin24
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 The Prologue

< Message edited by VanHellsin24 -- 10/4/2012 18:42:04 >
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10/4/2012 18:53:43   
Mortarion
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I have read a little, it's good
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10/4/2012 19:05:54   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 For everyone's sake:

Cystica (sis-TEE-sha) - Ottoman Empire

Vyzwen (vi-zwen) - Mongolia

Tehrt (turt) - Africa *mainly Egypt*
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10/4/2012 20:09:24   
lordkaho
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quote:

His eyes turned into pure energy and gravity ceased to exist around him. A blast of energy splashed out onto the Frankenstein, hugging him, pulling him in closer like a lover would to his or her partner. He smirked, revealing dangerously sharpened teeth. The Tesla Coils began shooting off energy beams randomly in all directions, save for the spot Anubis stood in. Victor slowly lifted the orb and crushed it, and the last remains of the electricity seeped into his fingers. Gravity assumed its natural right, and all became still.


Cole Macgrath in Infamous? :D

Anyway, I really love the atmosphere you're building here. It really expands to the world we are making. Those steam towers in particular interest me. Expect me to reference them more often in subsequent chapters.

So...Which part do you want drawn? We'll probably have this up later today or tomorrow.


< Message edited by lordkaho -- 10/4/2012 20:15:07 >
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10/4/2012 20:12:45   
Mortarion
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If I might say, I'd like to see, either the creature attacking Victor with the tower as the background, or Victor facing the tower

In fact, after we are done, it would be really cool to have a bestiary of sorts, I am sure we'll produce quite the unique creatures


< Message edited by Mortarion -- 10/4/2012 20:16:04 >
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10/4/2012 21:06:17   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Victor in front of the machine, discharge rolling across him and Anubis standing behind, arms crossed.

Anubis has the appearance of Benmummy from Ben 10 with the descriptions I provided as well
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10/4/2012 21:09:45   
Mortarion
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Aww, I'd lik e to see this tower, oh, and Van, would you mind if I made a creature based from a sketch/prototype made by Victor?
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10/4/2012 21:23:46   
VanHellsin24
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 What do you mean "based from a sketch/prototype" made by Victor?
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10/4/2012 21:25:13   
Mortarion
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Let's say Victor made plans for an automaton, ok, then, as you said, he leaved those plans, would it be ok, if I made a character who is a product of those planes? And remember, this is all theorical talking
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10/4/2012 21:29:44   
VanHellsin24
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 Depends. I do have a Docs with machines and galvanic creatures Victor created. What would you like?
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10/4/2012 21:38:07   
Mortarion
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Could I see them? It's that I was thinking of something like this

http://gatherer.wizards.com/pages/card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=114916

Look the image :P
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10/4/2012 21:43:01   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Going to be honest, I'm going to allow the usage of two:

Either the Galvanic PulseKnight or the Galvanizer itself
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10/4/2012 21:54:26   
Mortarion
Member

I can do nothing without the links Van.... Ad did you even saw the picture?
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10/4/2012 21:57:36   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 The Galvanizer's intended image is the creature in that pic. If you want, ill post the Doc tomorrow afternoon. Tomorrow's a busy day
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10/4/2012 22:00:15   
Mortarion
Member

And, couldn't you send me the link in a PM? And, dude, I have a book test tomorrow and I am just finishing it
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10/4/2012 22:02:19   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Its a rather old Doc, and I meant to revamp it for this story. That's why it can be ready tomorrow. Ill annoy Aizen into starting the revamp for me.
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10/4/2012 22:05:16   
Mortarion
Member

Oh, ok, say hi to Aizen by the way
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10/5/2012 18:39:29   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Aizen and I are currently half-way re-creating Victor's Lost Documents, and I should have a Docs for it by tomorrow this time
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10/6/2012 21:19:10   
lordkaho
Creative!


 Mortarion and Glaisaurus' Bio pics are up!

Van's prologue well be delayed again for today as I haven't started drawing the scenario picture yet.

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By the way, while browsing TV tropes, I have found a nifty team related trope to better describe our characters.

Basically, Victor, Sarpedon and Verge are of the Freudian Trio ensemble.

Id (Instinctual and driven by desire and emotion)- Sarpedon.
Superego (Calculating and prefers logical reasoning)- Victor
Ego (Voice of reason/Balance between the aforementioned two)- Verge

Of course, if we use the Five Man Band trope;

The Leader- This position falls well with Victor, being a Type I Leader.
The Lancer- Verge, who nicely contrasts Victors, because of their views in life, despite both filling the role of The Smart Guy. But I feel Verge fits that role better because of his attitude. Victor seems too uptight and serious to be it.
The Big Guy- Sarpedon, undoubtedly.
The 6th Ranger- Galatea. She won't be joining the trio until all of them manage to encounter her in their own respective routes.
spoiler:

'Unlocking' her as a party member requires your characters to personally defeat her. It will be what settles as a level of trust between her and your characters.

The Team Pet- TLM

What do you think?

I'm also planning on drawing a world map for our setting.



< Message edited by lordkaho -- 10/6/2012 21:24:59 >
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10/6/2012 21:28:03   
Mortarion
Member

Well, both of them are awesome, specially Sarpedon.

Now, we need a drawing of TLM, after all, he is our team pet

And a world map would be awesome
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10/6/2012 21:31:20   
lordkaho
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Now, we need a drawing of TLM, after all, he is our team pet


I will need a description from Glais tho. I still don't know what it looks like.

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I still haven't started on my prologue...What about you guys? How is it going?


< Message edited by lordkaho -- 10/6/2012 21:34:05 >
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10/6/2012 21:33:38   
Mortarion
Member

True, also, is it my idea or Sarpedon's rebreather has a mouth compartment?
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10/6/2012 21:34:49   
lordkaho
Creative!


 ^

It does, since it's based on Kabal's mouth piece remember?
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10/6/2012 21:35:33   
Mortarion
Member

True, I'd love to see his back aswell, and, yeah, he is awesome
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10/7/2012 18:36:54   
VanHellsin24
Banned


 Victor, contrary to popular belief, isn't uptight. All the while he is very serious

< Message edited by VanHellsin24 -- 10/7/2012 18:37:25 >
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