LordDarkex
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I'm going to assume C&C means comments and criticism, or something along those lines.
Here's the link! Hope you enjoy it :)
I didn't put much thought into the title, as you can see.
The writing gets a little sloppy near the end, in my opinion. If I've got time I'll go back and fix it.
I can understand fully if you find it a little boring.
Be as harsh as you want with the criticism! Do your worst (;
I tried to add a philosophical twist to it; what do you think the story's about?
Oh, and I wasn't quite sure whether to stick this in the fanfic or creative writing section. I think fanfic has to do with the already created worlds of AE, whereas the creative section can be about anything. But my story has very little to do with the AE world itself; all I really have to do to change it is switch the names around, so in light of that I figure I'd just toss here instead.
< Message edited by LordDarkex -- 2/12/2013 4:49:52 >
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