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6/24/2013 23:40:50   
popinloopy
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This is the correct place to discuss the story I wrote, posted by Warmonger Starsaber in this thread.

Just remember all forum rules, be civil, blah blah. Reviews are appreciated, but sugarcoating is not. Be brutally honest when critiquing.
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6/25/2013 0:11:54   
WarMongerRave
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that is a good story keep it up

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6/25/2013 0:13:47   
Warmonger Starsaber
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Part 3, 4 and 5 are out.

< Message edited by Warmonger Starsaber -- 6/25/2013 13:00:40 >
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6/25/2013 13:27:15   
kors
Member

Well, it was interesting but I can see that our definitions of time travel would not play well together. If Callum summoned his past selves, not alternate selves, shouldn't a paradox of some kind occur after Starsaber slaughters the lot of them at the very least?
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6/25/2013 13:30:54   
popinloopy
Member

Considering they were the hims from brief past, 5 minutes before the fight for some and a mere second ago for others, their deaths shouldn't impact anything too much. There is no paradox because once they were pulled from their timelines those timelines ceased to exist and the current one became the main one, and killing people who no longer have a place or time of origin affects nothing, especially since the ones from 5 minutes before the fight were just Callum waiting for Starsaber to show up.
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6/25/2013 13:46:12   
bokterier
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I think it was pretty darn good story, keep up the good work. :D
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6/25/2013 13:54:32   
dragonfire1423
Member

It's a good story! The only problem I had with it is that I couldn't really tell what happened while they were fighting, but that's only because I don't really know my way around the classes.
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6/25/2013 14:53:37   
deather98
Member

it was decent
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6/25/2013 15:20:43   
popinloopy
Member

@dragonfire
Honestly, I just made most of it up. All you need to know is that DmK is a powerhouse, and Chronomancer/Timekiller have control over... Well, time.

@deather
Mind telling me how I could make it better?
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6/25/2013 16:35:52   
Gianna Glow
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I have removed all the discussion in the story thread. Please keep this thread for stories only and keep discussion and planning in the discussion thread. Thank you.
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6/25/2013 17:45:27   
popinloopy
Member

@Gianna
Thank you, it is much appreciated.
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6/25/2013 18:20:40   
flashbang
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Yay! Fighting! You know popin, if you HAD to choose a winner who would it be?
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6/25/2013 18:22:41   
popinloopy
Member

Oh, that's simple. I would totally have the winner be [Message terminated due to Error 404]
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6/25/2013 19:29:22   
dragonfire1423
Member

Oh yeah! I agree it should totally have been [Message terminated due to Error 404] !
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6/25/2013 19:39:55   
popinloopy
Member

@dragonfire
Yeah, totally. If anything above all else, the sole reason he would win is because of [REDACTED]
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6/25/2013 20:18:52   
dragonfire1423
Member

Oh man! I love when he [REMOVED], and then he turned around and [REMOVED]

Oh, and then the [YOUR CONNECTION TO SIM-CITY HAS BEEN LOST]!
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6/25/2013 21:56:45   
ProbablyCallum
Member

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< Message edited by Cronomancer Callum -- 6/16/2019 8:37:24 >
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6/25/2013 22:04:54   
popinloopy
Member

@Callum
Why thank you. I went back and reread some things. There are a couple typos, but fixing them is beyond my power at this point.
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2/4/2014 20:44:15   
Lord Ferret
Member

I have read the story and found it very entertaining to say the least may I say you have a gift for writing popinloopy and you should explore more avenues as you will enjoy them.

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2/4/2014 20:57:01   
popinloopy
Member

@Lord Ferret
Thank you! I'm actually currently writing another one, if you haven't seen it yet. It's called "War Calls" if you wanna give it a read.
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2/6/2014 0:45:49   
Warmonger Starsaber
Member

Popin!, Long time no see. Another one?. With me and Callum?. Did you finish this one?.
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2/6/2014 0:54:21   
popinloopy
Member

@Starsaber
"Fight of the Ages" is over, yes. I never say the winner. And yeah, it's been a while. Been over in the AQGD mostly. I'm gonna try to transition back into DF soon. And no worries, the new one is gonna be even better. If you need, I can get a link to it. And it's not just gonna be you and Callum. It's that one I was working on with every DF/AQ warmonger.
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5/15/2014 7:37:06   
ProbablyCallum
Member

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< Message edited by Cronomancer Callum -- 6/16/2019 8:36:51 >
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