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2/20/2014 22:44:15   
BJEBLE
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@Warden No just farm with another character.Like Templar or Aqueous, as long as you're accomplishing something then it's better than Refresh farming.
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2/20/2014 22:59:04   
Gorillo Titan
Member

spent over 400k on gold just to get an earthquake then after a 30 minute conversation come to the conclusion that Moutain strike is better than earthquake only have 2k left >.> have to farm before CC changes now
Post #: 277
2/20/2014 23:34:02   
Agaraoth2
Member

Either its me or does love machine run into a lot of female characters
AQW  Post #: 278
2/20/2014 23:41:17   
The Jop
Member

You probably just notice it more.
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 279
2/21/2014 0:57:27   
megakyle777
Member

Just in case people missed the several posts made already, the forum entries you have made need to go in the new Oversoul Water Contest entries thread, links to which can be found in the top section along with rules, or in the Official Contesta Forums section rather then the Char Suggestion one.

< Message edited by megakyle777 -- 2/21/2014 1:05:11 >
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2/21/2014 1:06:02   
Megadragonknight
Member

Guys, please do comment my Hydra Dragon. I make lots of edition to the story thx to Megakyle for the feedback. May my Hydra Dragon be selected by Nulgath and then many players but I don't expect it to win. Here is the link to submit your entry.
Post #: 281
2/21/2014 1:08:26   
DarkLore
Member

Anyone remember operation ninja kitty? MegaKyle knows what I'm talking about. LOL!
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 282
2/21/2014 1:13:54   
DidYouKnowThat
Member

@MDK: Pretty interesting character. . .a Hydra Dragon. . . .

Uhm, to make the backstory better, you could change things such as why the two men kept proceeding even though they heard this weird noise. . . .
And er, describe how it looks . . . .the Hydra Dragon. . .(Your character could be called HD. . .Lol xD)

Post #: 283
2/21/2014 1:17:58   
Megadragonknight
Member

@DYKT
Thx for the feedback. I was so focused on Hydra Dragon that I can forget the two men were the main focus of alerting Hydra Dragon and found its existence.
Post #: 284
2/21/2014 1:20:19   
DidYouKnowThat
Member

Yeah, take into consideration everything, since this is a storyline contest. . . .

And instead of using words like ''cool'' or something. . . .use better words. In my opinion it sounds better when you're trying to give detail about a deadly serpentine creature.

Post #: 285
2/21/2014 1:24:39   
Megadragonknight
Member

There done all the stuff you had commented. I am ready for more comments. Still, I won't expect to win the contest but would still hope for it since we don't have any Hydra-theme character in OS.
Post #: 286
2/21/2014 1:38:04   
DidYouKnowThat
Member

Yep, sounds great! But uhm:
Instead of ''and hope they will experience exciting stuff,'' how about ''and hope they will gain an exciting experience?'' Refrain from general words like 'cool' and 'stuff.'

Another example I got from your post was ->
''The story goes with 2 man went to explore a dark lake quite near to their hometown, Solace, for some exploration.''

Sounds a bit. . .off.

Instead of that, you CAN put ''The legend goes with two men who went exploring a dark lake quite near their hometown Solace, for some ???''

??? Can be -> Discoveries

or Treasure

or. . . .Artifacts?

Anything, but exploring for some exploration sounds a tad bit weird.


< Message edited by DidYouKnowThat -- 2/21/2014 1:48:11 >
Post #: 287
2/21/2014 1:42:51   
Megadragonknight
Member

..... I don't careeeee!! Nah, just joking. Noted that.

Edit: Those 2 men are adventurous, not a treasure hunter. But exploring is part of the adventure so exploring in any area around the world is no problem here. ;)

< Message edited by Megadragonknight -- 2/21/2014 1:46:13 >
Post #: 288
2/21/2014 1:45:17   
megakyle777
Member

Your wording of stuff is a bit odd if that makes sense. For example, different tenses used where one should be the same, words like frighten instead of frightened, some spelling or usage errors, small stuff like that, but the small stuff can get in the way. Look at other entries then your own for a example of what i mean. But like I said, the tale itself is a good one and a char I'd love to see.

< Message edited by megakyle777 -- 2/21/2014 1:46:03 >
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2/21/2014 1:48:07   
Megadragonknight
Member

Most importantly in a story, it have good tales itself and since its also characters some players like to see. But the content, words are also important and I had been aware of that. Will make some further improvement in my story. Thx for the comment.
Post #: 290
2/21/2014 8:34:44   
Agaraoth2
Member

Is TC rare now i haven't heard of anyone encountering it for a while
AQW  Post #: 291
2/21/2014 8:53:43   
Megadragonknight
Member

@Agaraoth2
Nope, Treasure Chest is just too hard to encounter but not harder than Moose that's for sure. I managed to encounter and beat TC twice in Labyrinth Dungeon Map 2 just now. Surprised TC have new 3 hit combo animation. Well that's probably because I haven't encountered and fought TC for a long time.
Post #: 292
2/21/2014 9:03:24   
Agaraoth2
Member

i wish we could posses TC and i gives us a perk like double gold
AQW  Post #: 293
2/21/2014 9:07:05   
Megadragonknight
Member

Yeah. :( I am so wanting to possess TC and gain its power but I guess there would possibly be another Treasure Chest-like character for us to possess. In OS, anything is possible for us to possess. AE and even OS defies logic but every AE games still follow the law of physics in someway.

Edit: I made an edition of my Hydra Dragon's quote. Plus I post a perfect example picture of how Hydra Dragon's appearance will look in OS. It don't fit with my description of Hydra Dragon's appearance but the picture is already the perfect description for Hydra Dragon's appearance. Of course, the full appearance can't be similar to that picture of Hydra Dragon but its somehow similar to it. Anyway, here is the link for easier path to Water Character Contest Submission Thread.

Edit2: If anyone needs a link for easier way to see other forumites' Water character suggestions, here is the link.

< Message edited by Megadragonknight -- 2/21/2014 9:40:43 >
Post #: 294
2/21/2014 12:09:25   
Agaraoth2
Member

@MDK water needs some power ups but I think its the most balanced element so far.

< Message edited by Agaraoth2 -- 2/21/2014 14:00:00 >
AQW  Post #: 295
2/21/2014 14:33:19   
Trollok!!!
Member

CC changed. Looks like I can get back to actually being able to obtain gold.
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2/21/2014 16:20:22   
the warden
Member

so is there a release or have we heard anything?
AQ DF MQ AQW  Post #: 297
2/21/2014 16:22:09   
Axel459
The Void Calls


 Yeah, I don't think there is going to be a release today
AQ DF MQ AQW  Post #: 298
2/21/2014 16:33:56   
the warden
Member

axel459: :(
AQ DF MQ AQW  Post #: 299
2/21/2014 17:45:14   
The Jop
Member

6 failed captures on Love Slime...I'm feeling pretty unlucky right now.
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