Vagaran
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@Mega I like the idea of Aquatic Dragon, your story is pretty good, but there are a few spelling errors here and there. I think the 5 hit combo is maybe a bit to, idk, "weak looking" when you compare to the character. It could be something like Aqua Dragon fires a beam on the ground beneath the enemy and some pillars of water comes up? I think it would look cooler and fit more with the fact that he IS a dragon, one of the most powerful magical beings. Also enemy quote could also be "I will avenge my fallen brothers and sisters" though the one you suggested is good aswell ^^ Maybe there could also be special quote for when he beats one of Nulgath's minions, something like "I will destroy your lord, Nulgath!", just a thought though :P Overall it's a pretty solid character with a good story and some good combos, there are several possibilities for it.
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