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@MDK: I just finished another entry too (longer post than my Abyssal Titan, haha) I read yours. Honest opinion, seems decent. I like how its different from the other dragons, instead of being violent and all, it's kind. Surprise, surprise, it's a Legendary and a dragon . .without Bash/Thrash?! Lolol. Oh well. . . I guess it'd be risky using those cards anyway. Not sure if it's really for dragons only, or if it's for promo-dragons only, or whatever. Ehm, in my opinion you could improve by saying how he was hurt. . . and maybe go in detail how he was saved. . . and things like that. But in general, I find it quite ironic how he was hurt so badly. I mean, Voids and all don't look like they were made for. .. you know. . .. ''swimming.'' Does Nulgath really have any water minions and all? LOL. So with that said, shouldn't the Water Dragon have the better edge over the Nulgath minions? I thought for sure it'd go like this -> The Aquatic Dragon, hearing the commotion, woke up and went to check what was causing it. He was horrified when he saw what was unfolding before his very eyes, and a strong anger began to stir inside him. He rushed into battle, fierce and merciless, killing the horde. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Y'see what I mean? I thought for SURE that he was going to win! D: Oh well. :P
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