megakyle777
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Well, the contest is over and I did not win, but I'd like some feedback as to where I went wrong and where I can improve if that's okay, so I am prepared for the next AE contest. The only thing I see wrong with it myself is a few tyops, but that's why I'm asking. quote:
Character Name: Megakyle777 Reflections Rising Level 40 + Mirror Drakath has brought you back to his realm on a most urgent matter. After your last encounter with the forces of evil, The mirror version of King Alteon learned of his counterpart’s death. Unfortunately, the death of a counterpart allows travel for that counterpart between realms. With Mirror Drakath and the forces of good winning at every turn, and even destroying his champion Undead Artix, Alteon has thought of a desperate solution –He plans to invade your world with the largest undead army anyone has ever seen. Gathering undead counterparts of all the undead you and others have slain over the years, he now has an army of them unlike any other, all capable of travel between the two realms. Mirror Drakath has called you here for one purpose: Destroy Alteon and his army before he invades your world! However, Alteon has planned for your arrival and attempt… Name of Map: Mirrorarmy in the mirror realm NPC Mirror Drakath, Champion of Order Main Text: Hero, I call you here on a urgent matter. Our version of King Alteon plans to invade your world with the largest undead army ever seen! You must stop him before he destroys your entire world! More Text: I believed it impossible for him to travel to your world too. But then I learned your version of Alteon is dead. When a counterpart dies it allows room to travel between worlds. You must stop him before this happens! More Text 2: I was confused as to how the undead would travel there too at first. But it turns out they were very carefully selected. From the counterparts of undead YOU and your fellow heroes have already slain. You must stop them again! Monsters: Angry Undead Giant Big Jack Sprat Dark Dracozombie Lich Ravanger Skeleton Warrior Undead Paladin Soulseeker Boss Monster Type Undead Description: Well, it’s the Mirror Version of Alteon. Not much to say on the looks since he already exists. He hits for about 200 damage, had 35,000 health, and has a special ability where he summons a aggressive version of one of the above 7 undead for extra damage to you. Reward types Monster Drops Boss Drops Armor: Mirror Alteon Armor Helm: Mirror Alteon Helm, Big Jack Head Morph Cape: Mirror Alteon Cape, Ravenger Cape Weapons: Cursed Blade of Alteon, Warrior’s Blade, Undead Paladin Sword Pet: Mini Soulseeker (Battle Pet if possible) (Note: If possible, I’d like for any of these monsters that ALREADY drop stuff to keep the stuff they already drop, both perm items, quest based one and temp ones) Release Outline: Player joins /join mirrorarmy Player talks to Mirror Drakath Cutscenes: Opening cutscene: Player is talking to Artix about maybe making some sort of shoe that does not need shoelaces, when he is pulled into the mirror realm by Mirror Drakath. He apologises for the event, but time is short. He explains how Mirror Alteon has learned of his counterpart's death, and has gathered an army of counterpart undead to the ones you have slain over the years, intending to leave the Mirror Realm and take over YOURS. He calls on you to help him stop an army of undead from invading your world. However, Alteon has a trick up his sleeve… End Cutscene: Mirror Alteon lies defeated on the floor. The hero says something about how his reign of evil had ended and his army slain, but then Alteon pulls out a Crystal and it glows. Suddenly, EVERY undead slain gets back up again and Mirror Alteon gets back up. He holds the hero against the wall with dark magic and explains how he long ago made a Crystal, and then each year of his undeath put a portion of his power in it, so after a good amount of time it had enough energy to raise an entire undead army again and again as needed. He opens a portal and gives the order for the invasion, but then Mirror Drakath Smashes the crystal out of nowhere. The energy blasts out, overloading Alteon and his army and they all blow up with alteon’s lasts word being “But… but I wanted it all…”. Mirror Drakath thanks the hero for saving the world, and returns him to Artix, who is now trying and failing to make a shoe with no laces. Quests: First Quest: Scouting mission (Map Item) We need to know exactly what we are dealing with here. Numbers, types of undead, you get the idea. Explore the entire enemy camp and report back to me. Enemy camp explored 1/1 This is not good. The undead he has gathered look much more dangerous than the typical undead we are used to… looks like he really wants your world. Second Quest: Giant Slaying (Drop) Okay, I have a plan, but we need to thin out the undead hordes before we can do it. This is gonna take a while. Kill 7 Angry Undead Giants and bring me their Souls. Undead Giant Souls Gathered: 7/7 I don’t like having to gather these souls, they should be made free. But we have no choice. Third Quest: Big Jack Had A Great Fall (Drop) I need 7 souls of the Big Jack Sprats in the area. Their souls are dangerous, so be careful. 7 Big Jack Sprat Souls Good. We still need some more however before we will be ready. Fourth Quest: Dark Dracozombie Dies (Again) (Drop) Okay, here’s the plan – I am talking to the souls we gathered when freed of Alteons control. They have agreed to wipe out the army before moving on, but of course we need much more 14 to do that. Gather 7 Dark Dracozombie Souls. Draconic souls should be powerful enough to lend a great hand in slaying them. Dark Dracozombie Souls 7 Good. This should lend us great power in destroying them. Fifth Quest: Lich Revengers (Drop) Okay, the Lich Ravengers could be a problem. Odds are they are there willingly and they could take command of the souls. Slay 10 of them. If you can find 5 there who are willing to aid us all the better. 10 Lich Ravengers Destroyed 5 Lich Souls Freed I was not expecting any of them to help us to be honest. I am glad I was wrong. Sixth Quest: Skeleton Warrior Souls (Drop) We need a brunt force to back up the other souls. Bring me 12 Skeleton Warrior Souls to back up the others. Skeletons Warrior Souls Freed 12 Good. They have agreed to help us. They did not like Alteon a lot anyway. Seventh Quest: Warriors Of (Bad) Virtue (Drop) Not all Paladins were made evil in this world. Some were captured heroes, slaughtered and raised to serve King Alteon in his elite forces. Find 5 of these brave souls and bring them to me. Noble Paladin Soul freed 5 Good. We are ready save for one thing. Eighth Quest: Soulseeker Troubles (Drop) The Soulseekers of Alteons Army are made to find freed souls and take them back to Alteon. This is obviously a problem to our plan. Slay ten Soulseekers to give us room to move. Soulseekers Slain 10 Okay. We are ready. Ninth Quest: Heroes Call For Aid (Multi Clicky) Okay, the souls are ready. I need you to head into the heart of the enemy camp and light a signal. Then we charge! Signal Lit: 1 (Note, the reason it is multi clicky is because the first few times the single won’t light and you get messages like “Why won’t this light? And “I KNEW I should not have brought matches from Zorbak!” Good. NOW WE FIGHT! Tenth Quest: Defeat Mirror Alteon! The army is being attacked, but while Alteon remains it can be risen again in time. You must slay him once and for all! Mirror Alteon Slain: 1 Auto turn in. Special Quest 1: Legions Of The Doomed I need you to free 2 of every type of undead soul here. Do this and I will reward you. Angry Undead Giant Soul freed: 2 Big Jack Sprat SOul freed : 2 Dark Dracozombie Soul Freed: 2 Lich Ravanger SOul freed: 2 Skeleton Warrior Soul freed: 2 Undead Paladin SOul freed: 2 Soulseeker Soul freed: 2 Thank you hero. Their passing makes the world a better place. Special Quest 2: HE JUST WON’T GIVE UP! Hero! Alteon has risen again! If he is not stopped… You MUST stop him! Bring me hos crown as proof of his death! Alteon’s Crown: 1 Good. May he rest in peace now. Even if he does not WANT to.
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