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6/4/2014 17:12:17

LordDarkex
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The Palace of the Paramount

Discuss please
Comments are greatly appreciated

Inspired heavily by The Monstrumologist

< Message edited by LordDarkex -- 8/16/2014 5:59:51 >

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8/16/2014 6:11:50

LordDarkex
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Reading this again, I realize that this story makes very little sense -- and yet I love this one the most out of everything I've done

Changed "animus and animated" to "animus and re-animated"
Changed the first "fourfolded heart" to "fourfolded heart, gently breathing"
Changed "merry tune of the magma smoke" to just "tune of the magma smoke"

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