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6/7/2015 10:16:55   
lordmastersupreme
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link to the poem
This is my first post in the Poetry and Lyrics thread. hope you like it ^^

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6/14/2015 20:38:57   
Azan
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Hello!

I just read your poem, and I loved it. I enjoyed the way you mixed words, like your final verse, or "agony is gone" (I love the sonorities of this verse). It really feels like you're walking in the middle of a battlefield in the aftermath of the battle. I could almost feel the wind.

I only have a question of curiosity though: why is it called "Warcry poem"? It doesn't feel very "warcry" to me, in the sense of not something a warrior would shout before going to battle.

Other than that, I can only say: please keep making poetry, you certainly have talent!
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8/8/2015 18:05:24   
lordmastersupreme
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@Azan Thank you very much friend. answering your question: I named it like that using some irony. showing the aftermath of a meaningless war, the empty shout of a chest full of illusions, full of nothing. .

I appreciate your feedback. I'm going to make more poetry soon

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