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10/28/2008 21:22:14   
Sparker
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Hi, I have made a short story... Called, A Cold Wind.

Please Comment!

http://forums2.battleon.com/f/tm.asp?m=14983258&mpage=1&key=�
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10/30/2008 5:01:02   
Crimzon5
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C-cant... ignore... the... word... PLEASE!!!

hehehe....

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I was saunting

The last word there ins't in my dictionary

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The sidewalked was scraped


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Surprizing, really.

'Surprising really...' <-- the ellipsis (the 3 dots) is just a suggestion

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chocolate like there was no tommorrow. And

Oh yeah... beware... of diabetes

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would take untill I reached home.


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buiscut

It's 'biscuit'

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both scaveanged anything

^

Nice story. I'll read the rest when I have time.

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