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7/4/2008 15:35:00   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


Mr. Johnson, County Taxman

This is my first attempt at writing a play. Please note that this is not yet finished. I realize that some things are unrealistic (such as the fact that you don't receive tax forms from the county), but please ignore those details; they were edited for comedy.

Criticism is greatly appreciated!

< Message edited by Cow Face -- 7/4/2008 15:36:54 >
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7/4/2008 21:45:20   
Mo
Member

I liked it a lot. Especially how the bartender knows all of the dogs...and how the tax payer gets confused and runs off "like the old tax collector"
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7/6/2008 16:58:29   
Baker
Member

Hehe, I liked it also. My favorite part is the one-sided conversation, which I loved the style of (if that sentence even makes sense). I can picture Mr. Johnson being the super-obedient and freaked out underling. ;)
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7/7/2008 11:32:35   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


Thanks for the comments, guys!

The play has been updated.
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7/29/2008 15:16:32   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


Teh Update!

Everyone, I'd like you to meet Joe Evans, a sleazy good salesman!
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8/1/2008 15:13:05   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


Act II, Scene V is up!
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8/14/2008 18:16:22   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


Act II, Scene VI is up!
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11/3/2008 12:12:46   
Cow Face
One Heck of a Guy


I have finished the play! I hope you all have had as much fun reading it as I have writing it.

Act II, Scene VII
Act II, Scene VIII - Finale
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