Home  | Login  | Register  | Help  | Play 

Hell's Rumble - Comments

 
Logged in as: Guest
  Printable Version
All Forums >> [Gaming Community] >> [Legends and Lore] >> Writers of Lore >> Works Discussion >> Other Creative Works Discussion >> Hell's Rumble - Comments
Forum Login
Message << Older Topic   Newer Topic >>
12/10/2009 5:22:55   
DragonYugi
Member

Story can be found here.

Feel free to comment and criticise. :)

< Message edited by DragonYugi -- 12/10/2009 5:24:58 >
Post #: 1
12/26/2009 23:28:29   
Reaper Sigma
Member

Great story! A lot of voice, though the story is a bit unclear. What did Marcus' father lie to him about? Maybe a flashback? And what is the relation between the blacksmith and Marcus?
Post #: 2
12/28/2009 10:48:15   
DragonYugi
Member

The Devil lied to Marcus about the past of the Empire and his mother. And the blacksmith is the only one in town and... well.. MArcus is normally sent there to pick up stuff. So if you actually go to a store a few times you start knowing the seller if it is the same one all the time :P
Post #: 3
6/28/2010 16:36:20   
DragonYugi
Member

I shall post the next chapter very soon. I need to start getting this project up again.
Post #: 4
Page:   [1]
All Forums >> [Gaming Community] >> [Legends and Lore] >> Writers of Lore >> Works Discussion >> Other Creative Works Discussion >> Hell's Rumble - Comments
Jump to:






Icon Legend
New Messages No New Messages
Hot Topic w/ New Messages Hot Topic w/o New Messages
Locked w/ New Messages Locked w/o New Messages
 Post New Thread
 Reply to Message
 Post New Poll
 Submit Vote
 Delete My Own Post
 Delete My Own Thread
 Rate Posts




Forum Content Copyright © 2018 Artix Entertainment, LLC.

"AdventureQuest", "DragonFable", "MechQuest", "EpicDuel", "BattleOn.com", "AdventureQuest Worlds", "Artix Entertainment"
and all game character names are either trademarks or registered trademarks of Artix Entertainment, LLC. All rights are reserved.
PRIVACY POLICY


Forum Software © ASPPlayground.NET Advanced Edition