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5/21/2010 21:16:12   
Angel of Grief
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Story Thread

Comments? Criticism?
And no, I am not ripping. I have posted these on other websites.
The usernames of my accounts I posted these on: Rena, Angel of Grief, Arachne, Bleeding Roses, and my Facebook.

Thank you, and have a nice day.

~AoG
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5/24/2010 18:04:23   
Angel of Grief
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Just thought i'd point out i had updated my thread. :)
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5/26/2010 17:59:31   
Remington
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i enjoyed those. i just started trying to write a little horror stuff that was inspired by vampire hunter d. you (and anyone else who reads this may be interested) may be interested. just click Hellsingr.

I did think the train one was pretty creepy. you may want to go for somethings that could be better used as ghost stories, i know i would be interested.

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5/29/2010 20:25:13   
Angel of Grief
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Changed A Lovely Time at the Park to Tourist Trap, and updated it to match my other versions. :P
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5/29/2010 21:53:14   
jerenda
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Okay, I really like the idea of shortcut keys, but there is a flaw- I can't just search TD1, I have to search for the third usage of TD1, because you use it three times in total. Most people just hyperlink directly to the post- at the end of the post are blue words saying Post #: 2, and if you click that hyperlink it takes you to a page from which you can hyperlink directly to the specific post using the [link ] [/link ] codes. However, if you really like the idea of shortcut keys, I suggest making the TD1 part invisible by using [color=#EEEEEE ] [/color ], again with no space before the end bracket.

The Dark- Does not have a very good hook. I'll try not to be too cruel, so tell me if I am and I'll try to keep it down, but still. The beginning is not interesting, and by the time I reached how you're different I had a healthy wave of skepticism going. There is a random bracket at the start of the third paragraph. However, at that point it starts becoming interesting, and the ending actually gave me a little shiver, because that's exactly what I think too. Drat, I have to go, but if you remind me I'll finish this later.

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6/22/2010 1:21:56   
Angel of Grief
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Updated! :)
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6/22/2010 16:27:59   
Zan Zoari
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Applause

Excellent pieces with that bit of surrealist horror in a short and realistic piece that is styled ever-so much like that of the classic pieces. Looks professional. Tell me, tell me, did these get banged out in a few minutes each or did it take a great deal longer?
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6/23/2010 13:32:47   
Angel of Grief
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A few minutes to get the rough idea, and about half an hour of writing and editing, with some minor edits and rewrites after that. So not all that long. :D
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6/23/2010 20:15:37   
Zan Zoari
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Wonderful; sounds like you made them out of natural talent.
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