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3/17/2011 11:08:58   
kowlickkid
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This is the place where you can discuss about the first episode of tales of the first togmancer(yes, there is a second coming, and maybe even a third).You can read my story here

< Message edited by kowlickkid -- 3/20/2011 8:11:41 >


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><((((º>.·´¯`·.¸¸.·´¯`·.¸><((((º> To do this, you'd need to be a complete genius
or a total fool. Lucky for us, he's both. ~Rocketman~ Read this please!
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4/21/2011 0:24:56   
Mritha
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Copper was too busy planning a strategy with his pet to listen to Mr. Mystery. He tested the memtal of the Pac-Muncher.

metal
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2 years ago, he was going to Oaklore to help Sir Ano(He never did get the name pun) when Rolith

Should be a space where it is underlined
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Now, Copper knew everything about togs, from how to moroph into them to how to speak togese.

morph
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The locker, nada.

Locker
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By the time it got into all the uses you could get out of the elemental orb of energy, the strange togs weree long gone, out for the count, brainfrozen.

were
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This time I'm not going to get something in my face!- He then heldd up his longtog, which automatically swallowed Djilbo's head

held
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Copper took advantage of the situation by punching Str'gon in every part, every part, I stress tosay, of his body with a musculous dravir arm.

to say
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-So, what are you going to donow, except for be the most powerful Togvirmancer around?

do now
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One hour later, Artix was chopping undead with glee, completely forgettinghis lossagainst Copper.

forgetting his, and loss against
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So saying,he mailed it to Warlic's crystal ball and continued on his round.

space between the comma and the letter "h"
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Then he went over to Oaklore to visit rolith and show him about his new powers.

Rolith


To make it a little more obvious to tell where one chapter ends and another begins, I would recommend bolding each chapter title, using a slightly bigger font, and/or starting a new post for each chapter :)
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4/21/2011 3:58:42   
  Dwelling Dragonlord

ArchKnight AQ / OOC / L&L


Very nice story.

Now, I am the clanleader of the Dravir Underground Movement, shouldn't you know. I spend most of the time in Guardian Fortuna's tent trying to improve the relationships between the Dravir and humans. The D.U.M. is Dravir in origin, I merely lead the humans who aid the Dravir in their battle against Gorgok's and now the Entropy Dragon's oppression. Another function of the name is that nobody would take us for a serious threat, thankfully Sepulchure's ego is as big as he is powerful.
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