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4/24/2011 22:49:32   
extreme wizard
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I'm still working on this, but I'd like to know how it's going as I progress so I can make changes while I write. I'll be adding to the thread over the next few weeks/months/millenia, so check back often if you get interested in this.

(DF) Within Throwing Distance
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4/25/2011 7:13:55   
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Hm, interesting story indeed. From what I understand though, it seems as if she died. (Or did she come back?)

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He had his suspects, and he knew that his only chance of survival was to run.


Do you mean suspects or do you mean suspicions?
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4/25/2011 17:26:12   
extreme wizard
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Suspicions does make more sense, thanks for finding that. And Annalia's best friend is the one who had died, that was the cause of her hatred toward our soon-to-be-epic hero.
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4/25/2011 21:35:25   
extreme wizard
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I added two more chapters and fixed a few mistakes. The plot is now visible.

EDIT: Gah! Sorry for double-posting. It won't happen again. I should've added this in an edit.
EDIT2: Started another chapter, but I'm too tired to get much done. I added a couple more charecter descriptions at the beginning.
EDIT3: This story is going on hold for a time, I have a new idea that I have to get moving on before I forget.

< Message edited by extreme wizard -- 5/2/2011 17:06:39 >
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