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9/15/2011 11:35:08   
Zarkalor
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Link to the story.

Alright, this was originally meant to be an entry to the BackStory contest, but it was too long, so I'm writing it here, instead.

Doubt I'm gonna get anyone to read this, but even still, this place is here for your little comments that I love to read.

Constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated :)
DF AQW  Post #: 1
9/15/2011 11:51:34   
Mortarion
Member

Most excellent history
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9/15/2011 12:00:47   
Zarkalor
Member

Thanks, Mort!
Anyway, going to start part 2 pretty soon.
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9/15/2011 12:12:39   
Mortarion
Member

you are welcome, now why is it called the Pyromancer Woes?
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 4
9/15/2011 12:18:20   
Zarkalor
Member

Pyromancer- Because it revolves my character as a Pyromancer
Woes- You'll find out.
DF AQW  Post #: 5
9/15/2011 17:33:38   
aizenv3
Banned


 Yes yes YES!

One thing, I love Pyromancy more than any other magic art. Im gonna pay close attention to this story as it progresses. Its cool when you say woes I get anger and revenge and fire is the right element associated with such emotions
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9/16/2011 16:32:28   
Zarkalor
Member

Alright, posted a very short update. I started typing, played DF, and when I was gonna continue, I was bored, so I'm just gonna leave it there for now.
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9/20/2011 12:54:09   
god of insatily
Member

good
now hands of doom and all hydromancers should enter the House of death
now the only thing better than fire is air enhanced fire, the black flames,the gold flames and of corse chaos(there purple) flames

< Message edited by god of insatily -- 9/20/2011 14:45:55 >
DF MQ AQW  Post #: 8
9/25/2011 13:01:42   
Zarkalor
Member

Updated part 2. Not by much, though.

I managed to give you guys a cliffhanger, regardless.

< Message edited by Zarkalor -- 9/25/2011 13:02:26 >
DF AQW  Post #: 9
10/4/2011 16:47:00   
Zarkalor
Member

Bump!

I have a request. It's quite large, so I'd be eternally grateful to whoever manages to do it.

I want to change the settings of the story from first person to third person. It'll make the story easier. I've edited a little portion myself, but I find it difficult to find every single "I", "us", "we" and "me". All you'd have to do is quote the story and bold the parts that need editing. If nobody wants to do it, that's fine. I completely understand. I'll do it myself if that's the case. Sorry if I come off lazy, but eh, I just need a little help. The only part I don't want editing is the first part where Castem is born.

Again, incredibly sorry if this comes off lazy-like and I'd show great respect and thanks to whoever decides to complete this request is anyone ever does it. For now, I'll concentrate on continuing the plot itself.
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10/4/2011 16:48:20   
Mortarion
Member

I'd do it, but I am not that good at grammatical, sorry
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10/4/2011 16:49:46   
Zarkalor
Member

S'alright, Mort. The offer is very much appreciated, though.
DF AQW  Post #: 12
10/4/2011 16:50:49   
Mortarion
Member

You'r welcome, is it wierd that I think your name would sound better with an F rather than a Z, you know like Farkalor :P, I dun know why, I like to pronounce it like that
AQ DF MQ AQW Epic  Post #: 13
10/4/2011 16:54:16   
Zarkalor
Member

Really? Personally, I like taking the Zar away sometimes and leaving it with Kalor and sometimes change the K to a B to make Balor.

The name Balor is a very old story, a name that's been popping up in RPs with some of my friends on various sites from 2007 at least.
DF AQW  Post #: 14
10/4/2011 16:56:23   
Mortarion
Member

Nice, so I hope you get someone to change it to third perspective soon ^_^
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