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VKing -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/17/2008 17:17:40)

1. Berial
Haze
2. The transition from pink to orange is a bit off-putting, so maybe picking two colours that are more similar will make the signature look more appealing. Also, the render could be placed where the colours meet so no extra blending would have to be seen. Except the actual blending on the render is quite weird looking as the chosen render as a whole is a bit too dark.
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The only terrible thing about this sig is the kind of glow effect surrounding the render. It's clearly supposed to be a silhouette but instead it looks like a jagged mess. I'd suggest you selected the render, feather it, make a new layer underneath the render and fill it with white a few times. That way it'll definitely be surrounding the render.
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DaesDymentia -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/17/2008 20:32:44)

Timber Wolf
Kitten (RP Char)

Image 1 - Well have to admit I don't quite like this one. The background would have been better using a different color than pink, like a dark goldbrown even would have made the image look very nice. The shadow from the eagle makes it look a little "fake" like it was cut out because the shadow has too much of a contast against the pinkish bg, that kind of darkness would be better on a different bg. The text also doesn't work because of how the tag was made, I suggest redoing this one, try a dark bg with gold and light gold text, it would bring out the eagle more as well as make the whole image fit together.

Image 2 - The vivid color against the black background, with its high contrast works very well with girl. The lighting and shadow on her skin play off the background, which really brings the whole tag together But, the softness of her face is slightly blurred and that brings your attention to the left side of the tag - Im not sure if this was done intentionally, but because of this the focus is on the color sparks, not the girl. Generally this is a very nice sig, though I suggest using a different color, one with saturation, for the text.

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astro999 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/17/2008 22:44:48)

Art#1 Art#2
(If you don't realize, both are edited screenshots, DF)

Critiscism: Alt image one
Overall, I like it. However, there are several flaws: one, the head looks WAY for big for the body, and two, the depth perception is a little strange. The wing is in front of the tail, which is in front of the leg, but the wing starts more or less parallel to the leg, and doesn't exactly look like it move forward. The frontmost horn doesn't look quite as part of the image. The shading and coloring, however is nice. If I would change something-about it, I would probably outline the tail more: it blends into the front foot.

image two (not alt)
I dislike it. The hair blends in with the background, the instrument's unclear, and the whole thing looks like it was blurred and then the lighting was majorly re done. THe only redeeming feature is the pretty backround, however, even it is a bad choice of combination with the image. The two fade intyo each other, spoiling a good background and (maybe) a good pic.

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VampireSlayer2 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/18/2008 16:42:55)

My Examples
My Website
Information on Leich RPG

Criticism
Alt Image 1
I like the detail on the dragon head. The shading was done very nicely and the dragon is very detailed, however the dentist is lacking detail. I would recommend using shading techniques and adding details on the doctor. Overall, I like the drawing.

Alt Image 2
I like this image. The shading on his face and armor was done very nicely. The only thing I did not like about this image was the pink around his pants. To me, this looks a little off. It doesn't seem to match with the rest of the outfit. I would recommend changing the color to something more fitting, for example a shade of blue.



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Stex -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/21/2008 0:25:26)

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[image]http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p239/Stex_bucket/prettycolors.png[/image]
2.
[image]http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p239/Stex_bucket/waterfall1-1.jpg[/image]

Image 1
A basically fine tag. Theres not a direct flow because it doesn't need it. The colors and effects are near (if not) perfect. I personally give this a Intermediate level. I'ts really good, but could be better.

Image 2
Nice flow, the lighting seems to be coming from 2 different places thow, the C4D and the head. I don't like the parts of the C4D over the render/stock though. Also the text could be better, colors, placement etc.



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mokie95482 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/21/2008 16:34:07)

1. Image 1
2. Image 2
These pictures are self portraits of my character in DF
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1.The picture is quite good but it could use a little work. Like adding some color and better shading.
I like that it has so much detail but it would be better with a bit of work. If this is not a sketch it could
be better if you erase some of the extra lines
2.Wow, that picture is also quite good. I like how you took character armor and made it completely different
I also like how you added different names for the skills. It could be better if you made the Night Eye and Atronach farther apart
it also could be better if you took away the pixel look.
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Ravens Ashes -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/21/2008 21:10:48)

My examples:
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2

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Crits:

Alt 1: Dragon Floss

I love the detail on the dragon head. The shading is in-sync most of the time, although I would recommend adding more highlights to the horns, since that's the direction the light is coming from. The proportions on the head are all correct, except that the shoulders (or what there is of the shoulders) seem a bit small. The humor in it made me smile, but admittedly the dentist ruins the otherwise serious overtone of the image, so you might consider removing him. Overall it's probably one of the best dragons I've seen on these forums, and I would love to see it colored sometime :)

Alt 2: Young warrior (?)

This sprite is so cute! ^_^ I love the detail in his costume design, particularly the brown tunic/armor/apron and the flower designs on the pink cloth wrapped around his waist. The only thing I would recommend changing or adding to is the shading. The shading in this picture is a bit off, since there doesn't seem to be a light source. The shadows on his glove contradict the ones on his face, which ruins the "flow" of the image. You might also consider adding some additional shading to his clothing. Overall a great sprite! Look forward for more :)

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Demonic_Archangel -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/22/2008 1:14:31)

[image]http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/angelic_slayer/TDUsiggy2.jpg[/image]
[image]http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/angelic_slayer/FireFantasysiggy.jpg[/image]



Image no.1

[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/eagle88.jpg[/image]
--> Although the style and the render for the sig is unique, I still say that It need work, the render basically overpowers the whole sig without even making it blend with the Grunge Brushing for the background, Feathering would be able to fix it, masquing at least the wings with the background would even out the sig. Text placement is too fixed and only placed in one corner, it would be better if the Text is either embossed or changed into a light color but with a 1px dark color border, it looks like it was copy pasted over the background layer and added a shadow to the render.

Image no.2

[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/sentimento.png[/image]
--> Now this is what I call a "S.I.G" both the Render and the Grunge Background synced into a more subtle image creating a light atmosphere. I noticed that there is a bit speck of light from the upper-left side of the sig, even though it was natural to be brushed there or mean to be an illusion of a sun, It made a great lighting effect on the render. Text is simple yet eye catching, not that "too" eyecatching from Image 1

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Sir Red -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/22/2008 1:47:55)

1.
art 1
art 2

2.
[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/desire.jpg[/image]

I think the background is too bright and doesn't blend well with the render. I also don't like the that lttle "trim" thing on the edge. I like the font.

[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/eagle88.jpg[/image]

I think the render is ugly and realy fake looking. I think the background would have looked better a sky blue and that eagle88 should have been the same font as Death From Above(which I like)

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jiggibidy -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/22/2008 9:10:55)

My artwork:

First artwork

Second artwork

Constructive Criticism:

Alt image 1

What I first noticed about this picture is the level of detail between the statue/creature/whatever it is, and the dentist. perhaps if you were to put the dentist in as much detail as the statue/creature/whatever it is, then the won't look so out of place. Also, if you finished the picture down to the bottom of the page, it would, in my eyes at least, make it seem all the much larger because i wouldn't know where the statue/creature/whatever it is, ended.

Alt image 2

When I looked at this picture, I noticed that the two escorts' facial features were a similar colour to their skin, making it difficult to see, perhaps making the facial features black would make them stand out a bit more. Another thing I noticed was that the armour of Lorine and the lower escort, were similar. Perhaps change the colour of Lorine's armour to match, say, her skirt and they wouldn't look too similar.

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Nolandoloid -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/22/2008 20:58:33)

My Artwork
Hex With an Ent
Kind of a tribute to ReverendWyrm but mostly just a doodle I scanned and flashitized.

Old Sprite Shop Sig
I tried to keep it simple while showcasing some of my best sprites.

Constructive Criticism
Alt Image 1
The proportions for the feet and arm don't match up very well with the head. They look a bit too small or the head is too big. Try drawing lizards to see their proportions then follow the rule onto drawing dragons, they are pretty similar. I can only see two more flaws.
1)He looks like a rough draft due to the fact that the sticks and balls you used for the original sketch are still visible. You should erase those to make it look more professional.
2) With the lack of shading except in small parts of the wings he looks less realistic if that was what you were going for.

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Alt Image 2
There is a lot of detail for such a small sprite and the pose works well with the figure. It looks pretty authentic as a FE sprite but it would be even better if it had all the poses for animating it instead of just one. It is difficult to distinguish what it is wearing but it looks like a diaper which doesn't go that well with the vicious look. it looks a little bit too innocent for its pose because of its blue eye, red looks way eviler. Also the right arm looks a little bigger than the left and like it is sticking out of his head.

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linkman88 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/22/2008 21:00:17)

First Example

Second Example

1rst. CC
[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/SweetMisery2.jpg[/image]

Pros. The picture shows up well, and the colors blend together very well. the glares on
the image are not to bright but not to dark. Also her skin has a nice tone to it.
The best part of the picture is how the lady really can show up againist the random backround

Cons: The musical notes on the side could be darker or moved to an area with less action like near her chest or neck.
the font could use a stroke. the backround is a little random and messy. the purple streak does not match with the rest of the picture. the white streaks are in the wrong place or the wrong color.

2nd. CC
[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/Disorder.jpg[/image]

Pros: The backround fit the picture very well. The blending with the guitarist is pretty nice but could use a few touch ups around the bottom of the guitar. The character in the bottom right corner fits the picture well and goes with the style of the picture. the picture looks an intense yet calm genre. The guitarist is in a nice place.

Cons: The character in the corner cold be a little more solid or a different color. The red dash on the guitar could have a lower opacity or a little darker color because the streak just looks like a big blob of white. The backround has two different looks to it which means no consistey to it. The blue and green blobs on it don't fit in the with the rest of the picture. The guitarist should be a little bit dark and should be like this

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Talinos -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/23/2008 1:12:07)

First Image
Second Image

CC:
Image one
This particular piece looks overly well done, very detailed in general, but things can be noticed that leave something to be desired. The dentist is very undetailed, and probably something that was not done by the artist. The initial strokes of the pncil on the dragon are dark, but the dentist is done by a lighter touch. The image noticeably loses detail toward the bottom. the eye doesn't have much detail, and is too small, which gives the impression that the dragon is lifeless.

Image Two
An attempt at a pixel isometric ship of poor quality. the shadow color is leanin a bit too far to urple, while the railing of the deck is too flat. the ship itself needs to look more like a ship, with more sails, rigging and the works. The good sprites that populate the bland, undetailed ship were obviouslr ripped from another source. Colors in general are too saturated.

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master dragon lord -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/23/2008 18:26:32)

animated banner if you dont want a animated banner heres another sig

sig

CC (image 1):
[image]http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/Branch.jpg[/image]
vary nice but in the top right hand cornor i see a peice of yellow that doesent go with the surronding colors and shapes also in the lower left hand cornor there seems to be a yellow stick (looks like a french fri) does not go with the surronding shapes and colors also looks like the womens head has a yellow line going down it doesent blend in, finally for this one in the top left hand cornor there is a odd shape (like a half of french fri) again does not go with surronding shapes and colors

CC (image 2):
http://i25.tinypic.com/zsvo6c.png

good drawing but i think that the head is to big also i dont think that the back ground matches up that well (blue with yellow) also on the dragons leg and wing there are shadings (shadinds dont come from both sides) also the wings are not the same size with different shapes and lengths for the spikes on the wing


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Lana -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/23/2008 21:49:58)

#1
#2


Constructive Critisizem:

1. Overall, the image has very nice texture. But yet, it needs a background that defines its shape and curves. The dentist working on the dragons teeth doesn't seem to be darkened enough, making it a tad hard to be visable. Even though the picture does have a bit to define the dragon, the man working on its teeth needs more darkening in its curves and shading in order to be really seen. More torwards the bottom it seems to fade around the torso. As I look at the neck, I notice the 'drool'. Also needing a helping hand of shading in.

2. In this image, the characters are very well defined. They do need to be not so pixelated though. The picture doesn't really have anything to put a "WOW" affect into it. Its missing a nice background that gives the ship a floating on water sensation.

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dark master sasori -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/24/2008 5:48:41)

Example 1:

Background

Example 2:

Comic

Constructive Critisism

Pic 1

I like how you have positioned her posture giving a real nice effect but the sparks and background you've chose make it a bit crowded
and you could have made the writing a bit better maybe a bit bigger and a different font and the explosion in the left corner gives it a real nice effect .

Pic 2

The mist in the background is very good beceuse it makes me feel calm and relaxed the posture also gives the same feelings and the way the black and the white mist clash makes the person stand out even more and i like the speck of sunlight shining through it's a very good tag.


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Kujo212 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/24/2008 6:08:37)

My game website - Here

Criticism:

Tag 1:
The overall feel of the tag is nice, the pink adding a nice, bright touch, but I would recommend changing the font color to white and setting the layer to something like overlay, to help keep it from taking the focus of the piece.

Tag 2:
I like the idea behind the tag, and the lighting effects look cool, but I've always thought the lighting in your tags is somewhat... dulled. I would like to see more intense spots of light, albeit not too much. Oh, and the guitar? Nice.

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ultimation2.0 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/25/2008 3:01:07)

Game Thread 1
These are the forums I am working on for the Mechpedia

Constructive Criticism:
Picture 1
I think that the colours on the background are excellently matched, and that the render is in an excellent position. The text is fitting for the picture, and is well accompanied by the small love heart. One of the only bad thing that I can find is the streak of darkness going behind the girl.

Picture 2
I think that the grey background makes a good feature, and it is not intruding on the render. This is a good blend. I also think that the choice of render is good, as it makes the artwork look as though it is looking from above the woman. I also like the dark grey smoke that appears to emit form the body, this is also a good effect.

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Orc Cleaver of Power -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/25/2008 15:11:40)

Logo I Made

Another Logo I Made

Constructive Critisism

Picture 1

I like this picture as the girl and the penguin instantly catch your eye but do not overcrowd the picture. The only thing I don't like is the font as it does seem to link with Snuggles well. It would have been better to use a slightly more flowing font.


Picture 2

This is a great picture as the girl really stands out but at the same time doesn't get in the way. The bright flash down the guitar and the biggest flash on the left seem out of place since they are big and bright while the rest of the picture is calm and dark.


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I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Not approved. You need to work on your CC. If you need help click on the link in the first post for Dep's thread.



Cow Face -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/25/2008 15:27:13)

I'm a Quest Designer for Kiriana RPG, so my work is mainly in writing, not art. Here's an example of my work: http://kiriana.freeforums.org/cow-face-s-stuff-tp.html

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Alt Image 1 [http://i26.tinypic.com/e5gpjp.jpg]:
Very nice work! I like the attention to detail, especially the curves on the wing. Those are simple, but they give extra depth to the piece, and make it more life-like. The wings' size is somewhat believable- but they rarely are drawn to scale, anyway, so that doesn't really matter. If you wanted to add even more depth to the sketch, you could add a shadow, but that is purely optional, in my opinion. The horns of the creature curve nicely, and they are well-textured. All in all, it is a very nice piece, though you could erase a few of the extra pencil marks, if you wished.

Alt Image 2 [http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/3318/lethecl4.png]:
Again, this is very good. The ears, for instance, are essentially the same shade as the hair, but they are just far enough off so as to accent the woman's hair. The eyes are well-done as well, and they almost look real. The picture is rather small, however. That's not at all a bad thing, but it would certainly be improved if you did a full-body picture. However, it is fine as-is, as well. The green was a good color choice, and it, too, accents the woman's hair. Altogether, this is a very good piece, and I hardly have any cons to point out.
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daxlepixelbrains -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/26/2008 14:59:06)

1. I work on this game http://www.freewebs.com/kujo-society/

2. my constructive critisism for image one is: http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/Branch.jpg
the sparks and the colors blend perfectly, but the text is too small and too far in the corner, and could be the wrong style of text.

for image 2: http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/Disorder.jpg
the picture and idea is great, but the guitar is not edited very well and the persons clothing does not really go with the blacks and reds of the rest of the image.

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Not approved. You need to work on your CC. If you need help click on the link in the first post for Dep's thread.



Illuminati -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/26/2008 19:28:00)

1st http://forums2.battleon.com/f/avatars/DragonFable/Equipment%20and%20Weaponry/mace.gif
2nd http://i31.tinypic.com/119z8kl.gif

CC 1
A very nice signature! I like it....but the background looks grainy...you should blur it bit. The special effects are good and I like how the color changes. You also picked a good type of text but the spot where you put it is too bright. Overall a very nice sig.

CC2
The first thing that caught my attention was the guitar ^^. I just love this signature! It's very well done but the lighting was not done well. The guitar is too bright! It hurts my eyes :( The effects were nice....but you put too many sparks on the left hand side and I can't see the building in the background. Also the Chinese character on the bottom right hand corner is a nice touch to the sig.
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Not approved. You need to work on your CC. If you need help click on the link in the first post for Dep's thread.



Dracologist1 -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/27/2008 0:41:59)

I will use tags for my first art form.
Tag example

For my second art form, I shall use flash.
Flash example



Constructive Criticism for: [Image 1]
The first thing that hits me about this tag is the color. There is barely any color other than green, which in most cases is a faux pas. Although there is some red in there, which is good, it isn't enough to make a difference. Another problem is it is lacking a focal point. Because both the text and render stick out equally, the eye can't find a place to focus. Blending the text in some more should do the trick. The next problem is the lighting. There are several light sources scattered throughout, which leads to some problems. This causes a conflict between the render's light source and the light source created by the tag maker. Just to add to that a little bit, the lighting also cause large white bloches, which is another thing which should be avoided. Finally, the last problem. The background appears to be made up mostly of brushes, which displays little artistic skill. It's alright to use them as a base, or for added effect, but to comprise the entire background of them is pushing it.

Constructive Criticism for: [Image 2]
This tag, much like the first, is also rather monotonous. There is oranges compliment, blue, in there, but there is once again too little of it. The focal point works well for this one. The eye is immediately drawn to the render, although the brightness of the guitar neck makes my eye want to move away from where it should be. The C4D(s) seem completely random, and don't really compliment the overall tag in any way. It create a flow which in my opinion, doesn't seem to fit. To me, it seems the flow should be going up along the guitar neck, likely due to the fact that the guitar is in front of everything else. The lighting is also an issue. The conflicting C4D makes adequate lighting in relation to the render, but the overly bright guitar throws it all off. For my last point, I will talk about the render choice. It is best to avoid renders with large, open spaces, much like this one. It can often be hard to fill up these spaces, as any effects there would likely overpower the render. As can be seen, there are blank spaces on the right side, where the render has open spaces, which quite proves my point. so, from now on, avoiding such renders would be a wise decision.



I would just like to point out at this time that the below statement should be reworded. It should say, "I understand that if I fail to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums" Just thought I should point it out.


"I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves."

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daxlepixelbrains -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/27/2008 5:11:36)

1. I work on this game as a quest designer http://www.freewebs.com/kujo-society/

2. my constructive criticism for this image http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/mystery.jpg
The bright pinks with little white blobs suit the overall style of the sig, but the person looks a bit too anime to go with the realistic backround, so a more anime background or a less anime person would make them match better. The writing itself is a perfect syle, but the lines above and below it are a little hard to realise what color they are. I think they are meant to be purple but with the pink they just look black. The only other things I notice are the dark patches near the writing, which do not suit the style, and what looks like a red rose in the top right hand corner. pink and red, even I know not to put together.

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y267/nevermore_na/sentimento.png
This image has a great color scheme, but the colors around the person are a bit too similar to their clothes. the chair and the persons top go really well together, but the skirt and the white part of the guitar do not really blend well with the cremes, blacks and dark browns of the rest of the image. the writing may be a little small, but the color is perfect. The thin brown line that goes around the edge of the image does not work very well, but other than that, a perfectly good sig.

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I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.


Approved. Place yourself on Pending



The Ducksta -> RE: Approval Thread for the Gallery *Read Everything* (2/27/2008 5:56:20)

Example: (Game) Kujo Society (not finished) (This is being used by Alina but she gave me permission in a PM to use it. I work on one of her games as a quest designer.)

Criticism 1: This picture's blendings of colours are good; however, the face is slightly hard to distinguish, as is the text as well. There are a few colours which don't fit in (e.g. The green in the earrings, the colour of the left ear.)

Criticism 2: An overall good picture, mainly focusing on the orangey-ness of it, and the person with the guitar. The streak of light coming from it is a bit off-putting, and seems a bit out of place, as well as the small flashes of light on the left side, due to their overly bright and out of place colour. The dull orange over the render has seemed to dull it as well; it has drowned out a lot of the colour. However, some of these things I don't particularly like, put together, look fairly good. A very swell pic.

I hereby will follow the rules set by the admins and mods of the forums. I understand that failing to follow all the rules, I can be removed from the Gallery and the forums themselves.

Approved. Keep working on your CC.



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