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Reaper Sigma -> Highborn-Comments and Criticism (8/8/2009 12:23:19)

The Story

Hey people. I'm pretty new here, meaning I don't know how much of the things here work. I'm pretty sure I did something wrong...



Angel of Grief -> RE: Highborn-Comments and Criticism (8/8/2009 15:52:02)

Great job as usual Reaper... :3
and hmm...this is the right section now that you're approved...
*looks at my english101 thread* oh c'mon! still nothing? <_<
But i'm still kind of confused...what happened in the newest update? Why did Einstein shut down like a computer?
Who was invisible? or was it a forcefield?
Why does that guy make the bomb go off? im suuuuu confused...

although despite my thick-headed-ness to figure out what's going on, its a great story so far :3.



Reaper Sigma -> RE: Highborn-Comments and Criticism (8/9/2009 10:36:16)

Thank, Angel. To Answer your questions:

1.Einstein's meltdown will be explained in he next chapter
2.Einstein was invisible. It will be explained
3.Loki is insane. [:D]

And do I post in ENG 101 before I post in Narrative and Prose?



deathwalker05 -> RE: Highborn-Comments and Criticism (8/9/2009 11:50:39)

99% sure you just post to narrative and prose now.



Ultrapowerpie -> RE: Highborn-Comments and Criticism (8/9/2009 11:58:53)

100% sure that you leave your old thread alone and it'll be locked, or you request a lock in it, and just post in narrative and prose.



Reaper Sigma -> RE: Highborn-Comments and Criticism (8/9/2009 16:19:47)

Okay. I'll post another chapter soon. Then run the other chapters through a word processer thousands of times.

EDIT: I'm very sorry about the huge delay in posting. I have school, my games in the UCaG, and the massive combination of sci-fi and fantasy in the new chapter.



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